- May 30, 2020
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Just finished playing for the first time and the game seems new and creative on the surface, but it's pretty much the usual tropes. The story wasn't that interesting, I thought the sex scenes would make up for that even a little, I was wrong. MC is pretty much a one pump chump which is cool for people that like to see guys cumming, but I personally like to see women cum so eh.
That also leads me to the complaint that MC is kind of a sidewalk. He lets everyone walk over him and is kind of a sub. Again, that's cool for whoever likes taking that role, but I'll pass on that.
Anyway, good luck to the dev, you've got some nice renders so that's great. You don't have to listen to my complaints about the subby-like MC, but I think you should pay more attention to your story building since it seems like you're going for a story based erotic novel instead of straight porn. (Also the cliff-hangers are a bit weirdly placed. not sure if that's done on purpose.)
That also leads me to the complaint that MC is kind of a sidewalk. He lets everyone walk over him and is kind of a sub. Again, that's cool for whoever likes taking that role, but I'll pass on that.
Anyway, good luck to the dev, you've got some nice renders so that's great. You don't have to listen to my complaints about the subby-like MC, but I think you should pay more attention to your story building since it seems like you're going for a story based erotic novel instead of straight porn. (Also the cliff-hangers are a bit weirdly placed. not sure if that's done on purpose.)
