First of all, it's cool seeing my game on this site. I've used this site a bunch on another account and made this account to actually submit my game in a few days until I saw it already approved here. Also I'm not gonna ask to have the thread in my control, I have enough things to worry about atm lol.
Thank you for all the comments in this thread. I mean all of them, including the deleted ones that I was able to read. I appreciate all the feedback both good and bad. Some of the stuff I've seen brought up I do agree with, namely the NTR stuff. I agree with a lot of people that NTR isn't really my cup of tea, I never really intended for true NTR to become a thing in my story. The MC will definetly have multiple options when it comes to sexual partners for a short while but I intend for the MC to pick only one at a point in the future to persue as something more than just a sexual partner. AKA there will be multiple endings/routes, one of them most likely being the canon/true ending.
Saw some people talk about the lack of choice and such, I do plan to make the game have a good amount of meaningful choices in the near future, I wanted the first day to be something simple that introduced some of the main characters to the players of the game.
Also I saw some stuff about Max and her being super fucking horny for cock while being in love. This will be kinda spoilery for stuff that has already happened in the story but will happen soon so I'll hide it just in case someone in here for some reason cares that much about the story already lol.
Simply put Max is immature when it comes to love. She sees sex as something to do for fun, she has never had a serious relationship nor serious feelings until somewhat recently with the MC, so doesn't really have many feelings regarding sex other than "Wow this feels great". She only begins to realise the weight behind sex and what it means to do stuff with someone who you actually love when she gets involved with the MC. Everything involving her and Essie is purely for fun, neither of them have any serious feelings for each other, they are super close and best friends but sexually/romantically they are only friends with benefits. However as she gets more involved with the MC then she'll stop her activities with Essie. Also the porn part will be an option for you to pick in the future, she'll eventually bring it up with the MC and he'll get to choose if he's okay with her making porn or not. Also I have turned down her hornyness a little bit in this new update.
Therefore I have an update that is about to go out that'll change a few things:
First, it will add an option as you start the game to hide trans content that happens to side characters. This content will still take place in terms of the story however you won't be forced to watch it if you are not interested in it. While I will always believe that trans content isn't a fetish and should be normalised, it isn't fair to make someone watch something they don't want to watch.
Second, I have changed some of the text in the game that could have implied the story taking a NTR route. If there is any NTR stuff in the future it will be extremely optional and will probably not lead to a good ending for the MC and everyone involved, which would be the only kind of NTR I would consider. I also changed some things to clarify better about the porn Max *might* make.
Also I have changed it so she is no longer involved in anything on Essies page other than taking photos or recording video of Essie.
Third, I have made my own compressed version of the game. I didn't really pay attention to the size of the images since I have far more storage than anyone could ever need but I do agree it is silly how big the file is for how long the game is. Also I didn't know about the renpy YAC tool until today, that thing is amazing. Please let me know how the compressed version looks for you, I think it looks fine with a few noticable issues mainly in dark scenes or dark colored textures.
I hope this addresses some of the stuff I've read in here, I know there have been people asking about missing tags and such but I don't want to advertise anything that isn't in the game yet. Also like I said on my subscribestar page, all fetishy content will have a warning in the style of the MC trying to decide if they would be okay with it. It'll be super clear when this comes up what will happen if the MC says yes. Plus as soon as any new sexual/fetish content is added, I'll make it super clear with the update notes.
Please keep the feedback coming, it'll only make the game and story better. 
Cheers and thank you again!
