VN Ren'Py Abandoned Forbidden Desires [v0.4 Part1 Public] [Forbidden Link Games]

[Ozmog]

I think I like the start and have no problems with kinetic story and trans content. NTR is not easy but if i´m prepaired and in the mood of such a story, I have no problems with it, as long as they don´t drift away from the MC. Maybe if NTR is avoidable, it´s easier to accept for the most people. And clearly tag the game, especially when/if it comes to NTR.

I´m going to look out for the next update. Keep going, as you want.

 

[d_pedestrian]

Not saying it's NTR but knowing that one of the main LIs is a slut and to know about her adventures doesn't really sound entertaining.

Might as well add NTR content to make your Target audience completely happy because non-NTR fans won't touch this game with a ten foot pole.

 

[The Pie Rat]

Fortunately.. I read the comments before I downloaded this because of the lack of tags present. Now I wont be downloading it at all.. good luck with your game Developer

 

[YogSothoth1982]

At the latest when she writes to Essie that she thanks Essie's brother for the sex picture of the two, it is clear in which direction it is going....

Maxine: "Wow... tell him thanks, I'm up for a good fucking to thank him if he wants"

Another fact is that she wants to do porn and she already takes part in a few of her friend.

Maxine: "Dad. I only want to do some modelling stuff on there, nothing like what Essie does. It'll be sexy sure but artistic, I'm not getting my pussy out for rando's on the Internet."
Maxine thinking: "Not at the start anyway. Plus I've already helped Essie with her videos, so it's all out there anyway..
Oh god, if he sees her page... He'll see me getting railed.."

The game looks good at the beginning but that end....

I'm out of here. Good luck dev..

The game is definitely not for me.

 

[Burgh917]

Yep, gonna keep the Sister, niece and youngest daughter but not touching the eldest. Not my cup of tea.

 

[absalon1977]

Uhh happy i started reading comments before downloading, i will keep an eye on this one for a few updates but it sounds like 3 letter word will be in the game or at least sharing, both are not really my thing good luck too the developer.

 

[YogSothoth1982]

Yep, gonna keep the Sister, niece and youngest daughter but not touching the eldest. Not my cup of tea.

Certainly, from what I have read, the eldest daughter, the further away the better.

 

[absalon1977]

First of all, it's cool seeing my game on this site. I've used this site a bunch on another account and made this account to actually submit my game in a few days until I saw it already approved here. Also I'm not gonna ask to have the thread in my control, I have enough things to worry about atm lol.

Thank you for all the comments in this thread. I mean all of them, including the deleted ones that I was able to read. I appreciate all the feedback both good and bad. Some of the stuff I've seen brought up I do agree with, namely the NTR stuff. I agree with a lot of people that NTR isn't really my cup of tea, I never really intended for true NTR to become a thing in my story. The MC will definetly have multiple options when it comes to sexual partners for a short while but I intend for the MC to pick only one at a point in the future to persue as something more than just a sexual partner. AKA there will be multiple endings/routes, one of them most likely being the canon/true ending.

Saw some people talk about the lack of choice and such, I do plan to make the game have a good amount of meaningful choices in the near future, I wanted the first day to be something simple that introduced some of the main characters to the players of the game.

Also I saw some stuff about Max and her being super fucking horny for cock while being in love. This will be kinda spoilery for stuff that has already happened in the story but will happen soon so I'll hide it just in case someone in here for some reason cares that much about the story already lol.

Simply put Max is immature when it comes to love. She sees sex as something to do for fun, she has never had a serious relationship nor serious feelings until somewhat recently with the MC, so doesn't really have many feelings regarding sex other than "Wow this feels great". She only begins to realise the weight behind sex and what it means to do stuff with someone who you actually love when she gets involved with the MC. Everything involving her and Essie is purely for fun, neither of them have any serious feelings for each other, they are super close and best friends but sexually/romantically they are only friends with benefits. However as she gets more involved with the MC then she'll stop her activities with Essie. Also the porn part will be an option for you to pick in the future, she'll eventually bring it up with the MC and he'll get to choose if he's okay with her making porn or not. Also I have turned down her hornyness a little bit in this new update.

Therefore I have an update that is about to go out that'll change a few things:

First, it will add an option as you start the game to hide trans content that happens to side characters. This content will still take place in terms of the story however you won't be forced to watch it if you are not interested in it. While I will always believe that trans content isn't a fetish and should be normalised, it isn't fair to make someone watch something they don't want to watch.

Second, I have changed some of the text in the game that could have implied the story taking a NTR route. If there is any NTR stuff in the future it will be extremely optional and will probably not lead to a good ending for the MC and everyone involved, which would be the only kind of NTR I would consider. I also changed some things to clarify better about the porn Max *might* make. Also I have changed it so she is no longer involved in anything on Essies page other than taking photos or recording video of Essie.

Third, I have made my own compressed version of the game. I didn't really pay attention to the size of the images since I have far more storage than anyone could ever need but I do agree it is silly how big the file is for how long the game is. Also I didn't know about the renpy YAC tool until today, that thing is amazing. Please let me know how the compressed version looks for you, I think it looks fine with a few noticable issues mainly in dark scenes or dark colored textures.

I hope this addresses some of the stuff I've read in here, I know there have been people asking about missing tags and such but I don't want to advertise anything that isn't in the game yet. Also like I said on my subscribestar page, all fetishy content will have a warning in the style of the MC trying to decide if they would be okay with it. It'll be super clear when this comes up what will happen if the MC says yes. Plus as soon as any new sexual/fetish content is added, I'll make it super clear with the update notes.

Please keep the feedback coming, it'll only make the game and story better. Cheers and thank you again!

hmm well that sounds like something i could play then but i have learned too be carefull, i will have a look when the next update is out.

 

[Kazukitc]

the eldest daughter looks like a vampire!

 

[MisterNephilim]

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Appreciate the response, will look forward the next update to check it out, and I appreciate giving the player possibility of choice.

 

[Maverick1965]

This game looks to be great. Really cute models and lots of hot action. Definitely not a slow burn! Happy to hear there'll be trans content and even happier to hear the Dev isn't a fan of NTR.

One to watch.

 

[YogSothoth1982]

First of all, it's cool seeing my game on this site. I've used this site a bunch on another account and made this account to actually submit my game in a few days until I saw it already approved here. Also I'm not gonna ask to have the thread in my control, I have enough things to worry about atm lol.

Thank you for all the comments in this thread. I mean all of them, including the deleted ones that I was able to read. I appreciate all the feedback both good and bad. Some of the stuff I've seen brought up I do agree with, namely the NTR stuff. I agree with a lot of people that NTR isn't really my cup of tea, I never really intended for true NTR to become a thing in my story. The MC will definetly have multiple options when it comes to sexual partners for a short while but I intend for the MC to pick only one at a point in the future to persue as something more than just a sexual partner. AKA there will be multiple endings/routes, one of them most likely being the canon/true ending.

Saw some people talk about the lack of choice and such, I do plan to make the game have a good amount of meaningful choices in the near future, I wanted the first day to be something simple that introduced some of the main characters to the players of the game.

Also I saw some stuff about Max and her being super fucking horny for cock while being in love. This will be kinda spoilery for stuff that has already happened in the story but will happen soon so I'll hide it just in case someone in here for some reason cares that much about the story already lol.

Simply put Max is immature when it comes to love. She sees sex as something to do for fun, she has never had a serious relationship nor serious feelings until somewhat recently with the MC, so doesn't really have many feelings regarding sex other than "Wow this feels great". She only begins to realise the weight behind sex and what it means to do stuff with someone who you actually love when she gets involved with the MC. Everything involving her and Essie is purely for fun, neither of them have any serious feelings for each other, they are super close and best friends but sexually/romantically they are only friends with benefits. However as she gets more involved with the MC then she'll stop her activities with Essie. Also the porn part will be an option for you to pick in the future, she'll eventually bring it up with the MC and he'll get to choose if he's okay with her making porn or not. Also I have turned down her hornyness a little bit in this new update.

Therefore I have an update that is about to go out that'll change a few things:

First, it will add an option as you start the game to hide trans content that happens to side characters. This content will still take place in terms of the story however you won't be forced to watch it if you are not interested in it. While I will always believe that trans content isn't a fetish and should be normalised, it isn't fair to make someone watch something they don't want to watch.

Second, I have changed some of the text in the game that could have implied the story taking a NTR route. If there is any NTR stuff in the future it will be extremely optional and will probably not lead to a good ending for the MC and everyone involved, which would be the only kind of NTR I would consider. I also changed some things to clarify better about the porn Max *might* make. Also I have changed it so she is no longer involved in anything on Essies page other than taking photos or recording video of Essie.

Third, I have made my own compressed version of the game. I didn't really pay attention to the size of the images since I have far more storage than anyone could ever need but I do agree it is silly how big the file is for how long the game is. Also I didn't know about the renpy YAC tool until today, that thing is amazing. Please let me know how the compressed version looks for you, I think it looks fine with a few noticable issues mainly in dark scenes or dark colored textures.

I hope this addresses some of the stuff I've read in here, I know there have been people asking about missing tags and such but I don't want to advertise anything that isn't in the game yet. Also like I said on my subscribestar page, all fetishy content will have a warning in the style of the MC trying to decide if they would be okay with it. It'll be super clear when this comes up what will happen if the MC says yes. Plus as soon as any new sexual/fetish content is added, I'll make it super clear with the update notes.

Please keep the feedback coming, it'll only make the game and story better. Cheers and thank you again!

I'm possibly weird, but if we're only going to be able to have single endings (i.e. no possibility of harem or endings with multiple LIs), I'd rather the MC only have sex scenes with the LI I'm interested in. Is that posible? (certainly if she has a sex scene with another character, I don't care if it's trans, girl or guy, I'm not going to like it at all, whether I see it or not).

On the other hand, I'm not going to like the scenes with trans characters. I don't care if they happen with characters that aren't LIs (in this case also with the LIs that don't interests me) if I haven't to see them. In any case, since I don't want the MC to have a romance with a trans character, any sex scenes between this character and the LIs with the MC does have a romance are dangerously close to NTR in my opinion.

Just to clarify that when I talk about the LI that interests me, it's because I only see one ending. So once I find which LI I like the most, I'll focus on her and no one else. It's extremely unlikely that I will play the game again to see a second ending (I never do it), but I guess it isn't a common thing.

 

[DarkSithLord47]

This game looks to be great. Really cute models and lots of hot action. Definitely not a slow burn! Happy to hear there'll be trans content and even happier to hear the Dev isn't a fan of NTR.

One to watch.

Lol the dev isnt a fan of NTR yet his game is a full blown NTR lover's paradise,dont trust everything a dev says my young friend.Unless he rewrites the eldest daughter completly and doesnt force content down the player's throat then this game remains as such.

 

[Chimba]

The MC will definetly have multiple options when it comes to sexual partners for a short while but I intend for the MC to pick only one at a point in the future to persue as something more than just a sexual partner. AKA there will be multiple endings/routes, one of them most likely being the canon/true ending.

ok...so the player is forced to have all these interactions with the possible LI and sex in the first update, to end up having to choose 1? man that's fucked up

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[Sngo]

At the latest when she writes to Essie that she thanks Essie's brother for the sex picture of the two, it is clear in which direction it is going....

Maxine: "Wow... tell him thanks, I'm up for a good fucking to thank him if he wants"

Another fact is that she wants to do porn and she already takes part in a few of her friend.

Maxine: "Dad. I only want to do some modelling stuff on there, nothing like what Essie does. It'll be sexy sure but artistic, I'm not getting my pussy out for rando's on the Internet."
Maxine thinking: "Not at the start anyway. Plus I've already helped Essie with her videos, so it's all out there anyway..
Oh god, if he sees her page... He'll see me getting railed.."

The game looks good at the beginning but that end....

I'm out of here. Good luck dev..

Yikes, ty for the sacrifice soldier, you will not be forgotten.

That's probably a record on how to ruin a LI and specially her being mc daughter just make it even worst that shit even made me cringe IRL.

 

[Sol_Invictus2009]

First of all, it's cool seeing my game on this site. I've used this site a bunch on another account and made this account to actually submit my game in a few days until I saw it already approved here. Also I'm not gonna ask to have the thread in my control, I have enough things to worry about atm lol.

Thank you for all the comments in this thread. I mean all of them, including the deleted ones that I was able to read. I appreciate all the feedback both good and bad. Some of the stuff I've seen brought up I do agree with, namely the NTR stuff. I agree with a lot of people that NTR isn't really my cup of tea, I never really intended for true NTR to become a thing in my story. The MC will definetly have multiple options when it comes to sexual partners for a short while but I intend for the MC to pick only one at a point in the future to persue as something more than just a sexual partner. AKA there will be multiple endings/routes, one of them most likely being the canon/true ending.

Saw some people talk about the lack of choice and such, I do plan to make the game have a good amount of meaningful choices in the near future, I wanted the first day to be something simple that introduced some of the main characters to the players of the game.

Also I saw some stuff about Max and her being super fucking horny for cock while being in love. This will be kinda spoilery for stuff that has already happened in the story but will happen soon so I'll hide it just in case someone in here for some reason cares that much about the story already lol.

Simply put Max is immature when it comes to love. She sees sex as something to do for fun, she has never had a serious relationship nor serious feelings until somewhat recently with the MC, so doesn't really have many feelings regarding sex other than "Wow this feels great". She only begins to realise the weight behind sex and what it means to do stuff with someone who you actually love when she gets involved with the MC. Everything involving her and Essie is purely for fun, neither of them have any serious feelings for each other, they are super close and best friends but sexually/romantically they are only friends with benefits. However as she gets more involved with the MC then she'll stop her activities with Essie. Also the porn part will be an option for you to pick in the future, she'll eventually bring it up with the MC and he'll get to choose if he's okay with her making porn or not. Also I have turned down her hornyness a little bit in this new update.

Therefore I have an update that is about to go out that'll change a few things:

First, it will add an option as you start the game to hide trans content that happens to side characters. This content will still take place in terms of the story however you won't be forced to watch it if you are not interested in it. While I will always believe that trans content isn't a fetish and should be normalised, it isn't fair to make someone watch something they don't want to watch.

Second, I have changed some of the text in the game that could have implied the story taking a NTR route. If there is any NTR stuff in the future it will be extremely optional and will probably not lead to a good ending for the MC and everyone involved, which would be the only kind of NTR I would consider. I also changed some things to clarify better about the porn Max *might* make. Also I have changed it so she is no longer involved in anything on Essies page other than taking photos or recording video of Essie.

Third, I have made my own compressed version of the game. I didn't really pay attention to the size of the images since I have far more storage than anyone could ever need but I do agree it is silly how big the file is for how long the game is. Also I didn't know about the renpy YAC tool until today, that thing is amazing. Please let me know how the compressed version looks for you, I think it looks fine with a few noticable issues mainly in dark scenes or dark colored textures.

I hope this addresses some of the stuff I've read in here, I know there have been people asking about missing tags and such but I don't want to advertise anything that isn't in the game yet. Also like I said on my subscribestar page, all fetishy content will have a warning in the style of the MC trying to decide if they would be okay with it. It'll be super clear when this comes up what will happen if the MC says yes. Plus as soon as any new sexual/fetish content is added, I'll make it super clear with the update notes.

Please keep the feedback coming, it'll only make the game and story better. Cheers and thank you again!

First of all, thanks for your polite and thoughtful response. I really do appreciate it when devs interact with the commenters. In the interest of providing feedback that might be useful, here are some things:

1) Many players of these games do not like the idea of LIs or potential LIs having sex with anyone other than the MC. I'm less stringent on this than some (No harm, no foul if the LI is not in a relationship or in the process of starting a relationship with the MC), but there is definitely a percentage of players who are pretty hard-line on this.

2) The haircut that Dora has is going to put some players off before they ever even play the game. I know it's just a haircut, but that style has a lot of baggage attached these days. It doesn't bother me, but others have already commented on it.

3) Also on the topic of Dora, the overall character model looks really odd in a couple of renders. As shown by another poster above.

4) Choices. People like them. Especially if they actually mean something.

On a purely personal note: I'd like a Harem ending. Just a personal preference.

Edit: I'm looking forward to the next update because the changes you've already mentioned would definitely go a long way to improve the game.

 

[eddie987]

Lol the dev isnt a fan of NTR yet his game is a full blown NTR lover's paradise,dont trust everything a dev says my young friend.Unless he rewrites the eldest daughter completly and doesnt force content down the player's throat then this game remains as such.

Yeah, it seems to be a trend nowadays for devs to say how they don't like "something" and then adding a shitload of that "something" in their games.

Now, we've learned that oldest daughter doesn't take sex seriously, but she's also pissed at her mother because she cheated on her father... But if she doesn't take sex seriously, what's the problem with her cheating? Is it because she lied to him? Exactly like she's been doing with her online porn career?
She's also madly in love with her father, but at the same time she's pretty much begging (for what seems to be a long time) her friend's brother to bang her (obligatory BBC content, that's usually going hand to hand with the content the dev definitely doesn't like...), and continues doing so, immediately after she started getting somewhere with him. So she wants to do something similar her mother did, right?
Makes sense...

I've said it many times before, the devs should create the content they want to create and just be honest about it.

 

[Sol_Invictus2009]

Yeah, it seems to be a trend nowadays for devs to say how they don't like "something" and then adding a shitload of that "something" in their games.

Now, we've learned that oldest daughter doesn't take sex seriously, but she's also pissed at her mother because she cheated on her father... But if she doesn't take sex seriously, what's the problem with her cheating? Is it because she lied to him? Exactly like she's been doing with her online porn career?
She's also madly in love with her father, but at the same time she's pretty much begging (for what seems to be a long time) her friend's brother to bang her (obligatory BBC content, that's usually going hand to hand with the content the dev definitely doesn't like...), and continues doing so, immediately after she started getting somewhere with him. So she wants to do something similar her mother did, right?
Makes sense...

I've said it many times before, the devs should create the content they want to create and just be honest about it.

I'm giving a little more credence to the dev's statements than you, but I can definitely agree with your end statement. If he intends for something to be in the game, he should be upfront about it and let the players decide if that's something they want any part of.

P.S. Just your mention of the "obligatory BBC" was enough to elicit a yawn. That cliche has become beyond dull.

 

[The F-Team]

Will this stay a kinetic novel ForbiddenLinkGames or will there be choices in the future?

 

[Weasel_Face]

That stuff with Max really put me off, she was the one I was most interested in but not anymore, also not interested in Essie's brother's sloppy seconds. This game is written like a harem game yet the dev says you are meant to be with only one which makes no sense especially when your sister is literally throwing her daughter at you so she can watch. You could also see potential for 3-way daughter/niece or 4-way daughter/daughter/niece action or even 5-way sister/daughter/daughter/niece action...