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HTML Forsaken Throne [v0.24] [SmallTownGames]
I'm extremely glad I stumbled across this game, it's exceptionally well written, and perfectly hits the mark for the level of taboo kink and depravity I enjoy without getting too dark or depressing.
It reminds me a lot of LR2: Reformulate in all the best ways regarding its kinks and erotic writing, to the point where I would just be reiterating how I love almost all of it (I appreciate that watersports is optional).
It also reminded me of Incubus City in regards to how uniquely amoral and varied the women can be, and how that really elevates both the storytelling and the depravity.
The way Megan and Charlotte bully and dom their partners due to their sheer eagerness to be the protags submissive sexpet is incredibly hot. I love when the women contribute to the "evilness" and immorality, and grow in agency/authority/power/influence despite their obsession with masochistic submission in the bedroom.
People describe the game as being "evil", but I did feel there was an undercurrent of wholesomeness and affection with all the different girls so far, even despite the mind control and dirty talk. Even Madison has an undercurrent of love to her content as she willingly turns herself into a sex slave.
Even though it is magically coerced, the girls are all clearly really enjoying themselves, and I find the writing focus on the girls orgasms and their sheer pleasure very sexy. The fact they cum repeatedly from blowjobs, light touching, and sometimes even just being spoken to is great. Even when they are getting lightly slapped/choked they always have a big smile on their faces.
I like how the mind control isn't a catch all, and that the women all retain their individuality, overall autonomy and will to a large degree. They often surprise the protag in how they will occasionally obstruct advances, or sometimes advance the depravity due to their own latent desires and ambitions. Their personalities are elevated through the corruption rather than erased by it.
The fact they completely remember what they did whilst under the effect of the mind powers, but believe it was of their own volition, forcing them to self-rationalise their slutty behaviours, really heightens the taboo.
The way they adopt subconsciously slutty behaviours like unknowingly spreading their legs, mime giving blowjobs, or start to kneel at the sight of the protag is amazing writing.
I'm finding myself really enjoying the narrative elements and mythological world building. Christian parody is perhaps a bit trite/common, but I like that game seems more focused on lore/mysticism.
The media choices and models are really high quality too, and I love the more bimbo esque models. The side-quest with the "misc" girls was very sexy, and I would love to see more of them, or some of them reappear, maybe as flavour text or repeatables at the cosplay job.
I'm extremely keen to see more, and my personal wishlist of kinks is pretty similar to what I said for LR2, and almost everything that is already in the game. Netori, lesbian, pregnancy, rough-sex/light-masochism, cum-addiction, cum eating, messy blowjobs/lipstick, pole-dancing, mating press/full nelson/man handling, hair handlebars; same gist.
Might be fun to see some of the girls discover they've been mind controlled only after they've reached the point of no return/reflection and have completely embraced their depravity.
Amazing work, and best of luck!
It reminds me a lot of LR2: Reformulate in all the best ways regarding its kinks and erotic writing, to the point where I would just be reiterating how I love almost all of it (I appreciate that watersports is optional).
It also reminded me of Incubus City in regards to how uniquely amoral and varied the women can be, and how that really elevates both the storytelling and the depravity.
The way Megan and Charlotte bully and dom their partners due to their sheer eagerness to be the protags submissive sexpet is incredibly hot. I love when the women contribute to the "evilness" and immorality, and grow in agency/authority/power/influence despite their obsession with masochistic submission in the bedroom.
People describe the game as being "evil", but I did feel there was an undercurrent of wholesomeness and affection with all the different girls so far, even despite the mind control and dirty talk. Even Madison has an undercurrent of love to her content as she willingly turns herself into a sex slave.
Even though it is magically coerced, the girls are all clearly really enjoying themselves, and I find the writing focus on the girls orgasms and their sheer pleasure very sexy. The fact they cum repeatedly from blowjobs, light touching, and sometimes even just being spoken to is great. Even when they are getting lightly slapped/choked they always have a big smile on their faces.
I like how the mind control isn't a catch all, and that the women all retain their individuality, overall autonomy and will to a large degree. They often surprise the protag in how they will occasionally obstruct advances, or sometimes advance the depravity due to their own latent desires and ambitions. Their personalities are elevated through the corruption rather than erased by it.
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The fact they completely remember what they did whilst under the effect of the mind powers, but believe it was of their own volition, forcing them to self-rationalise their slutty behaviours, really heightens the taboo.
The way they adopt subconsciously slutty behaviours like unknowingly spreading their legs, mime giving blowjobs, or start to kneel at the sight of the protag is amazing writing.
I'm finding myself really enjoying the narrative elements and mythological world building. Christian parody is perhaps a bit trite/common, but I like that game seems more focused on lore/mysticism.
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The media choices and models are really high quality too, and I love the more bimbo esque models. The side-quest with the "misc" girls was very sexy, and I would love to see more of them, or some of them reappear, maybe as flavour text or repeatables at the cosplay job.
I'm extremely keen to see more, and my personal wishlist of kinks is pretty similar to what I said for LR2, and almost everything that is already in the game. Netori, lesbian, pregnancy, rough-sex/light-masochism, cum-addiction, cum eating, messy blowjobs/lipstick, pole-dancing, mating press/full nelson/man handling, hair handlebars; same gist.
Might be fun to see some of the girls discover they've been mind controlled only after they've reached the point of no return/reflection and have completely embraced their depravity.
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Amazing work, and best of luck!
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Ok, 1 and 2 are effectively the same problem, which is easily fixed. 2 is something else, which is going to require a bit of a rewrite. Thanks for finding this, every bit of bug finding helps!
I'm going to need to look at your save file, because that should not be happening at all.
I could have sworn I fixed this, but it's not a game breaking bug, so it's not a huge deal. That being said, I appreciate it being brought up, so I can fix it properly. Cheers!
Apologies, clerical error on my end.
So the mold you get from the scene where you go with Harper to the Hardware Store. I did miss an explanation from the walkthrough, which is something I'm going to add. Try sleeping a few days, if you've done the Harper scene I mentioned. It should pop up.
Ok, so your save file is broken, because it's from version 0.01. I made some changes in between that at 0.02 that made those save files a bit corrupted, which is why I also included save files to replace your own in that version. Unfortunately, you will have to just restart the game. The good news is that this was caught relatively early, which means you don't have to redo that much.
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I am very happy you enjoyed it! Like I said before, I'm planning on working on this one for a while, so I hope it continues living up to your expectations! Cheers!
my main quest is stuck at " visit evie at the hardware store". whenever i go there, no option to interact pops up. can anyone suggest what i may be missing here?
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If you've done the quest with Evie, then you're done, I just made a mistake and didn't close it off.
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day 65 this still hasnt activated
Go to the Hardware Store, and find out what Evie has in store for you
Go to the Hardware Store, and find out what Evie has in store for you
I like the game and the writing is good but I'm having a few issues with the consistency it's very clear the mc is like dominating and stuff but then during certain seems it's more clear he's not actually into domination just the role play of it and that character disparity is disappointing yeah he's not corrupted by the power but still to be such a winy bitch and simp about morality during certain scene but not with others like the scene with kat drugs and the club after he spent all that time setting foundations for Madison gf seems weak made no sense to have a morality crisis out of nowhere and come off scared that kat was kinda drug kingpin adjacent was a good twist tho she's not just a cock hungry bimbo posing as a secretary tho it brings into some charactization questions abojt what the original intent was for her like talk about playing into the rape fantasy with the sister instead of actually just doing it he warns her before hand makes no sense and the weird thing of sharing the sisters his orignal thing is this womans gonna be my toy my bitch then he just willingly gives her up as property to share with his sisters plural makes no sense he should just took them all by force emily i get he has a connection with but nakes no sense for him to willingly dhare anything hes too soft even if they treated him fine for years they watched him be abused and said nothing did nothing instead of just dominating them withlust and showing even if there minds don't want it the bodies do it's not very harem but more sissyfication like that if it gets reworked it would be better to stick to one role that caters to the general fantasy's SmallTownBo this is soemthing to think about
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SmallTownBo small error (triple < in the sis3.loc to living line) in ScheduleLocations:
Code:
<<set $mom1.loc to 'english'>>
<<set $mom2.loc to 'hotel'>>
<<set $sis1.loc to 'kitchen'>>
<<set $sis2.loc to 'unknown'>>
<<if $sis3.scene.includes(5)>>
<<set $sis3.loc to 'sis3room'>>
<<else>>
<<<set $sis3.loc to 'living'>>
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The button on the left sidebar named "Cain".
Yeah, I found that, and fixed it for the next version. Thankfully it's not game breaking, just throws an error sometimes.
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thank you and one more question if its ok how come the main quest says to the hardware store but when i go i cant do anything?
I love having a dominant mind control MC who lords his power over others. My one critique is Cain is interesting, but our MC is not. He's generic and more personality designed to bounce off Cain and the girls would be great. I also think that he's not rough enough with his mother and with his sister, the one who is a witch, there's not enough exploring the drama of what he's doing.
He is deciding to rape and corrupt and control all these women, yet acts like things are fine between him and his sister and mom. I'd like to see more tension and consistent personality over this. Its good for the story that he doesn't care about the moral consequences but I want to see the beliefs and emotions behind that. The unique perspective of someone this perverted and selfish to his desires. There's good conflict there with him trying to act normal when he isn't
He is deciding to rape and corrupt and control all these women, yet acts like things are fine between him and his sister and mom. I'd like to see more tension and consistent personality over this. Its good for the story that he doesn't care about the moral consequences but I want to see the beliefs and emotions behind that. The unique perspective of someone this perverted and selfish to his desires. There's good conflict there with him trying to act normal when he isn't