The hard-core side is more fun to read as a character. Average nice dude is boring. No spice to it
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Exact shit I was saying had a moral crisis bout buying drugs but had no issues brain washing and cucking a lesbian taking her first time or cheating on her when she's about ti be married it was really fuckijg weird and inconsistent broke the immersion he's not even corrupted by the sins so it's makes it less of a excuse
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I'm glad people like the story enough to talk about the writing 
The way I always wrote it is, there definitely is a disconnect. Everyone is right, there is the regular guy, and then the more sadistic version of him. The way that I've always justified it in my head was that there is going to be a vast difference in how he treats people, because the issue with getting powers like this is that you inadvertently strip the humanity from people.
The reason why he continues to be a normal dorky dude with Harper, Emily, and Ellie, is that they are real people to him. He grew up with them, and experienced everything he would from that. Then we look at people like Madison. Madison, to the character, is not a real person. Madison is a series of warm wet holes that he, by virtue of his powers, is able to use in whatever way he deems fit. It's the issue with every character that he doesn't have a background with.
Now, that's not going to be the case with every character, Sofia being an obvious one. But the disconnect there is one where, someone isn't a real person, so he just thinks with his dick.
I hope that satisfies some people, and again, I'm really glad people are talking about it! Cheers.
The way I always wrote it is, there definitely is a disconnect. Everyone is right, there is the regular guy, and then the more sadistic version of him. The way that I've always justified it in my head was that there is going to be a vast difference in how he treats people, because the issue with getting powers like this is that you inadvertently strip the humanity from people.
The reason why he continues to be a normal dorky dude with Harper, Emily, and Ellie, is that they are real people to him. He grew up with them, and experienced everything he would from that. Then we look at people like Madison. Madison, to the character, is not a real person. Madison is a series of warm wet holes that he, by virtue of his powers, is able to use in whatever way he deems fit. It's the issue with every character that he doesn't have a background with.
Now, that's not going to be the case with every character, Sofia being an obvious one. But the disconnect there is one where, someone isn't a real person, so he just thinks with his dick.
I hope that satisfies some people, and again, I'm really glad people are talking about it! Cheers.
Writing advice to you bud, normal dorky switch is boring. You want to integrate the two. Have him masking and trying to be connected to his household while there's this hidden monster he unleashes with others and even them.I'm glad people like the story enough to talk about the writing
The way I always wrote it is, there definitely is a disconnect. Everyone is right, there is the regular guy, and then the more sadistic version of him. The way that I've always justified it in my head was that there is going to be a vast difference in how he treats people, because the issue with getting powers like this is that you inadvertently strip the humanity from people.
The reason why he continues to be a normal dorky dude with Harper, Emily, and Ellie, is that they are real people to him. He grew up with them, and experienced everything he would from that. Then we look at people like Madison. Madison, to the character, is not a real person. Madison is a series of warm wet holes that he, by virtue of his powers, is able to use in whatever way he deems fit. It's the issue with every character that he doesn't have a background with.
Now, that's not going to be the case with every character, Sofia being an obvious one. But the disconnect there is one where, someone isn't a real person, so he just thinks with his dick.
I hope that satisfies some people, and again, I'm really glad people are talking about it! Cheers.
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That is interesting, because from my perspective, Charlotte, Madison and Megan are my absolute favourite characters so far, I love their content.
Even though he touts their place as sextoys, I interpreted some affection and endearment underneath it, and the descriptive writing has lots of little touches that really evoke the girls feelings and lust as they gradually become corrupted.
In fact, the more rough and depraved sex, rather than vanilla, indirectly indicates to me more trust and attachment.
This new update is 10/10 for me, even though it's brief, Megan and Charlotte's new scenes are fantastic. Despite the protag initially having pretenses of being dismissive towards his relationship with them, I love that they surprise him with their own ambitions and drive that heightens the corruption.
The overall prose is fantastic, so much so it's hard to really describe everything I like about it.
The way the girls' faces light up in joy and endearment at the mere sight and presence of the protag, with the sheer contrast of how progressively neglectful and dismissive they become towards their partners.
Charlotte's squeal of delight and immediate lust upon his arrival.
The cuteness of how doting and considerate Charlotte and Megan act towards the protags needs whilst uncaringly taking from their partners both physically and emotionally.
The pride, confidence, and joy the girls feel being so sexually submissive and brazen, contrasted with the sadness and humiliation their partners feel.
The constant passive aggressive and snide put-downs all the women have for their husbands and boyfriends.
How they giggle with nervous energy, and feel proud rather than ashamed during dirty talk.
The blatant and shameless hypocrisy regarding privileges they give the protag, such as Megan being perfectly happy with the fantasy of being barefoot and pregnant for him, but demands being a working woman with her boyfriend.
The little hyper-feminine mannerisms and subconcious yearning in how they move and talk.
It's all delightfully taboo.
The writing focus on the sensation and emotions of the girls' pleasure is excellent.
The depraved ideas and sinful behaviour that gives them emotional fulfillment, and practically makes them tighten and almost cum at the thought of, such as Charlotte forcing her husband to raise your kids, is so damn good.
I love how wicked and devious Charlotte and Megan have progressively become in every scene, and how they are rewarded for become more sinful rather than punished. They rule their submissiveness to the protag over other men with pride and authority. I feel they would both get along extremely well.
I'm on the wrath path, and the new story content there is equally hot. I am curious to see if the pride content and characters will loop around later.
All positives for me, amazing work.
Even though he touts their place as sextoys, I interpreted some affection and endearment underneath it, and the descriptive writing has lots of little touches that really evoke the girls feelings and lust as they gradually become corrupted.
In fact, the more rough and depraved sex, rather than vanilla, indirectly indicates to me more trust and attachment.
This new update is 10/10 for me, even though it's brief, Megan and Charlotte's new scenes are fantastic. Despite the protag initially having pretenses of being dismissive towards his relationship with them, I love that they surprise him with their own ambitions and drive that heightens the corruption.
The overall prose is fantastic, so much so it's hard to really describe everything I like about it.
The way the girls' faces light up in joy and endearment at the mere sight and presence of the protag, with the sheer contrast of how progressively neglectful and dismissive they become towards their partners.
Charlotte's squeal of delight and immediate lust upon his arrival.
The cuteness of how doting and considerate Charlotte and Megan act towards the protags needs whilst uncaringly taking from their partners both physically and emotionally.
The pride, confidence, and joy the girls feel being so sexually submissive and brazen, contrasted with the sadness and humiliation their partners feel.
The constant passive aggressive and snide put-downs all the women have for their husbands and boyfriends.
How they giggle with nervous energy, and feel proud rather than ashamed during dirty talk.
The blatant and shameless hypocrisy regarding privileges they give the protag, such as Megan being perfectly happy with the fantasy of being barefoot and pregnant for him, but demands being a working woman with her boyfriend.
The little hyper-feminine mannerisms and subconcious yearning in how they move and talk.
It's all delightfully taboo.
The writing focus on the sensation and emotions of the girls' pleasure is excellent.
The depraved ideas and sinful behaviour that gives them emotional fulfillment, and practically makes them tighten and almost cum at the thought of, such as Charlotte forcing her husband to raise your kids, is so damn good.
I love how wicked and devious Charlotte and Megan have progressively become in every scene, and how they are rewarded for become more sinful rather than punished. They rule their submissiveness to the protag over other men with pride and authority. I feel they would both get along extremely well.
I'm on the wrath path, and the new story content there is equally hot. I am curious to see if the pride content and characters will loop around later.
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All positives for me, amazing work.
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After the gathering at Charlotte's house where mc meets the two other woman I get nothing and I'm getting ask me again later on almost all characters
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Seems like you're done. If you click Information on the left side bar, then game information, it shows the completion rate for all of the content. If you have 100% for every girl, then you've done all of the content in this release!
Can't seem to get the wrath story line started. It says ??? for hospital as well. In the coven fight I chose Pride first.
Is there any way to progress?
Is there any way to progress?
Afaik you can only choose one right now but I haven't had time to play 0.18 so my Information could be outdated so take it with a grain of salt...
Can anyone please confirm that we can do only one path in the 0.18 release?Afaik you can only choose one right now but I haven't had time to play 0.18 so my Information could be outdated so take it with a grain of salt...
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Yes you can only do one at a time, the second path will open after you finish the first but since neither are fully developed as of the current version you can't finish the one you're at right now to begin the other one.
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Yes, that's true. Currently, you can only do one path at a time, but I did just finish both of the paths in the latest version on Patreon, so it's coming soon. Once one is done, you can automatically loop back and do the other one.
getting this error in city hall when trying to start the pride sin: Error: <<set>>: bad evaluation: State.variables.coun1d is undefined.
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Bank is in Downtown!Stuck in prolog, where the bank ? No one pict I can click in map
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