This isn't a game
It's a friggin book
Lmao, I guess so. I originally just wrote erotica, and then transitioned to this. It's why there's so many complaints about not enough images, which isn't unfair. I personally don't think they're necessary, as the purpose of this medium is the writing. If you want to watch porn, there's plenty of better ways. There's too many HTML games that, imo, are basically just gifs and videos surrounded by one sentence of writing. That's just porn.
All that to say is that if you don't like that, it's understandable, but it's just my style. I hope you find a game you do enjoy
Why can I start a "quest" that I shouldn't actually be able to do yet?
The Pride "quest" mentions a spell that I shouldn't be able to do yet because I'm not that far along in the coven "quest" yet. Is it a bug or did Dev overlooked that the quest should be locked until you're far enough along in the coven "quest"?
That might be an oversight, send me your save, and I'll take a look at it.
Reading this 'book' is getting a bit tiring
. More gameplay would be nice. I know it's a Twine game, but still?
What exactly does "gameplay" look like in a Twine game? I know there are some devs that go nuts, but like I said, this is my first game. The main focus should be the writing.
Good game keep up the good work.
My main complaint is that we can't pick the nickname for Ellie to call the main character. Other than that it is just nitpicks like the fact that we can't try to go for both pride and wrath at the same play through.
I can add a nickname system, it's not too difficult.
Although as for the sins, in later versions, I do have them so when you finish one, you can automatically start the next one. I did already finish them off in a later version, which (shameless self promotion time) is on my
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I'm not sure if this has ever been answered before, but the first picture from the second row from the gallery (counting from the left) seems to be empty or maybe it's just a watered down background on purpose, was that on purpose?
What gallery? Did you respond in the wrong thread?
One thing that takes me out of the writing a lot, and is something I notice in a lot of Reddit fiction, is switching willy-nilly between past and present tense, without any real justification for it.
I realize with the sheer amount of writing in this already it would be a pain to comb through it all and make it all stick to one tense, but I do think it would improve the final product by a large margin.
Past that, I was considering supporting on Patreon, but I didn't quite understand what the rewards referring to x amount of extra versions entailed.
Is it additional scenes with specific characters? Additional characters with whom you can interact?
That said, it's a great game, and I do really enjoy it! Just my specific thoughts on what could be improved. The premise is really fun.
Hmm, I like to think I keep it pretty straight with the tenses. My editor is way more detail oriented, and he never mentioned anything. Do let me know whenever you see it, it might be an accident.
As for the versions, each release has at least two scenes with girls, and a narrative. So with 5 extra versions, you get at least ten scvenes (Versions 0.21 - 0.25 have a lot of content, much more than the minimum).
