- May 4, 2019
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Yeah, it's odd that there isn't any hard ntr content. It seems like there would be, given the setup. Tenzin is actually doing a lot of bad stuff, but he's coming across as a quirky scamp. I think that it'd be worth avoiding creating areas like Avatar Statue and Streets because their appearance is exremely jarring and the movement and look of the characters in them is kind of goofy. I do think it's hard to tell what you should be doing and it's often unclear whether you're at the end of content or if there is stuff left to do. I don't like hard s&m or anything, but Tenzin doesn't really feel like he has any control. She'd only have to expose him and he'd be completely fucked. Surely this book should be about no one feeling like they can expose you and no one being able to if they tried (as kind of awful as that sounds, but that's the weird fantasy. Is only game, why you heff to be mad?)Again, I think the "slave" route is weak mainly because it keeps dancing about the concept rather than committing to it, and yes the art in some places (especially the street and statue island zones) is so bad it is jarring. Tenzin is pretty much a requirement if you are going to do both Korra, air-bending and keep the MC a male. Plus, it is nice to NOT have a teenager as the MC in this game for once.
But the game plays around the slave storyline way too much. It would fit the story and the line much better if Tenzin was a LOT harder on Korra. Most of the beginning of the story arc should have been scrapped or at least shortened considerably, and add in an option for Tenzin to regularly visit and torment Korra as "Amon", stripping her powers away from her and pushing her farther and farther toward breaking. Mixing the sexual acts with Amon instead of just Tenzin with a strong BDSM twist would have also helped. Some public humiliation acts, maybe some degredation, even more cucking her with Asumi could work (say, having Asumi regularly please and pleasure Tenzin and making her admit how much she enjoys it, enjoys a "man" while Korra is bound and gagged in a closet watching, to break her from her romantic potential with her and make her feel even more helpless).
I just feel like Act 4 is just not aggressive enough. This is the one and only time YOU get to be the Dom AND the teacher, you get to be in the role of control over the female character. The MC also has near-total support from the people around him to break Korra....so just fucking DO it. Go full supervillain and break the bitch. Don't be nice, don't be a hero, don't justify it, just fucking DO it and go all in on it. By the end, Korra should be a completely broken and submissive slave of a girl, that exists only be humiliated, used and abused...and then maybe that is how your MC regains being the "Avatar", because she gives it up.
I have no idea how many people are actually keen for more Jinorah content. It seems like a fair few based on the comments, but it's hard to tell whether it's a vocal minority or not. I'd like more as well. It at least feels a bit different and adds variety. It's creepy, but again: is only game. No need to get upset about cartoons. I enjoyed Book 2 the most because I'm disgusting and like incest. I also felt like there were good moments like fucking Azula over Mai. I think this one feels like there are no risks even though there would be and that deflates the excitement that would be there.
Mity, I hope you read this and find it helpful. I really liked Book 2 and 3 in particular. I don't like to offend or hurt feelings, but I haven't enjoyed the writing as much this book, but that may be that I'm sometimes confused about what to do or where to go, or that the payoff when I work out those things isn't quite what I want. It's hard to say because I've been playing it as it releases and I had similar issues with Book 3 which I was also playing along with. I do feel like unclear next steps have always been an issue, especially if you're replaying and you miss dialogue because you're skipping though. A quest log would clear that up, but I'm not sure how easy to implement that kind of thing would be.
Thanks for the content ly babee