V.A. Laurie

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V.A. Laurie was this a joke that flew above my head or just a random name?
FYI you managed to call it "The Hole Hole Whore-tta Dananana" in italian :D
I was just making up shot but that's a fantastic accident that it translates to Italian that way... So retroactively I did it on purpose ;)
 

FFCreations

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Great game. But I wish you could avoid the girls you don't like. It's just silly to me that you can have a romance with someone, while not being able to avoid other characters and be faithful. It just doesn't work for me, unless I'm playing a harem path with no romance.

That's the only problem to me honestly and this is probably the only good VN I've played, that had this. And I know people are going to say it's just a porn game, but this is just a weak excuse for poor writing, when you have other games that do it better.
We have a story that we want to tell. And having the player handpick what characters they want and don’t want would just completely destroy any resemblance of a coherent and thought out story.

I’ve had people say they want to avoid Karina
I’ve had people say they want to avoid Leah
I’ve had people say they want to avoid Hailey
I’ve had people say they want to avoid Melody
I’ve had people say they want to avoid Alice

We don’t have the manpower to add new content for each path that needs to be created when the player avoid a character. So if we allowed players to avoid a character without new content, then we won’t be able to reference any event you may have had with any of the girls.

That means no character can ever acknowledge any relationship ever.

This game’s story is built around the actions the main character takes. They need to be able to reference them and acknowledge their existence.
 

V.A. Laurie

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And I know people are going to say it's just a porn game, but this is just a weak excuse for poor writing, when you have other games that do it better.
I wouldn't use the excuse that I'm writing a porn game, I would instead say that the relationships are very much just open, bordering on polyamory. This game is a visual novel. It's a story. If you want to control everything, play Fable. If the want an erotic story involving multiple women, play Freeloading Family.

<3
 

ThunderRob

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i'm ok with the game as its going..it is obvious a fun romp with open minded dames who are not adverse to sharing and an MC who's all for it also..if eventually..one day down the road we get to choose the dame or dames we want to end with cool..but i say just enjoy this game how it is..its funny lighthearted and happy..a nice escape from a hard 8-hour day of punching babies and kicking puppies for minimum wage...
 

prrt

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sounds a nice spending of you day .
but I do agree .
it's the story the devs want to tell and we read it.
Seldom did I contacted an author to tell him he had the wrong characters and never left the cinema because someone was killed off .

however there seems to be a big serie on tele that is petitioned to alter the ending .
 

lo0u

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i'm ok with the game as its going..it is obvious a fun romp with open minded dames who are not adverse to sharing and an MC who's all for it also..if eventually..one day down the road we get to choose the dame or dames we want to end with cool..but i say just enjoy this game how it is..its funny lighthearted and happy..a nice escape from a hard 8-hour day of punching babies and kicking puppies for minimum wage...
Yeah, I guess you're right. Maybe I took the game a bit too seriously and I don't think it's bad, but it's hard not to compare to other games and not be disappointed by a few things, though.
 

ThunderRob

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Yeah, I guess you're right. Maybe I took the game a bit too seriously and I don't think it's bad, but it's hard not to compare to other games and not be disappointed by a few things, though.
that's the problem..comparing to other games..just play this based on its own merits..this game is definitely in the "fun relaxed" genre so have fun and relax and dont worry about other games..when you need a mindbender go play a mindbender...i do..but when i wanna just have fun and smile..this is one of my go-to games.
 

E-Dog

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Is there another time that the MC had sex with Leah besides the threesome and this update that i am not remembering? I didn't take the threesome route and Leah says in this update that it's the second time they have sex together. Is this just an oversight?

I guess it's just assumed that everybody takes the threesome route, and i am the weird one :ROFLMAO:
There's a few of those types of errors in this VN. Take it for what it is and just roll with it.
All of us here are weird. I know of other peeps here that would refuse the threesome, so you're not alone there....I'm not one of them however. I chose the 3some. :p
 

polycentric

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We have a story that we want to tell. And having the player handpick what characters they want and don’t want would just completely destroy any resemblance of a coherent and thought out story.

I’ve had people say they want to avoid Karina
I’ve had people say they want to avoid Leah
I’ve had people say they want to avoid Hailey
I’ve had people say they want to avoid Melody
I’ve had people say they want to avoid Alice

We don’t have the manpower to add new content for each path that needs to be created when the player avoid a character. So if we allowed players to avoid a character without new content, then we won’t be able to reference any event you may have had with any of the girls.

That means no character can ever acknowledge any relationship ever.

This game’s story is built around the actions the main character takes. They need to be able to reference them and acknowledge their existence.
Tell. Your. Story. That's what I'm here for - a "story with sex"...a sexy story that reminds me a little of when I was younger, and I'm just a sucker for a story well-told. I don't have to like every aspect of it and, if I'm really immersed, the poignant moments - the struggles, the retreats, the reversals - will sting a little.

I'll add this: there many good stories in VNs, including FF, that would give traditionally-distributed, successful novels a run for their money. This is, to me, an emerging form of literature and entertainment, and not every VN has to have a Joseph Campbell-ian "monomyth" story arc for me to be involved and entertained.

Just my 2 cents...

FFCreations - do your thing, you glorious bastards.
 
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Irgendwie Irgendwo

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But the question is... How do you think this will play out in the next update?

Everyone post your guesses below.

(The scene has already been written, so you can't influence me)
Well, if this was Brazzers we'd get two additional scenes in which the MC has to fuck himself out of the house. They actually did the three-part series twice. Usually the first scene is with the gf in her room or the shower, then she steals the protagonist's clothes and he has to escape the house naked. He then runs into the sister (who may have her BFF with her) and after that scene runs into the mother on the first floor close to the exit and has to do her too.

I'd say it won't play out this way here, but Karina will demand a little one-on-one time in the future in order to keep her mouth shut.
 
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Rising_Hell

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I'm curious to see how much of the actual story of the game is left because so far its been an amazing ride no pun intended.
The story is good and the characters are slutty as hell but in a understandable and Believable way. Its not just - oh she a Thot situation.
The Models my lord are they well made especially the Aunt i was shocked beyond belief seeing how crazy hot she was.
The story and the pacing is good all i hope for is a beautiful ending most likely a Harem King or something but i really look forward to it.
 

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Ok, time for typos and small problems.
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Oh, by the way, i can assume that aunt had sex with MCs father in her earliers, right? I think there was something in the previously in the story. Just to confirm, cause i completely forgot that, she was not my favourite character so i had no intention in remembering her story, and poof, now its valuable information. She also reminded me of Susan, with all that
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staff. Yep, a turn off.
 
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DrakoGhoul

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i have a question since it's Polyamorous for all the girls and they don't mind sharing will the future Orgy be unavoidable? Oh am i getting too ahead of myself? Will the 4some be unavoidable? Oh i can see it now Leah and Alice 69ing eachother while Melody is taking it from the back until leah pulls up and we all tag team Melody strictly dickly no more.

Mostly kidding about the above i think(;)). I don't know why anyone would want to avoid any of the girls here minus Susan i think i put the crazy in her but we're not going to talk about that. Though i do get every player is different with their taste.

Leah is actually the reason i started to play the game after seeing her Character Model just like Caroline in Milfy city who i found the most attractive. Was bummed at first because i thought she was going to stay a lesbian. So I'm glad she's got some more content outside of that one 3some unless next update K+L= :sneaky:
 
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