VN - Ren'Py - FreshWomen [S2 Ep.3 Part 1] [OppaiMan]

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Little variety of body shapes - too many over large tits and bums.
Adhego - spoils the reality of the drama and looks really out of place.
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There are good graphics, a possibly interesting story if it stops trying to pack too much in too soon .

Perhaps my rating is too low but I really detest the analytics thing and balloon tits and bums in an otherwise "realistic" graphic setting.

Characters are great. I appreciate a little bit of lewd right off the bat but typically prefer a slow pace. I hope the story is the biggest focus and the erotic stuff fits accordingly rather than pasted just to please impatient players. Good luck on your project I'll definitely come back for the next update.

amazing! love how the story progress. the mystery behind MC's father and all the characters really got me intrigue. not some cliche bang all the women and girls that kind of stuff. love the render. beautifully done for each scene. the detailing on the background, obviously dev team putting a lot of effort to create each scene. well done. love the girls. dialogue are realistic with a little bit humor well place. looking forward for the next update! definitely going to follow this one.

I normally do not review games so soon after first release, but since the dev spend 11 months before first release, I decided to give it a go and there is enough content to leave a review.

So I really enjoyed the game so far, but it still feels like an introduction to more to come.

Production value: Very Good
Renders: Very Good
Interface: Very Good
Sex scene: Very Erotic
Story: Average to Good

So all in all a very nice rounded start to the game. I can definitely see the influence of DRPC's game in here and it's not a bad thing. It's more in terms of UI, so for me that's a plus.

All in all a very promising start. If the story and game continues to build on a very solid start, it can become one of the best games on the site.

Although there are plenty of content for a first release, it's still early days. I could not bring myself to give it 5 stars yet. But a very good 4 stars from me. If the next 2 or 3 upgrades deliver, I will be upgrading my rating to 5 stars.

***Update 2022-01-12***
So I upgraded the game to 5 stars.

Was really a no brainer. I played 2 subsequent updates and I'm in love with the game.

10 minutes into this game , and... as a simple man, i just love the hot women. I like the shape of them with their exotic touch. Excellent renders

The writing is light and humor, which is my preference for these adult game. A bit cliche with the amnesic Mc, but i look pass it.

Totally recommended

FreshWomen [v0.1.3] - April 22, 2021

Story 5/5
I was surprised how good the story was as it's based upon the "moving to the big city" trope & it wasn't cliche at all but a totally fresh experience that I wasn't expecting. Can't wait to see what happens next!

Writing 4/5
Damn near perfect.

Art 5/5
Everyone was stunning & all the female characters are so gorgeous it's hard to choose a favourite.

Final Thoughts
FreshWomen is damn near perfect. It's one of the few rare games that actually have a great soundtrack that actually fits. It's a great VN that's off to an amazing start with massive potential to be something special when it's completed down the line. It's so hard to find something to criticize or find something wrong but I couldn't find anything besides the odd spelling errors & some awkward dialog. I'll definitely be looking forward to new updates!

Overall Rating: 5/5

It's ok. The game is competently made, the designs are good, the renders look good, the editing is solid and well punctuated by the soundtrack and sound effects. It's the writing that's not really there.

It's a very cliched motiff for a story, so something to set it apart from other stories in this genre would be good. The character interections all feel a bit off, like they're trying harder to characterize themselves to the player than trying to properly converse with the player character. This ends up having them feel a little one note.

Frustrated wife, nerdy girl-next-door, powerful boss lady, high energy, cold girl that will eventually warm up to you. Having those characters is fine, but some nuance in their characterization would be nice. This would also fix some weird dialogue problems.

All in all, the game is promissing enough, it just has some stuff to work out first

I really love this game !
Very good quality renders, I dont like animated render so it is a 5 stars !
Each girl is different (maybe we need a new blonde girl in futur updates ? )
I hope you will enjoy this game as much as I enjoyed it

So far, so great. The story isn't special, but nothing of the trashy "Young man living in a house full of whores"-style. The renders are almost perfect, top tier. Unfortunately, there aren't any animated scenes.. this is something I require for a 5 star-rating. I will follow the game development anyway, very curious.

Great job so far!

Top class renders, a wide variety of interesting girls and an enjoyable mechanic that asks you to rate each girl you meet in a different way - it feels like your choices are important and might lead to something in the future. The story has some mystery elements and plenty of choices that are clearly registered by the game and will hopefully lead to diverging paths in the future. I loved the first episode and can't wait for more.

PROS:
- Best renders of any game of it's type
- Models are all unique and act different

CONS
- H scenes are NOT animated
- Choices literally don't do anything.
- Forced sex scenes, feels like I am being raped. gtf off my cock I don't even know who you are!!!
- Very minor grammatical mistakes.

its a beautiful game
the render are good
the character model is beautiful
the story seems interesting enough
Cons:
need more animation especially on the sex scene
maybe fix the writing lil bit
Overall Good Game And I Enjoyed it

The advantages of this game are excellent renders and very beautiful girls.
The game looks great, the quality is undeniable.


But for me personally, one minus outweighs all the pluses mentioned - I've already seen it all in other college games (I think you all know their names)
The plot and writing of the characters are frankly weak, the author does not offer anything new and unique.
For me personally, it was absolutely not interesting to play.

This game is visually stunning and the models all look really amazing, as for the story I believe these games should be judge as they are... porn ; and I'm sorry but I've yet to see an academy award porn. However the story is enticing enough to keep you moving organically from one gorgeous woman to the next.
The sex scenes are as nice as could be without animations, and really the only thing that's missing right now is more content. Regardless, if the next updates continue or raise the quality of this one, I think this will be an awesome and very sexy game.

Renders are top notch! Alyssa and Lily are favorite so far. Pretty good for a first release. The game has lots of potential. I hope we get animated sex scenes in the future.

Hope the dev gets a lot of support for this game. Looking forward to playing the next release.

Good but short. Needs more animations and content. The best in this game - for it's short duration it already has sex. Like these games are supposed to. Intstead of typical scenario: watching=>groping=>hand=>mouth=>sex. I'm already sleeping when it comes to action usually.

Im going to be quick, the plot at the start is kinda old now, but the game is well writen, the sound is good and you can see this has a lot of potencial, theres no need to post a super extense review about the things people care more.

The renders are superveb, some models are not new for most of us but are super good rendered. The girls are super hot specially Chloe.

Review based on 0.1.2 and 0.1.3 versions.
Great renders, beautiful and different models, not ugly MC. Nothing to add about that part. It's all good.

About story...Well, it's initial release, so there not much for now, setting a bit generic (although with some original moments like MC's memory loss which is one of major moments in the story), but some of the most interesting games on this site also made in this setting, so it's about execution. For now story is alright and have some funny moments. What will happened in future... Will see.
Need to mention good choice and variety of music, which is really complementing the game.
About flaws... Animations are lacking (there is few). With it game would be better. But as dev said " My highest priority goal is hiring an animator and renting a GPU server so we can renders sex animations for episode 2. ". So we can expect that it will be fixed. For now it's not really a problem since it's only episode 1.

Honestly in this state i'd give this game 4 out 5 stars, but it mostly because of personal taste and early stage of development. But game looks really promising. For this potential i give it 5 stars.

First the graphics looks amazing and the models itself look "real" and not milf looks like 20 the variation of the character are also good we got Milf's teen's "College" girls.Second the story here makes accutaly sense the dialogues are well written ofc there are things that can be improved but for the first game from Oppai-Man that game in gereall is really good and i loved the first episode.