VN - Ren'Py - FreshWomen [S2 Ep.3 Part 1] [OppaiMan]

Hey Oppai-Man, great game man, beautiful models and interesting story, great render quality too. You really combined all the trending storylines in one game ( Student life, memory loss, mystery, corruption and all ). Waiting for the next update dude, keep it up

Version 1.0/1.3

I was fortunate enough to get to play this pre-release (hence the dual version number review).

Excellent character renders, with a nice variety when it comes to the female models. Not enough "smaller" built women for my personal tastes, but nothing balloon like either, so not really a complaint - especially considering this is an initial release.

Story flows quite nicely, if a little rushed at times, but nothing that'll take you out of the game.

For once, the MC is neither a whiney cunt or an overly chad-like alfa-fail - which seem to be the norm when it comes to protagonists in adult games.

Game mechanics are your standard VN affair, with a little "hunt and click" for special renders - represented in-game by magazines - but they're not hard to find, and dev has done a good job of placing them so they're obvious enough without being blatant.

All-in-all, I give 4/5 stars - with one being deducted purely due to the lack of smaller women, and the lack of sexual animations, which I know a LOT of people are going to demand.

Absolutely great renders and nice story
character desings are reall good and original not like clone characters we been seeings for a long time

as for the story MC is not a no brainer type and kind of funny fella

10/10

Very nice start.

Pros - Pretty much everything.
Cons - No animated scenes. Few nitpicky things, couple of weird plot moments, some girls proportions are a bit over the top. Nothing major.

Not quite a 5 star for me but could be in the future. Has a lot of promise hopefully won't take 11 months for the next episode

The first thing that struck me is the quality of the renders. They're un-friggin-believable. As someone who's rendered not a small number of scenes in Daz Studio, I tip my hat to whomever did this work.

The character designs are the next great strength of the game. Big breasts are overrepresented, but who's complaining? The litmus test for a character is whether they can hold your attention when they appear on screen, and this game's love interests pass with flying colors.

The third item of note is the size of this first release, which is hefty. And since episodes have a tendency to grow, it'll only get better from here.

Overall, a stellar beginning to what I'm sure will be a very popular, much loved game.

Nice looking and hot girls. Interesting story. Excelent renders. Maybe add more animations, but this game has a great potential. I like it very much so far. Hope you will continue with this game.
Keep going!

I have been one of the beta testers, and this is my review:

pros:
- A good life span, it took me an hour to finish it once.
- Interesting characters in particular Chloé and Dylan (original accent story).
- I like the idea of flashbacks.
- No real bugs.
- Beautiful animations.

cons:
- Dylan’s sentences are not always bold when he speaks in front of Chloe, which is supposed to represent the accent if I understood correctly.
- Some scenes don’t have music, or it takes time to start.
- Choices seem pretty obvious, but that’s just the beginning, I guess.


The part where Sue and MC pick up the suitcase is not clear to me, it may be one of the biggest flaws:

- Sue says they’re going to get the suitcase for Susan and then insinuate that she should be spied on. Ok But then why does Susan show up at the house and MC thinks it’s normal ?

- Why doesn’t she have to see him, he’s going to get the suitcase for her, no? Actually, either she shouldn’t be here, or Sue should say they’re gonna steal the suitcase.
- Then Sue has time to change and sunbathe as MC spends barely 5 minutes in the house… He should have a distraction, like a phone call with Julia for example, to keep him busy and give Sue time to go to the beach.


- Another negative point is the too long length of the introduction of too many characters, which makes the chapter quite flat without really daring scenes. My suggestion would be to bring Alyssa later in the story, which would leave more time for scenes with other characters.

- One scene that I would have found interesting is that Chloé doesn’t wear panties in the library, as she seemed to have a small exhibitionist side at the book store in her dress."
In fact, I see Chloe like the shy girl but who likes to provoke a little, and Julia the girl who provokes but does not take responsibility when things get more serious.

- The problem with getting too many characters in from the beginning is that you don’t spend enough time on each one of them, like the neighbour for example who has a sexy scene, but who is then forgotten…

Finally, I hope to see the cousin of childhood appear, unless she is already one of the girls…

It's been a long time since we saw a first release like this, I mean it's not just promising, it's so much more than that. Renders, girls looks awesome, I'm glad they are not all the same shape/size (boobs,ass).
Writing is on point as well, pretty good story so far with interesting charachters. I like Dylans secret too so yeah, it's a perfect start.

Very pleasant surprise in terms of overall renders, transition animations, and writing. The general premise of the MC losing his memory, moving somewhere new, and finding himself in the middle of group of very attractive women can be found pretty much anywhere but I only ever care that the game at hand is something worth playing and I do believe this game is worth playing

As mentioned, the renders and transitions are well above what I expected from an intro, mixing styles of BaDIK-AoA and CoBD seamlessly. Everything looked clean and crisp from that standpoint. Additionally, that singular animation of Alyssa running on a treadmill has to be one of the smoothest I've ever seen

Writing wise, there are minimal typos and everything flows relatively well. Still too early to make any definitive claim on how I think the plot is going since I'm waiting to see what will differentiate this game from others using similar story lines. I do think it was a little bit premature to have the MC and Lily have sex that quickly. I do understand that her problem with her husband had been relatively well established and there was some involved but it just seemed to rushed. First time through, I thought it was another daydream.

I do believe animations would improve the game dramatically and seeing how he's already done with some of them here, I have no doubt the dev is capable of doing so. That said, I won't hold it against him if he chooses not to. I will enjoy the game for what it's worth. Looking forward to future updates

For V0.1.3

Okay, after playing the game I am going to my honest opinion.
Pros:
+ This games mechanics are very similar to Being a Dik.
+ The characters are very beautiful and the background stuff is also cool.
+ The Music used is really good, for about 90% of the game.
+ The story so far has been very interesting.
Cons:
- At some parts around 10% of the game , the music used is very annoying.
- For now, EP1 does not have any sexual animations.
- At some parts of the game, I personally find the faces of characters a little weird like the eyes go somewhere else and eyebrows go somewhere else.

I personally really enjoyed playing the game. It has a really cool comedy, romance, mystery[i guess] so far. The music really matches the scene. I really hope that the second part comes soon cuz we are at a Cliff Hanger.

Not a bad game/story, does miss out a bit on a few things though. Lacks animations which would really improve the overall play. Story is ok, but still lacks depth. A well written and in depth story line is what attracts players.

Graphics are very good, and of course many of the characters are used in other games/stories as well, but doesn't take away from the overall.

Looking forward to seeing what this turns into.
It really does need animations though, if it is to be a more memorable game/story, then well done animations are a must, the longer the animations the better the game in my opinion.

Few of these games have such qualities that make them top in the ranks, Most have very little in the way of any story or quality.
This does have quality, lets see if the future of it includes better story and added animations.

[v0.1.3]

What an impressive first release! There are some games that just stand out right away in production value. You notice right away from the start up screen and main menu that this could be something special. Now, not all games that show such promise holds up very well as you actually play the game. This one did impress me very much though.

First of all, the first chapter has great pacing. It doesn't drag on too much with character introductions and over indulge in the small talk and getting to know each other conversations. People won't give you their whole life story immediately. It doesn't feel like an artificial introductory prologue and is quite enjoyable as a first chapter.

Graphically, this is probably the best I've seen recently. The game can stand side by side with the best rendered games on this site, maybe even surpassing most of the well known ones. Each model is amazingly hot with decent variety of physical features. The render to text ratio is high enough to maintain some dynamics to a scene as characters change gestures and facial expressions during a conversation. It doesn't quite have the super artistic and movie-like quality to the scene presentation that some very special devs manage to do, but the tone of the game is quite light hearted so the visual representation doesn't necessarily have to be atmospheric.

I would say the writing is quite good. There are no major issues with the grammar or wooden delivery of dialogues. A few typos here and there, but nothing to detract from the experience. The girls have varying personalities and goals/problems which all ties into the central plotline of father's death in some fashion. Well, the gamer girl didn't reveal anything yet. Anyways, this seems to point out that the script is quite well thought out to me. Advancing with the girl could advance the main plot in turn. That is more elegant than what many games do by separating the LI and the main plot thread.

Although there are glimpses of dark forces and shady business at play, the overall tone remains very light. Some scenes and occurrences are downright hilarious. There is a nice mix of humor, mystery, foreshadowing, cute moments, seriousness, perving out, and sexy times. The music also helps to set the mood appropriately.

The only potential issue I might raise is that the players have quite little control over the MC's personality. I generally do prefer a more "alpha" dude over a rather "simpy" average joe like this MC. However, I do understand the developmental implications of giving too much freedom in shaping a story and it's characters. It seems like these devs went with the more streamlined approach utilizing a rather defined MC as the point man. Our choices seem to be limited to "get on this girl's path or not?" and choices on the path to solving the central mystery. While I'm quite positive in my assessment of the other categories above, it is indeed too early to be confident about my guess on the choice systems and how they will play out.

I can see this game picking up steam very quickly. It could probably join the often mentioned top games of this site if there are no major debacles along the way.

really good, enjoyable, has some nice bells and whistles and has nothing that's truly a big problem (no massive barriers to content like grind or searching, nothing really bad about the story/writing). it could be written better in a way that'd be more erotic but it's not bad. few minor mistakes. not over bloated dialogue that feels like a text barrier to content. scene setup/ideas are okay/good. nothing special so far but i'm into it. it definitely has a more vanilla feel (even though there is like bdsm suggested later on and the boss's content is kinda down and lusty) which i think many will like and it is a nice . story did a good job of making me feel the sense of romantic interest in alyssa. lily and the gamer girl have immersive and distinct personalities too. i also really like the neighbor a lot but don't really know how that will develop (am interested tho). sue is also intriguing and can be potentially very good character/story wise in terms of contributing to the eroticism of their content.

like an example where i think maybe the game could be pushed a little further in the direction it's going is with the boss content, accentuating (subtley and artfully ofc) a sense that the MC is almost kinda falling for her but for her it's just a lusty fling type of thing. it's like the game knows that's what it is but then in it's actualy dialogue seems to kinda forget its direction a little. like it's almost being a little aimless despite the story elements being solid and i'd say clear. like if he said something like "your body is perfect. it's like your pussy was made for my cock." and then she replies (almost like ignoring what he's saying "hmmm.. i want it all the way inside" (like she's just focusing on orgasming and isn't trying to develop feelings or isn't into the flattering because it's like his attempt in the moment to establish mutual interest beyond just a fling. i think that makes it feel immersive and therefore more erotic in a way that isn't tacky/hyper fake like stereotypical porn but is still very much in line with how the scene fits into the story.

subtle adjustments like that can be the writing bells and whistles that really make the game shine from the writing aspect of it.


visually, the only criticism i have is the vaginas suffer a bit from hard-plastic/CGI vagina look. it's not the worst i've seen but it's not great. visually overall it's good like an 8.5/10. it's not the best out there but it's good and it does enough of everything right to have a good end result. where it seems a little on the stronger side is the visual bells and whistles like the wet/see through cloth material looked really nice and attractive. the way cloth falls in that cleavage shot was a lot better than many cloth-taped-on-to-the-skin that a lot of tops in many games, even some of the best looking games, often do.

the music production on this is pretty impressive. it almost seems like the dev wanted to be a musician at some point. a lot of original music and it's all fitting and adds to the game. at times it even adds to the sensuous allure. think it could be a little more in that direction as it is an erotic game, like maybe a sort of sensuous underlying feel to the non-sexual parts of the game, like it's waiting around the corner but this is a pretty tweaking-that-last-7%-to-perfection critique.

i am however a little disappointed there arent any SFX. especially with how produced the music is, i kinda would've thought there'd be at least minimal SFX (like well placed squishy/wet vagina sounds at least). doesn't have to have moans (which would take a voice actress, altho whoever the singer is sounds like she'd make wonderful erotic sounds but idk if she's open to that). just having erotic SFX (no moans) like squishy/wet sounds etc. i think wouldn't have to be that much work or budget or even highly produced to get an effective result that adds to the experience of the game, well worth its weight or like punching above its production cost/time.

Fairly linear so far, but the renders are top notch, the music is nice, didn't run into any obvious bugs, overall very well polished for an initial release.

Hopefully there will be a bit more complexity and choices that matter as additional updates are released but it's tough to really complain about that at this stage.

There's a surprisingly large amount of content for an initial release.

Really like the models, scenes, and animation in this game. The models really look unique and sexy which is my favorite part of the game. The story is also pretty good and you can tell the author spent time working on the game.

Keep up the good work!

been part of this since day one basically and know this will be a good Vn in the end when its fully done
needs some more work and more story but this isnt the end yet so keep it up and if i could give it more i would
even some of the girls i didnt like early on has made me like them more even just by the little bit they have shown so far so heres to more length and love to this game

The only ting for me that made this VN interesting is the gamer chick.

The renders are pretty good. No place holder scenes, or error messages.
The story is just flat. It's not memorable at all. I'll honestly probably forget about it in a week or so.
Three of the six women are interesting. The other three I could take or leave them.
I get the gist of the story, but honestly it feels like the MC is going to be sucked into a no win situation, and it also feels like there is going to be a mob style angle here. I mean, he already doesn't have a spine when it comes right down to it. Even with femdom there should be at least some spine in the MC.
You can't even put the one lady in her place for being rude just because you're near her.
I'm seriously on the fence with this VN. I'll try again with the next update. Unless it takes forever to release. I'll re-evaluate my rating after I've played through it. This is just my opinion. Please give it a try and decide for yourself. Good luck to the dev

So normally I don't leave reviews on new releases. But this one takes the cake. For being the first chapter, that actually feels like a chapter. It is really good. It has a good length to it.

Renders are top notch. The story is hilarious and really good. I didn't really feel the need to skip dialog because the story was pretty interesting.

I will definitely be watching out for this one.

This game deserves more than a 5 star
Breathtaking and intriguing
Starts off nice a quiet but buildsup fast enough and leaving me wanting more
I will definitly be watching and waiting for more
To anyone reading this
You need to try this game out or you might miss out

having beta tested the game, it shows great promise depending on were the story goes! So far it seems a great mistery
as for the Girls i am not a great Milf fan i prefer them on their 20´s and those are so far really attractive! being on ep.1 they have not been fleshed out properly but the 1st impressions are great! particularly the nerd and gamer girl but also your downstairs neighbor or your Co-worker!

your landlady and i mean real landlady not pornspeak for mother has attractive with massive jugglers, i find her attractive but big jugs are not my thing! she reminds me of Lemon from another game but with bigger tits!

i hope the cast is locked down since it allows for greater story progression/intensity/immersion and more time and quality with a handful of girls is always better than many badly made and developed!

i am rating it based on potential!