VN - Ren'Py - FreshWomen [S2 Ep.3 Part 2] [OppaiMan]

its a beautiful game
the render are good
the character model is beautiful
the story seems interesting enough
Cons:
need more animation especially on the sex scene
maybe fix the writing lil bit
Overall Good Game And I Enjoyed it

The advantages of this game are excellent renders and very beautiful girls.
The game looks great, the quality is undeniable.


But for me personally, one minus outweighs all the pluses mentioned - I've already seen it all in other college games (I think you all know their names)
The plot and writing of the characters are frankly weak, the author does not offer anything new and unique.
For me personally, it was absolutely not interesting to play.

This game is visually stunning and the models all look really amazing, as for the story I believe these games should be judge as they are... porn ; and I'm sorry but I've yet to see an academy award porn. However the story is enticing enough to keep you moving organically from one gorgeous woman to the next.
The sex scenes are as nice as could be without animations, and really the only thing that's missing right now is more content. Regardless, if the next updates continue or raise the quality of this one, I think this will be an awesome and very sexy game.

Renders are top notch! Alyssa and Lily are favorite so far. Pretty good for a first release. The game has lots of potential. I hope we get animated sex scenes in the future.

Hope the dev gets a lot of support for this game. Looking forward to playing the next release.

Good but short. Needs more animations and content. The best in this game - for it's short duration it already has sex. Like these games are supposed to. Intstead of typical scenario: watching=>groping=>hand=>mouth=>sex. I'm already sleeping when it comes to action usually.

Im going to be quick, the plot at the start is kinda old now, but the game is well writen, the sound is good and you can see this has a lot of potencial, theres no need to post a super extense review about the things people care more.

The renders are superveb, some models are not new for most of us but are super good rendered. The girls are super hot specially Chloe.

Review based on 0.1.2 and 0.1.3 versions.
Great renders, beautiful and different models, not ugly MC. Nothing to add about that part. It's all good.

About story...Well, it's initial release, so there not much for now, setting a bit generic (although with some original moments like MC's memory loss which is one of major moments in the story), but some of the most interesting games on this site also made in this setting, so it's about execution. For now story is alright and have some funny moments. What will happened in future... Will see.
Need to mention good choice and variety of music, which is really complementing the game.
About flaws... Animations are lacking (there is few). With it game would be better. But as dev said " My highest priority goal is hiring an animator and renting a GPU server so we can renders sex animations for episode 2. ". So we can expect that it will be fixed. For now it's not really a problem since it's only episode 1.

Honestly in this state i'd give this game 4 out 5 stars, but it mostly because of personal taste and early stage of development. But game looks really promising. For this potential i give it 5 stars.

First the graphics looks amazing and the models itself look "real" and not milf looks like 20 the variation of the character are also good we got Milf's teen's "College" girls.Second the story here makes accutaly sense the dialogues are well written ofc there are things that can be improved but for the first game from Oppai-Man that game in gereall is really good and i loved the first episode.

Was lucky enough to get picked by the dev (Oppai-Man) to play test the pre-release of this game. Based on that, renders look top-notch and nothing was grainy and you can tell that a lot of time was spent on them. As for the dialogue, this looks like it'll turn into a game where the story & relationships are going to be interesting and not really just skipped upon rather than most games where the sex is rushed and dialogue is just thrown in for fillers and is just right clicked through. For those who are not into the whole "land lady" thing in most games, this game actually has a real genuine land lady character. All the girls have their own unique personality and looks like you'll be able to pick and choose who you'd want to interact and pursue more of rather which is a big plus for those who have specific tastes. Lastly, the MC actually looks fine in my opinion and isn't one who is shorter compared to the women models


Having talked to the dev, this is just their starting release and they are still learning so it is understandable that animations are still not fully there and will be worked on once goals have been met. They seem to be still new and still settling in so updates can't be pushed through as fast as games like Tresure of Nadia by NLT, but I know that once updates are pushed out they'll be worth the wait. This game and the team look like they'll have a bright future and can't wait to see how this game turns out!

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Congrats on the awsome start! Great graphics, hot women, and a well written story.

I do have one recommendation and I hope the developer listens or reads this. The nude models/girls so far have all been vacant of any genital hair. They are completly shaven. Some of the women that are introduced need to have a landing strip or squirrel tail. Not just straight bald. Most girls dont shave it all. Thanks in advance for the consideration.

Hey Oppai-Man, great game man, beautiful models and interesting story, great render quality too. You really combined all the trending storylines in one game ( Student life, memory loss, mystery, corruption and all ). Waiting for the next update dude, keep it up

Version 1.0/1.3

I was fortunate enough to get to play this pre-release (hence the dual version number review).

Excellent character renders, with a nice variety when it comes to the female models. Not enough "smaller" built women for my personal tastes, but nothing balloon like either, so not really a complaint - especially considering this is an initial release.

Story flows quite nicely, if a little rushed at times, but nothing that'll take you out of the game.

For once, the MC is neither a whiney cunt or an overly chad-like alfa-fail - which seem to be the norm when it comes to protagonists in adult games.

Game mechanics are your standard VN affair, with a little "hunt and click" for special renders - represented in-game by magazines - but they're not hard to find, and dev has done a good job of placing them so they're obvious enough without being blatant.

All-in-all, I give 4/5 stars - with one being deducted purely due to the lack of smaller women, and the lack of sexual animations, which I know a LOT of people are going to demand.

Absolutely great renders and nice story
character desings are reall good and original not like clone characters we been seeings for a long time

as for the story MC is not a no brainer type and kind of funny fella

10/10

Very nice start.

Pros - Pretty much everything.
Cons - No animated scenes. Few nitpicky things, couple of weird plot moments, some girls proportions are a bit over the top. Nothing major.

Not quite a 5 star for me but could be in the future. Has a lot of promise hopefully won't take 11 months for the next episode

The first thing that struck me is the quality of the renders. They're un-friggin-believable. As someone who's rendered not a small number of scenes in Daz Studio, I tip my hat to whomever did this work.

The character designs are the next great strength of the game. Big breasts are overrepresented, but who's complaining? The litmus test for a character is whether they can hold your attention when they appear on screen, and this game's love interests pass with flying colors.

The third item of note is the size of this first release, which is hefty. And since episodes have a tendency to grow, it'll only get better from here.

Overall, a stellar beginning to what I'm sure will be a very popular, much loved game.

Nice looking and hot girls. Interesting story. Excelent renders. Maybe add more animations, but this game has a great potential. I like it very much so far. Hope you will continue with this game.
Keep going!

I have been one of the beta testers, and this is my review:

pros:
- A good life span, it took me an hour to finish it once.
- Interesting characters in particular Chloé and Dylan (original accent story).
- I like the idea of flashbacks.
- No real bugs.
- Beautiful animations.

cons:
- Dylan’s sentences are not always bold when he speaks in front of Chloe, which is supposed to represent the accent if I understood correctly.
- Some scenes don’t have music, or it takes time to start.
- Choices seem pretty obvious, but that’s just the beginning, I guess.


The part where Sue and MC pick up the suitcase is not clear to me, it may be one of the biggest flaws:

- Sue says they’re going to get the suitcase for Susan and then insinuate that she should be spied on. Ok But then why does Susan show up at the house and MC thinks it’s normal ?

- Why doesn’t she have to see him, he’s going to get the suitcase for her, no? Actually, either she shouldn’t be here, or Sue should say they’re gonna steal the suitcase.
- Then Sue has time to change and sunbathe as MC spends barely 5 minutes in the house… He should have a distraction, like a phone call with Julia for example, to keep him busy and give Sue time to go to the beach.


- Another negative point is the too long length of the introduction of too many characters, which makes the chapter quite flat without really daring scenes. My suggestion would be to bring Alyssa later in the story, which would leave more time for scenes with other characters.

- One scene that I would have found interesting is that Chloé doesn’t wear panties in the library, as she seemed to have a small exhibitionist side at the book store in her dress."
In fact, I see Chloe like the shy girl but who likes to provoke a little, and Julia the girl who provokes but does not take responsibility when things get more serious.

- The problem with getting too many characters in from the beginning is that you don’t spend enough time on each one of them, like the neighbour for example who has a sexy scene, but who is then forgotten…

Finally, I hope to see the cousin of childhood appear, unless she is already one of the girls…

It's been a long time since we saw a first release like this, I mean it's not just promising, it's so much more than that. Renders, girls looks awesome, I'm glad they are not all the same shape/size (boobs,ass).
Writing is on point as well, pretty good story so far with interesting charachters. I like Dylans secret too so yeah, it's a perfect start.

Very pleasant surprise in terms of overall renders, transition animations, and writing. The general premise of the MC losing his memory, moving somewhere new, and finding himself in the middle of group of very attractive women can be found pretty much anywhere but I only ever care that the game at hand is something worth playing and I do believe this game is worth playing

As mentioned, the renders and transitions are well above what I expected from an intro, mixing styles of BaDIK-AoA and CoBD seamlessly. Everything looked clean and crisp from that standpoint. Additionally, that singular animation of Alyssa running on a treadmill has to be one of the smoothest I've ever seen

Writing wise, there are minimal typos and everything flows relatively well. Still too early to make any definitive claim on how I think the plot is going since I'm waiting to see what will differentiate this game from others using similar story lines. I do think it was a little bit premature to have the MC and Lily have sex that quickly. I do understand that her problem with her husband had been relatively well established and there was some involved but it just seemed to rushed. First time through, I thought it was another daydream.

I do believe animations would improve the game dramatically and seeing how he's already done with some of them here, I have no doubt the dev is capable of doing so. That said, I won't hold it against him if he chooses not to. I will enjoy the game for what it's worth. Looking forward to future updates

For V0.1.3

Okay, after playing the game I am going to my honest opinion.
Pros:
+ This games mechanics are very similar to Being a Dik.
+ The characters are very beautiful and the background stuff is also cool.
+ The Music used is really good, for about 90% of the game.
+ The story so far has been very interesting.
Cons:
- At some parts around 10% of the game , the music used is very annoying.
- For now, EP1 does not have any sexual animations.
- At some parts of the game, I personally find the faces of characters a little weird like the eyes go somewhere else and eyebrows go somewhere else.

I personally really enjoyed playing the game. It has a really cool comedy, romance, mystery[i guess] so far. The music really matches the scene. I really hope that the second part comes soon cuz we are at a Cliff Hanger.