VN - Ren'Py - FreshWomen [S2 Ep.3 Part 2] [OppaiMan]

Not a bad game/story, does miss out a bit on a few things though. Lacks animations which would really improve the overall play. Story is ok, but still lacks depth. A well written and in depth story line is what attracts players.

Graphics are very good, and of course many of the characters are used in other games/stories as well, but doesn't take away from the overall.

Looking forward to seeing what this turns into.
It really does need animations though, if it is to be a more memorable game/story, then well done animations are a must, the longer the animations the better the game in my opinion.

Few of these games have such qualities that make them top in the ranks, Most have very little in the way of any story or quality.
This does have quality, lets see if the future of it includes better story and added animations.

[v0.1.3]

What an impressive first release! There are some games that just stand out right away in production value. You notice right away from the start up screen and main menu that this could be something special. Now, not all games that show such promise holds up very well as you actually play the game. This one did impress me very much though.

First of all, the first chapter has great pacing. It doesn't drag on too much with character introductions and over indulge in the small talk and getting to know each other conversations. People won't give you their whole life story immediately. It doesn't feel like an artificial introductory prologue and is quite enjoyable as a first chapter.

Graphically, this is probably the best I've seen recently. The game can stand side by side with the best rendered games on this site, maybe even surpassing most of the well known ones. Each model is amazingly hot with decent variety of physical features. The render to text ratio is high enough to maintain some dynamics to a scene as characters change gestures and facial expressions during a conversation. It doesn't quite have the super artistic and movie-like quality to the scene presentation that some very special devs manage to do, but the tone of the game is quite light hearted so the visual representation doesn't necessarily have to be atmospheric.

I would say the writing is quite good. There are no major issues with the grammar or wooden delivery of dialogues. A few typos here and there, but nothing to detract from the experience. The girls have varying personalities and goals/problems which all ties into the central plotline of father's death in some fashion. Well, the gamer girl didn't reveal anything yet. Anyways, this seems to point out that the script is quite well thought out to me. Advancing with the girl could advance the main plot in turn. That is more elegant than what many games do by separating the LI and the main plot thread.

Although there are glimpses of dark forces and shady business at play, the overall tone remains very light. Some scenes and occurrences are downright hilarious. There is a nice mix of humor, mystery, foreshadowing, cute moments, seriousness, perving out, and sexy times. The music also helps to set the mood appropriately.

The only potential issue I might raise is that the players have quite little control over the MC's personality. I generally do prefer a more "alpha" dude over a rather "simpy" average joe like this MC. However, I do understand the developmental implications of giving too much freedom in shaping a story and it's characters. It seems like these devs went with the more streamlined approach utilizing a rather defined MC as the point man. Our choices seem to be limited to "get on this girl's path or not?" and choices on the path to solving the central mystery. While I'm quite positive in my assessment of the other categories above, it is indeed too early to be confident about my guess on the choice systems and how they will play out.

I can see this game picking up steam very quickly. It could probably join the often mentioned top games of this site if there are no major debacles along the way.

really good, enjoyable, has some nice bells and whistles and has nothing that's truly a big problem (no massive barriers to content like grind or searching, nothing really bad about the story/writing). it could be written better in a way that'd be more erotic but it's not bad. few minor mistakes. not over bloated dialogue that feels like a text barrier to content. scene setup/ideas are okay/good. nothing special so far but i'm into it. it definitely has a more vanilla feel (even though there is like bdsm suggested later on and the boss's content is kinda down and lusty) which i think many will like and it is a nice . story did a good job of making me feel the sense of romantic interest in alyssa. lily and the gamer girl have immersive and distinct personalities too. i also really like the neighbor a lot but don't really know how that will develop (am interested tho). sue is also intriguing and can be potentially very good character/story wise in terms of contributing to the eroticism of their content.

like an example where i think maybe the game could be pushed a little further in the direction it's going is with the boss content, accentuating (subtley and artfully ofc) a sense that the MC is almost kinda falling for her but for her it's just a lusty fling type of thing. it's like the game knows that's what it is but then in it's actualy dialogue seems to kinda forget its direction a little. like it's almost being a little aimless despite the story elements being solid and i'd say clear. like if he said something like "your body is perfect. it's like your pussy was made for my cock." and then she replies (almost like ignoring what he's saying "hmmm.. i want it all the way inside" (like she's just focusing on orgasming and isn't trying to develop feelings or isn't into the flattering because it's like his attempt in the moment to establish mutual interest beyond just a fling. i think that makes it feel immersive and therefore more erotic in a way that isn't tacky/hyper fake like stereotypical porn but is still very much in line with how the scene fits into the story.

subtle adjustments like that can be the writing bells and whistles that really make the game shine from the writing aspect of it.


visually, the only criticism i have is the vaginas suffer a bit from hard-plastic/CGI vagina look. it's not the worst i've seen but it's not great. visually overall it's good like an 8.5/10. it's not the best out there but it's good and it does enough of everything right to have a good end result. where it seems a little on the stronger side is the visual bells and whistles like the wet/see through cloth material looked really nice and attractive. the way cloth falls in that cleavage shot was a lot better than many cloth-taped-on-to-the-skin that a lot of tops in many games, even some of the best looking games, often do.

the music production on this is pretty impressive. it almost seems like the dev wanted to be a musician at some point. a lot of original music and it's all fitting and adds to the game. at times it even adds to the sensuous allure. think it could be a little more in that direction as it is an erotic game, like maybe a sort of sensuous underlying feel to the non-sexual parts of the game, like it's waiting around the corner but this is a pretty tweaking-that-last-7%-to-perfection critique.

i am however a little disappointed there arent any SFX. especially with how produced the music is, i kinda would've thought there'd be at least minimal SFX (like well placed squishy/wet vagina sounds at least). doesn't have to have moans (which would take a voice actress, altho whoever the singer is sounds like she'd make wonderful erotic sounds but idk if she's open to that). just having erotic SFX (no moans) like squishy/wet sounds etc. i think wouldn't have to be that much work or budget or even highly produced to get an effective result that adds to the experience of the game, well worth its weight or like punching above its production cost/time.

Fairly linear so far, but the renders are top notch, the music is nice, didn't run into any obvious bugs, overall very well polished for an initial release.

Hopefully there will be a bit more complexity and choices that matter as additional updates are released but it's tough to really complain about that at this stage.

There's a surprisingly large amount of content for an initial release.

Really like the models, scenes, and animation in this game. The models really look unique and sexy which is my favorite part of the game. The story is also pretty good and you can tell the author spent time working on the game.

Keep up the good work!

been part of this since day one basically and know this will be a good Vn in the end when its fully done
needs some more work and more story but this isnt the end yet so keep it up and if i could give it more i would
even some of the girls i didnt like early on has made me like them more even just by the little bit they have shown so far so heres to more length and love to this game

The only ting for me that made this VN interesting is the gamer chick.

The renders are pretty good. No place holder scenes, or error messages.
The story is just flat. It's not memorable at all. I'll honestly probably forget about it in a week or so.
Three of the six women are interesting. The other three I could take or leave them.
I get the gist of the story, but honestly it feels like the MC is going to be sucked into a no win situation, and it also feels like there is going to be a mob style angle here. I mean, he already doesn't have a spine when it comes right down to it. Even with femdom there should be at least some spine in the MC.
You can't even put the one lady in her place for being rude just because you're near her.
I'm seriously on the fence with this VN. I'll try again with the next update. Unless it takes forever to release. I'll re-evaluate my rating after I've played through it. This is just my opinion. Please give it a try and decide for yourself. Good luck to the dev

So normally I don't leave reviews on new releases. But this one takes the cake. For being the first chapter, that actually feels like a chapter. It is really good. It has a good length to it.

Renders are top notch. The story is hilarious and really good. I didn't really feel the need to skip dialog because the story was pretty interesting.

I will definitely be watching out for this one.

This game deserves more than a 5 star
Breathtaking and intriguing
Starts off nice a quiet but buildsup fast enough and leaving me wanting more
I will definitly be watching and waiting for more
To anyone reading this
You need to try this game out or you might miss out

having beta tested the game, it shows great promise depending on were the story goes! So far it seems a great mistery
as for the Girls i am not a great Milf fan i prefer them on their 20´s and those are so far really attractive! being on ep.1 they have not been fleshed out properly but the 1st impressions are great! particularly the nerd and gamer girl but also your downstairs neighbor or your Co-worker!

your landlady and i mean real landlady not pornspeak for mother has attractive with massive jugglers, i find her attractive but big jugs are not my thing! she reminds me of Lemon from another game but with bigger tits!

i hope the cast is locked down since it allows for greater story progression/intensity/immersion and more time and quality with a handful of girls is always better than many badly made and developed!

i am rating it based on potential!

This is an early review and applies only to Episode One.

Overall really a well done first installment, the renders overall are impressive, though the plot seems a bit overly convoluted (the entire memory loss didn't seem to change the character in anyway besides giving him faulty memories) though I hope the developer has a reason for it which we will learn soon. I really didn't see any grammatical errors, at least nothing glaring that stands out anyway. Below are some additional thoughts regarding choices and personal preferences.

A few things:

1) The MILFs and Sue (the younger) seem to be set up to be bitches who order the MC around. Not overly fond of controlling women, thus I didn't like either Lily or Susan the Elder or Sue the Younger. YMMV

2) I really dislike dream sex scenes as I feel it ruins the moment when the MC finally scores with the woman. Be warned if you are of similar taste as you have a dream scene even if you barely interacted with the woman the MC fantasizes about. It would be nice if the developer gave the player a way to skip dream sex scenes and fantasies. Also would love to see a MC who has a vivid dream about someone and feels some embarrassment or awkwardness when they next encounter that person.
3) I loved Dylan, found him hilarious. I look forward to the MC "helping" him. It would be great if the developer gave us the option to either get him into further trouble or lessen the trouble he is already in (maybe help him with learning Russian?).
4) All of the Love Interests are hot though I think Chloe is my favorite. And normally I go for redheads but I really don't like Lily
5) The gratuitous panty shots don't do anything for me. If we are supposed to be the MC then I would prefer to only see what he should be able to see. The upskirt shots just show that all of the women share a propensity for black thongs.
6) 7) I play these games for the ability to make choices, Bioware and Telltale Games are two of my favorite (or former favorite) developers because I like to make choices that matter in games. I like to be able to play one of these games as a horndog that tries to fuck everyone and a second time as a monk that tries to fuck no one. We don't have that choice in this game which reduces the replayability of it.

Anyway, that's just me. I am sure there are many people who will like this the way it is. I am giving it 4 stars for the final part of the game, if not for that I would give it 5.

Story (10/10)

A boy strucked by a thunder, gain a superpower to forget every memory he has so that he will have a lot of storage to remember his future wife's birthday, and wedding anniversary.
Joke aside, it's really an interesting background story, lots of mystery, his father shady business and disappearance.

Characters (10/10)

If this is not a harem VN, I might feel depressed later because I won't be able to choose which LI to pursue (multiple playthrough then).
Every girls are beautiful and their personality are really interesting, dev gives the player wide range of personality.
Also don't forget our slav best boy Dylan, with this initial release, I feel that he has a potential to be at least one of the best wingman in avn history.

Renders (10/10)

I find the renders as the best part of this game.
Wha can I say, the renders, renders me speechless.
Every models are gorgeous, eventhough Daz model usually looks similar between each VN, however in this game, the models are very original.
Well I can recognize some of the hair style used, however I still feel that the models are unique and new to me.
Really props to the dev for the amazing works on the renders.

Content (9/10)

Quite good amount of contents for a first release but I need Moarrrr.
As an introductory chapter of the story, dev have done a great job to gives player quite a lot play time.
However I found that the chapter ends abruptly, it's a bit lack of conclusion to close the introductory chapter.

Gameplay (10/10)

Gameplay is fairly simple and I really enjoyed it.
I love free roam without grinding it kinds of give player immersion without wasted so much time.
I also really love the idea of letting player gives an impression of each girl he had met before, I found this very original and interesting.

Lewd scenes (9/10)

Good amount of lewd scenes for initial release. There's no animation, but every scene brings out tons of sensuality and it's really hot.
Personally I don't enjoy lewd dream scene, because it kind of spoil the real scene further down the story.

Five stars from me.
Bonus one star because I didn't found any bugs during my playthrough.
Thanks again for the opportunity to test this project.
I really can see and feel how much works, passion and Oppais dev gives with this project,

Superb start. A lot of content for a first release. Visually impressive, compeling story. You can see the effort put on each render. The dev deserves all the suport he can get so he can continue with this amazing work.

Great first update! Everything from the renderings, gameplay, and overall aesthetic of the game are amazing! It is rare to see so much work put out for a first release, and I am looking forward to further updates

Playing this game on v0.1.3 and its obvious the creator put a lot of hard working into the game and it payed off.

The renders are great, the initial launch came with a solid amount of content and definitely a game to download.

Only downsides are that the animations could use a few more frames and the story needs more developing, but the pros far outwaythe cons making me give this a 5 star rating.

I just tested version 0.1.3.

The truth is that the game has an astonishing graphic quality but in every other way it falls short, at least for the moment.

I think it can improve a lot in a few months, but the dev should make a point of improving the story and the dialogues.

I'll be back in a few months to see how things are going and re-rate this novel.