Right now, I'm just focused on redoing Chapter 1, and trying to keep its reverberations through the rest of the plot minimal. I'm adding a platonic route, so that'll need to be referenced in Chapter 3, when Nicki returns. That'll mostly just mean adding dialogue and some extra renders. Then there's the naked hot tub scene, which I should probably add a clothed version to, which would be a couple hours of work just loading renders and adding clothes to both characters.
There's really not
that much stuff I think needs to be
fixed. And most of it is contained in the first three chapters, and is just limited to wonky art. The city background in this Ashe sequence needs to be lowered in some spots, and the lighting for the bookstore scene is just super busted. My posing was also a little suspect, in those first three chapters. After that, I think I hit my stride, and the art looks pretty consistent.
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There's some stuff I'd like to add that I never had time for originally -- Ashe was meant to have a couple extra scenes in Chapter 7, and Risa was meant to have more sexual positions in Chapter 9, for example. And there's the occasional goof, like wine bottles reappearing and disappearing in Chapter 7, which would take me a day or so to fix.
There's also little bits of plot which I need to change, because my plans shifted a bit from the beginning of the story. This just means a few lines of dialogue being re-written, here and there. But, like I said -- right now I'm just worried about Chapter 1.
It is! The very beginning of the new Chapter 1 opens with Guy watching tech-bro Kobalt's livestream, dumping all his money into it, and then waking up horrified to discover what he's done. Then we get a little fade from past to present, which I've already teased on the blogs.
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