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But, as I continued writing the story, I kept writing Nicki and Guy as two people that had a deep familiarity with each other, which wouldn't be explained by a 9-to-5 friendship. So, the new and improved Chapter 1 will showcase a bit more of that close friendship, and iron out some of that stuff.
Hmm, this made me wonder, if the first chapter was like that from the start if people would have found that it drags too much. :unsure:
Ofc us want to see more of them, because we are already invested in the characters, but I'm curious how new players will perceive it.
a bit more
I guess it depends on this.
 
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Just personal preference, but as a Navy vet, I accept discreet tattoos as a personal choice ... but find excessive or facial tats a BIG turnoff on any without Maori blood.
Nicki's decorations are a big part of her life choices and trials, and are not who she is today. With her changes and MC's largess, I could see some removal of most of them, yet leaving some modest reminders, hopefully decorative and an object lesson for her and others.
I admire the adventuresome twists and plot work.
 
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This is the scene I was talking about everyone
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I know it's a porn game but damn the feelings I had here were strong.
my favorite scene in the game is the one right after that where she talks to the MC and explains everything she did while on her own. That is the scene that made me choose Nicki over anyone else well until Risa came in with her backstory now I like both the same but id probably still pick Nicki over Risa.
 
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my favorite scene in the game is the one right after that where she talks to the MC and explains everything she did while on her own. That is the scene that made me choose Nicki over anyone else well until Risa came in with her backstory now I like both the same but id probably still pick Nicki over Risa.
Risa is so hot Dess.

I remember wanting to carry her like a bride across the threshold during chapter nine.
 

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Risa is so hot Dess.

I remember wanting to carry her like a bride across the threshold during chapter nine.
chapter 9 made me want to put a ring on her and take her away from her dad. Not gonna lie her lewd scene in her house if you sweet and gentle to her she looked so hot one of my favorite lewd scenes in the game. First time I saw it made me quite horny lol.
 

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This is the scene I was talking about everyone
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I know it's a porn game but damn the feelings I had here were strong.
my favorite scene in the game is the one right after that where she talks to the MC and explains everything she did while on her own. That is the scene that made me choose Nicki over anyone else well until Risa came in with her backstory now I like both the same but id probably still pick Nicki over Risa.
Is that the scene where I try to kick her out but NeonGhosts doesn't let me?:unsure: :Kappa: :Kappa:
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I fucking loved chapter nine. It's my second favourite so far after ten. Chapter four rounds out my top three.
 

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I fucking loved chapter nine. It's my second favourite so far after ten. Chapter four rounds out my top three.
lol we have the same ranking of Chapter 10 better than chapter 9 and I didn't even play any of Mason's sex scenes. It's a great chapter even without the Mason stuff had alot of good Nikki content , Viola stuff was cute as hell and made me love her character even more than finally the ending with Cassie made me go from I don't care much for her to I want her now!!! Which is funny cause she barley had any context or scenes yet but someone Neon made me love her with very little content
 
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I fucking loved chapter nine. It's my second favourite so far after ten. Chapter four rounds out my top three.
Any chapter that doesn't focus on Brittani, Ashe, Viola and now Cassie is a 0/10 for me. Cutting room floor material:cautious:
yea that horrifying o face nikki made in the first chapter ensured that Id never ever be into nikki
Earlier chapter expressions were...well, they were.
 

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there was (is?) even a patch to remove her :ROFLMAO: But I kinda like her a lot nowadays, her romance/GF route is pretty neat.
 
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