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Hmm, this made me wonder, if the first chapter was like that from the start if people would have found that it drags too much.But, as I continued writing the story, I kept writing Nicki and Guy as two people that had a deep familiarity with each other, which wouldn't be explained by a 9-to-5 friendship. So, the new and improved Chapter 1 will showcase a bit more of that close friendship, and iron out some of that stuff.
Ofc us want to see more of them, because we are already invested in the characters, but I'm curious how new players will perceive it.
I guess it depends on this.a bit more