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Yes, but I'm going to avoid giving a date until we're a bit closer. I thought I'd have it out in February, but that obviously didn't happen. I added some scenes, so this update will be way more of a full-length chapter. Currently around 420 renders, with another 600+ to go. But, I've got big chunks of the script written, so I'm planning to knock out a lot of scenes over the next week or two, and see where we're at.

This chapter's been a little complicated by a lot of new locations, and a few lengthy sex scenes. But, I think it'll be worth the wait.

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Romance is prepared on the bed, how is it to love Joshy, but in reality... a hard fuck takes place :KEK:
 

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There's definitely some truth to that. I don't want to conflate kinky masochism with a desire to punish oneself, necessarily.. But, I think that it was probably a kink Ashe always had, which rose to the fore after Wren's accident.



Yeah, all this. I don't like to get too into the discussion for the dark options for FiN, but I want to smooth out a lot of that stuff in Chapter One. It'll turn Nicki's dark path into one where she can reasonably write the events of Chapter One off as more like a mistake borne of too much wine and simmering feelings, than an act of deliberate cruelty.



Yeah, so basically what happened with this version was that I wanted to get it out for Christmas Day. I did so, but it ended pretty anti-climatically, with Risa offering to dress Guy. So, I wanted to get it to a proper chapter ending, with a tease for what's ahead. Ergo I added the scene where we meet Markus, Lucien, and the half-dressed girl known as Cherry. I just wanted to push ahead and give people an actual cliffhanger, rather than.. Risa going to get Guy a shirt.

A lot of people have kind of read into the Lucien Graves thing, and I mean.. How do you introduce yourself to people? *shrug!* Lucien's name does have some special meaning, but we'll learn more about that next chapter.

And don't worry, next update will have an array of options for Risa, across the alignment spectrum. >_>



Yes, but I'm going to avoid giving a date until we're a bit closer. I thought I'd have it out in February, but that obviously didn't happen. I added some scenes, so this update will be way more of a full-length chapter. Currently around 420 renders, with another 600+ to go. But, I've got big chunks of the script written, so I'm planning to knock out a lot of scenes over the next week or two, and see where we're at.

This chapter's been a little complicated by a lot of new locations, and a few lengthy sex scenes. But, I think it'll be worth the wait.

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LOL the heart made of rose petals on the rape bed is a good touch. I bet, hopeless romantic that he is, that Guy is even going to lube up first. Maybe even light a candle and put on some soft rock.
 

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Maybe the reason Guy has Risa flung over his shoulder like that.
Is because she passed out and Guy is simply going to gently tuck her into bed.
and give her a kiss on the forehead.

Thats what I would do in that situation any way.
Well, everything except the kiss because she can't consent to it.
 

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Maybe the reason Guy has Risa flung over his shoulder like that.
Is because she passed out and Guy is simply going to gently tuck her into bed.
and give her a kiss on the forehead.

Thats what I would do in that situation any way.
Well, everything except the kiss because she can't consent to it.
I love your naive takes if someone is writing a villain and need a yes man to paint everything wrong he does with pink brushes and give absurd scenarios for bad behavior you sir is the one.
 
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LOL the heart made of rose petals on the rape bed is a good touch. I bet, hopeless romantic that he is, that Guy is even going to lube up first. Maybe even light a candle and put on some soft rock.
Exactly lmao.

I just wish that in the "Good Guy" route there is an option to have a consensual scene with Risa, most likely that won't be the case though.
There's no scenes with Viola yet either on the good route, however I think that will be quite a long wait.
 

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Exactly lmao.

I just wish that in the "Good Guy" route there is an option to have a consensual scene with Risa, most likely that won't be the case though.
There's no scenes with Viola yet either on the good route, however I think that will be quite a long wait.
Romantic sex scenes with Risa & Viola will most likely happen later in the story.
I like that Neon is taking time in building the relationships first.

It will make the romance path for each girl even better imo.
 

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General FYI: I put up a Mason photoset on Patreon and SubStar, available for $2 subs. It has Mason trying on some outfits while waiting for Guy to come home.. >_>

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Romantic sex scenes with Risa & Viola will most likely happen later in the story.
I like that Neon is taking time in building the relationships first.

It will make the romance path for each girl even better imo.
Spoilers, but Risa does has a love/affection sex scene in this one, and the hotel scene isn't necessarily a dark route exclusive.
 

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We'll get into Mason's feelings vis a vis dress-up time, next chapter. :D
I have been wondering for a while about how Mason wants to dress.
That sounds like it's going to be an interesting scene.

I just know he is going to send me broke though because nice clothes aren't cheap.
And I'm buying nothing but the best for my baby.
 
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Yeah, all this. I don't like to get too into the discussion for the dark options for FiN, but I want to smooth out a lot of that stuff in Chapter One. It'll turn Nicki's dark path into one where she can reasonably write the events of Chapter One off as more like a mistake borne of too much wine and simmering feelings, than an act of deliberate cruelty.
As the creator, you have the full right to any edits to any aspect you want.

I just wanted to question an angle that why the assault option ( which I actually skipped fast on that playthru, because... it is sickening) as it is now, it lends to a true monster MC.

Which is kinda lending itself to a really dark disturbed maniacal MC's playthru.

Do you wonder if toning it down will take away from that route MC's monstrousness.... to be more acceptable? Which I don't think it would work well.

Again, your story. Just my two cents.
 

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Maybe the reason Guy has Risa flung over his shoulder like that.
Is because she passed out and Guy is simply going to gently tuck her into bed.
and give her a kiss on the forehead.

Thats what I would do in that situation any way.
Well, everything except the kiss because she can't consent to it.
I hope you are right when I saw that render first thing that came to my mind is something bad happened at the drug den, so I like your version better.
 
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