The whole reason MANY people like this game is the writing is of a much higher caliber. If you are trying to get people interested in your product, you want to have your best work right from the start so they keep with it, particularly if you want them to buy a second product when it comes out in a few years. And you are dead wrong about grammar. Bad grammar makes a story hard to understand, and will instantly take me out of my headspace. I do, however, question how you can imagine that's what I meant by writing - grammar matters, sure, but far more important is an well structured story, compelling characters, engaging dialog, and concise but clear world building. I'm not just playing to jerk off - I can go to Porn Hub if that's all I want. I want story telling. And that is what the fans of THIS game are here for.
And same with the graphics - the first chapter was trash compared to the rest of the game - not at all good marketing. And if other games have trash graphics top to bottom, well, this game aspires to (and achieves) something better. Go play some AI junk if you want, or one of the Russian games that give the exact same information 30 times over 3 different paper doll images while they harvest all your personal data from your PC. Those of us who actually pay for this game do so because we want something better.