VN Ren'Py Abandoned From Darkness [v0.03] [Pretty Porn Piece]

[PrettyPornPiece]

I added a line about the sharing to avoid confusion. If a mod finds it better somewhere else they are free to move it of course.

 

[MuffinManWantsPregnancy]

you can play as an nice guy or as an asshole. and writing is good so far.

Wait we can play as an asshole? Shiiiiiiiiiiiiiit dl'ing. And it's nice to know that the scene that shall not be named can be avoided.

 

[Avaron1974]

It doesn't matter whose girl it is, people are going to see it as the MC being cucked. The people who complain about NTR are the type that see any girl not with the MC as NTR, Cuckoldry, etc. Doesn't matter if story wise it's another couple in the game, the MC is being cucked by that couple, and so on. The only way to satisfy them is that if every female character in the game is a single virgin, even the MC's mom, or the MC is a cuck.

Yeah but nobody listens to those people anymore.

The few that have complained about stuff in that manner are on block by a lot of devs and the rest just read their posts for a giggle.

Everyone knows who they are by now, it's the same group every time and are pretty much looked at as the forum clowns.

 

[Cernunnos.]

He's sharing with you, it's his girl.

That doesn't change my question which was answered by someone else.

 

[Jimbog]

Not too bad, the MC isn't a jerk or at least doesn't have to be, the relationship between the MC and his two married friends seems just fine in the context of the game. I have to say that I don't remember seeing a relationship like that in a game before and in my books it works just fine. Looking forward to the first update.

 

[Avaron1974]

It would be helpful if this information was in the OP, so that people would not make incorrect assumptions and hopefully we will not end up with the same questions being repeatedly asked.

It will be asked repeatedly anyway because people don't read.

I've seen warning signs in red type with the letters as large as they will go and people still ask.

Common sense went the way of the Tiger and is now an endangered species.

 

[yihman1]

I like the way this game starts out. Seems like it's going to be a white bull with a black cuck friend and the white dude cucks the black dude and you play as the white dude. Also, white guy has bigger cock.

Way too often is an NTR game from the cuck perspective, and way to often is a black dude the bull. Nice change up from the norm.

Breaks 3 big norms for NTR games that are so tiresome.

Play as cuck Play as bull
White cuck Black cuck
Big black cock Big White cock

 

[LWtbo]

Don't pick on the poorly people it not there fault they have OP Blindness and can only see pictures not the words.
It should be a clinically diagnosed illness any year now.

 

[-CookieMonster666-]

"How close will you stay with your friends?" the OP asks. The answer seems pretty clear if you decide to have the threesome.

 

[SpyderArachnid]

Not bad, the dialogue is pretty short and to the point, not much narration, but that's not always a bad thing. At least the english is good lol. The only bothersome thing was the play by play description of the sex scene. Felt like I was watching a soccer commentator going off as someone was about to score a goal lol.

Other than that, wasn't all that bad. Like before, short and to the point. The diner scene was fun though. And what's with the google link on the main menu? A bit weird lol. But overall, pretty decent start. I'll keep a watch to see where it goes.

 

[Goodthrust]

we need more gangbangs !

 

[PrettyPornPiece]

Not bad, the dialogue is pretty short and to the point, not much narration, but that's not always a bad thing. At least the english is good lol. The only bothersome thing was the play by play description of the sex scene. Felt like I was watching a soccer commentator going off as someone was about to score a goal lol.

Other than that, wasn't all that bad. Like before, short and to the point. The diner scene was fun though. And what's with the google link on the main menu? A bit weird lol. But overall, pretty decent start. I'll keep a watch to see where it goes.

I just have the Google link there as a placeholder until my SubscribeStar page is approved. I didn't even have my page yet when I exported this. That will be replaced by 0.02 lol. Thanks for the feedback btw.

 

[fabulous007]

That second pic made me download the game instantly, let's see if it's as hot as it seems.


edit: Done, short but nice. I really like the relationship between the three friends, few barriers between them. I chose the asshole path and the two friends seemed themselves a bit harsh towards others, does that mean their personality is influenced by that choice you make at the beginning too ?
Lindsey really has a beautiful face, and she's hot (the only weird detail I noticed is how you can hardly see her belly button, but I'm probably the only one that even cares lol).
The other girl is cute, a part of me kind of hope we can corrupt her a bit, and even maybe one day share her too with the best friend too. But I'll probably be fine with whatever you have in mind, the game is promising as it is.

 

[grohotor]

It doesn't matter whose girl it is, people are going to see it as the MC being cucked. The people who complain about NTR are the type that see any girl not with the MC as NTR, Cuckoldry, etc. Doesn't matter if story wise it's another couple in the game, the MC is being cucked by that couple, and so on. The only way to satisfy them is that if every female character in the game is a single virgin, even the MC's mom, or the MC is a cuck.

I swear some of you guys lack something. The most important thing about NTR is the jealousy aspect. Its like saying that a mistress cant get jealous of the wife. Its fucking ridiculous because this happens all the time.
The oficiall description of the tag says this.

• Ntr [Designed to cause jealousy by having the romantic interest involved with someone other than the MC.]

nowhere does it mention who the official partner and her opinion on this matter doesn't matter because its about jealousy.

There is no option where we are just friends...I have to fuck his wife, LOL. I don't want to share a woman with someone else, its gross. Let him have her.

 

[Faptime]

There is no option where we are just friends...I have to fuck his wife, LOL. I don't want to share a woman with someone else, its gross.

If it ain't your thing, it ain't your thing. That's cool. This game isn't for everyone, though calling it "gross" is kinda shitty of you.

 

[harsha_26]

Is netori possible? Instead of sharing, Can my MC really cuck BBC and steal his wife from his friend? And for that, the sharing scene in this update is necessary to play or we can steal her without sharing too?

 

[Faptime]

Cuck? I haven't the seen the scene yet, that scene from preview images look like it's sharing MMF. It's a group sex right? I mean that's what NTR fans in another game called it and debate with me when I called MC of that game as cuck just because he shared his wife.

So, according to my standards, I accept BBC here is the cuck, otherwise I'll be called as hypocrite lol. But, according to NTR fans logic, it is sharing right? BBC is not a cuck right? NTR fans calls it "cuck", only if the husband watches his wife getting fucked on, without participating in event.

I'm not an "NTR fan", I just understand that sharing/swinging isn't NTR and doesn't make the husband a cuckold.

Basically, I understand what NTR actually is, and don't call every type of sex that doesn't exclusively involve the MC as "NTR".

Ntr [Designed to cause jealousy by having the romantic interest involved with someone other than the MC.]

If you're sharing or swinging, you aren't going to get jealous.

 

[Avaron1974]

Is netori possible? Instead of sharing, Can my MC really cuck BBC and steal his wife from his friend? And for that, the sharing scene in this update is necessary to play or we can steal her without sharing too?

Netori probably not possible.

It is mentioned they don't mind sharing but her husband is her only love and won't leave him.

 

[PrettyPornPiece]

Is netori possible? Instead of sharing, Can my MC really cuck BBC and steal his wife from his friend? And for that, the sharing scene in this update is necessary to play or we can steal her without sharing too?

I don't have plans to have the MC steal Lindsay for himself. To put it simply my basic outline in the near future has MC getting "closer" with Sarah in both the good and bad paths until a point is reached where a monogamous or semi-open relationship is formed. Until then the player has the choice to continue the unspecified sexual relationship (up to players imagination) with Lindsay or turn down each advance/opportunity. I don't want to spoil anything so I won't go into specifics but that should give you a basic idea of if you think it's for you or not.

 

[Buffalo Fred]

I don't have plans to have the MC steal Lindsay for himself. To put it simply my basic outline in the near future has MC getting "closer" with Sarah in both the good and bad paths until a point is reached where a monogamous or semi-open relationship is formed. Until then the player has the choice to continue the unspecified sexual relationship (up to players imagination) with Lindsay or turn down each advance/opportunity. I don't want to spoil anything so I won't go into specifics but that should give you a basic idea of if you think it's for you or not.

Ah well, I wouldn't have minded the chance to 'steal' Lindsay down the road as I like her more than Sarah.
That said it seems like you got a good plan for your game and I look forward to see where you take it.