MC name can be changed.Is the character's name locked to the one in the description or can it be changed
MC name can be changed.Is the character's name locked to the one in the description or can it be changed
Tags are for the CURRENT state of the game. So if there was no sex in it then, the tag applies. Future stuff goes in spoilers and dev notes.Don't put no sexual content if you will add it later. That is for games that dont and will never have any, I believe. moonlit_games
Also future tags in the genre spoiler or dev notes will be helpful.
You either lack critical thinking or did not read anything passed what you thought would give you a reason to speak. You even went as far as to repeat what I said already. I am aware of the tag rules but think about it for a second. It would be the only tag that would need to be removed 100% of the time over the natural intended course of the game. There is no point in adding it just to remove it later. No other tag works that way.Tags are for the CURRENT state of the game. So if there was no sex in it then, the tag applies. Future stuff goes in spoilers and dev notes.
Almost everything you said and asked for has the same answer:The game is quite enjoyable. I like the main character and the girls. I hope we can choose which girls to get involved with, and I also hope the developer allows us to play as an "evil" character or a jerk. There are some girls I really want to reject.
But again, overall nice game.
Hmm yeah i felt it when playing it.. One can hope i guess.Almost everything you said and asked for has the same answer:
This is a Kinetic Novel.
As in:
- Not a game
- No choosing of girls
- No choosing of paths, Evil or otherwise
- No rejections
Peace
Thanks for the feedback! I'm working on toning down the language and making the writing easier to follow (shorter intros, mostly). I think the dialogues are okay, right? It's a bit tricky to do this without breaking the original style, but I'll keep at it.I like the story but the language used is a bit heavy for me as a non-native speaker. I know almost all the fancy words, but it takes significant time to interpret sentences that consist almost entirely of them. Feels like I am reading some Shakespeare, not a VN
Yes, the dialogues are totally fine, no need to change them. Keep up the good work!Thanks for the feedback! I'm working on toning down the language and making the writing easier to follow (shorter intros, mostly). I think the dialogues are okay, right? It's a bit tricky to do this without breaking the original style, but I'll keep at it.
Thanks for your feedback! I added some music in later chapters for certain scenes since it’s quite challenging to find tracks that fit perfectly. I’m planning to review the first chapters and add some music there too.And moonlit_games ? Ignore the review of @astridduong. I know it is his prerogative to give one, but obviously he totally missed the point of this AVN and many others, that go for depth of story and characters.
And I know I am not the only one who enjoys AVN as medium, like books, and TV shows.
So. Don´t let that get to you And good luck, also chapter 3 was tensefull.