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- Jun 18, 2017
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I like Honey Select models, but I'd say that only 50% of the ones used are to my liking. Gloria and the redhead look great, while I found the mom and the Asian chick rather... meh. I like the fact that the English is good and I like that the author is communicating a lot here, reacting to feedback and all. Just my 2 cents: I've been playing the current version and too much time is spent looking at dudes, dudes talking to each other and way too much text / exposition and way too little sexiness. Seriously, I've never seen so many male Honey Select models in a game on F95. I get that story might be an important part of it all but please give me more to look at while the story unfolds. There's no reason there have to be so many dudes unless you're trying to win over a whole different crowd.
- May 10, 2018
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funny shit...mom catching you trying to take enticing selfies goes off on you and your stupidity 
- Mar 24, 2019
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Sorry for mixing up the Windows link. That's my mistake on what was provided.
The mom is never going to have sexual content, so I didn't want to make her attractive. As for the two you pointed out, at least one of them (Gloria) will have romance options in the future, so that's the reason she's attractive. In hindsight, there are a lot of things I shouldn't have done if I wanted this to be a successful "porn game," and they're the following:
1. Side girls are almost always less attractive than main girls
2. You have to experience a variety of lesser girls until focusing on the main ones
3. MC needs a lot of time/support from his friends in the beginning since he's not a player/fuckboy (yet)
That said, I'm glad that you pointed out it's too much time with males on-screen. I'll be able to take better shots in Ch4 onward and I'll focus on the girls as much as possible in scenes with mixed characters. I'll think about buffing some of the uglier female models or mixing prettier ones in content-wise too.
Thanks for playing so far. I appreciate the detailed feedback.
The mom is never going to have sexual content, so I didn't want to make her attractive. As for the two you pointed out, at least one of them (Gloria) will have romance options in the future, so that's the reason she's attractive. In hindsight, there are a lot of things I shouldn't have done if I wanted this to be a successful "porn game," and they're the following:
1. Side girls are almost always less attractive than main girls
2. You have to experience a variety of lesser girls until focusing on the main ones
3. MC needs a lot of time/support from his friends in the beginning since he's not a player/fuckboy (yet)
That said, I'm glad that you pointed out it's too much time with males on-screen. I'll be able to take better shots in Ch4 onward and I'll focus on the girls as much as possible in scenes with mixed characters. I'll think about buffing some of the uglier female models or mixing prettier ones in content-wise too.
- Jun 18, 2017
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Makes sense, really liked your answer. I'll keep an eye on your game!
- May 2, 2017
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I don't know, I honestly enjoy honey select. Maybe cause I watch too much anime.
- May 2, 2017
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Probably the most realistic game I've played in this site. I thought I'd be bored because realistic to real life would make a boring story, but the game has been interesting so far. I guess it's because it's breath of fresh air for me and also the fact that the writing is pretty good.
- Mar 24, 2019
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That's huge praise -- thanks a lot! I've worried countless times about this being some mediocre, slice-of-life VN, but it's just what I want to do. I want people to like the MC's friends, to feel the same way he does about his fellow employees, etc. I know I can't compete with skilled/experienced creators when it comes to visuals, but I'm trying. I hope my writing/storytelling will keep entertaining people.
(Pro tip: Never write a story entirely in first person perspective. It's absolute hell when you need to describe environments or sex scenes.)
- May 2, 2017
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I see, that makes sense, but you just got me wanting a good story that is written entirely in first person perspective.
- May 2, 2017
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This game may be not something that everyone will love, but those that do, I think will enjoy the heck out of it. I do agree with you saying you want us to like MC's friends and co-workers. Going in, I expected Nick to be the pervy friend and Junior to be a douche, but was pleasantly surprised. I think I'm slowly warming up to the characters. I hope we see more of Gloria in the future as I don't think she's gotten that much screen time. I have like zero writing abilities to judge someone's writing, but from what I have seen so far, I think you are doing better than most of the games I have played in this site. I do think that there's not enough choices in the game, nor many that makes a huge difference. I personally don't mind it much, but I know people like to have some control over what the MC does. Lack of choices can also mean that there's no replay value. This is my personal thoughts on the game, so far I have think you have done a fantastic job and I look forward to the next update.
- Mar 24, 2019
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Glad to hear you're warming up to the characters. Gloria will appear in the next couple chapters, but I'm not in a hurry to progress with her romantically. There are still a couple storylines at the gym that I'd like to develop further to make her (optional) relationship feel more organic.
I'll keep looking for ways to add choices and different events, but you're right, they're a bit limited now. I don't even have options in the sex scenes for things like "cum inside" or "cum outside". (Now that I'm typing it, that sounds like a good experiment for Chapter 4.) By the way, did you experience the two different ends for Chapter 3?
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Thanks for the kind words and motivation.
- Mar 24, 2019
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Yeah, but non-sexual content heavily outweighs sexual content.
There was sexual content in the first release, but Chapter 3's is more gratifying.
Sorry, not in this one. I'll be writing more incest short stories in the future though.
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I'm really enjoying this VN. My most favorite thing is I love that the MC is not an ass. I love his friends, even Nick. Mom is great, as are the coworkers. The only problem I have, especially since the MC felt the exact same way as me, was how things worked out at the end. He had the same preference as I do, and I was just surprised there was no way to avoid what happened with Selina. An option to not try anything would have been a better fit there. That's just my opinion.
Keep up the great work.
Keep up the great work.
- Mar 24, 2019
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Thanks! I appreciate everyone sharing their different opinions. You make a really great point with Selina's sex scene being optional. I actually planned for the sexual scene with Selina being optional, and going forward with her would have given romance points, but I ultimately made it mandatory because:
1. I wanted to balance the sexual content between the routes 1:1. (Refusing Selina would have yielded no sex for readers in Chapter 3. That seemed like a rip-off.)
2. Having another split in a path would have created too much work for me in the future. (I had an idea for content in the future if MC refused Selina, but that would mean balancing my time between Selina (yes), Selina (no), and the glory hole.)
If you're thinking about Renna, then don't worry. She may become available regardless of your Selina decision. With Renna, it's just a matter of how I want to balance my time between the characters. My tentative plan is to have the MC fuck around with a lot of minor characters. That means romance (where Renna would be considered a main character) will probably be set aside until he burns out.
Edit: Feel free to add your suggestions into the mix. I'm happy to talk about what directions people would like to see this take and what girls are at the tops of everyone's lists.
Current plan goes: MC fucks around > gym storylines develop > MC meets a few main girls I have lined up > romance options become available
- Nov 18, 2017
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Wow.. really, REALLY enjoyed it! Women are sexy. Friends are believable and add to the story. Bro time is something you don't see often in these type of games. I like it.
Keep doing what you're doing and add more choice/consequence and you gotta 10/10 from me. Gonna be following this one! ^^
Keep doing what you're doing and add more choice/consequence and you gotta 10/10 from me. Gonna be following this one! ^^
- Mar 24, 2019
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Thank you! Those are some tremendous compliments!
Interesting that you mention consequences, because I've mostly implemented choices that lead to A or B, not good or bad outcomes. I'll think about good/bad choices and see if I can fit anything in.
How did everyone find the frequency of choices in Chapter 3? I felt like it was a good amount compared to Ch 1-2.