- May 13, 2017
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The frequency of choices was pretty good.
About consequences, there doesn't need to be too many, just knowing there are some will add extra weight to choices. Choose girl a or b(like you've done near the end), something happens to character a or b because you weren't/are there(No ntr!! That's illigal!), giving too many creampies(Uh oH
), are you loyal to your bros or ditch them for some sweet ass? Etc etc.That being said, I'm not asking for bad end dead ends. Those are lame af. Let the story continue. If there are no consequences, I'm fine with that too. Nothing wrong with a happy upbeat story.
Edit- Ooops... ended up reading all the comments and noticed some of these where already covered(that goes for my comment below too). Hopefully there's something of use here. All the best.
- Nov 18, 2018
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Wow, this one is amazing. I'm outright hooked. Writing, visuals, story, it's all top notch. Keep up the good work.
- Feb 12, 2018
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I like this game... but why did you end the Encounter with Maddie this way? There were so much possibilities. make her a sub, train her, make her a pet for MC But overall a nice game, can't wait for the next update.
There were so much possibilities. make her a sub, train her, make her a pet for MC But overall a nice game, can't wait for the next update.
- Nov 18, 2018
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I also was with MC opinion and wanted the other twin, so given the choice I wouldn't have done anything with Selina.I like this game... but why did you end the Encounter with Maddie this way?
- Mar 24, 2019
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I'm leaning towards Britt remaining casual at the moment, but her dialogue allows for more in the future. Renna's a possibility too (just need her and Alex to break up and for MC to still be interested). My concrete romance routes are for Gloria and 2 girls the MC hasn't met yet. Those stories are decently fleshed out (not written yet) with a few really fun ideas for sex scenes too.Something else just popped into mind. There's a bunch of awesome women in the game, have all the women you can pursue and have endings with already been decided? I'm gonna assume it incudes the two on the title page.
Thank you! Loyal/submissive girls/women are planned for the future. Unfortunately, the MC wouldn't make the best "use" of a submissive girl if he met one now.I like this game... but why did you end the Encounter with Maddie this way?
- Mar 24, 2019
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Thanks a lot. All the positivity from everyone is making this a lot of fun for me.
- Nov 18, 2018
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@Alithini Istoria
You should probably ask a Mod for the Game Developer title.
You should probably ask a Mod for the Game Developer title.
- Nov 16, 2017
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This Kinetic Visual Novel is alright... It's a Honey Select style visual novel about a guy living his life after a bad relationship, as we works, chats with friends, and looks around for casual sex... It is definitely focused on the story telling, but does get rather wordy sometimes, without keeping a steady pace with the story telling... This is the developers first attempt at making one of these, and each developer always has their own style... This one is definitely different in it's story telling and plot... I enjoyed some of it, and liked the plot concept... I just didn't feel immersed in the story all the time... I wish the developer the best of luck as he/she continues to learn and grow as a developer... It's not that bad of a first attempt, and I'm always happy when a developer puts effort into the story telling, rather then just making some porn fest VN/Game... It is still early in development, so I'm sure more content will come in the future...I went ahead and posted my review...
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- Mar 24, 2019
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Thanks for taking the time to read and review it! I thought you rated it quite generously despite the flaws you found. Glad you enjoyed parts of it at least. Slice of life wasn't the best choice for creating something gripping and really interesting, but it's been a good learning experience for my first time using Ren'Py. I won't rush Full Stride to release lesser quality updates, but I will work as quickly as possible to hopefully have it completed in a year.
Afterward, I'd like to focus on something more typical for this site -- an ultra kinky, ultra taboo sex romp. There are so many kinks that I haven't seen explored in games with straight, male protagonists without getting into gross stuff. I have different ideas written down for stories and presentations, so it's just a matter of what I'll feel like in the future. I'd also like to write a horror story, but that's something I can talk about another time.
- Nov 16, 2017
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I spoke a lot about the wordiness now and then, but it wasn't always like that... I enjoyed some parts of the story, and could tell there was some tiny setup for a possible romance story... And just because it wasn't always my cup of tea, doesn't rule it out as being someone else's opus... I scored it as good, because it's not a bad visual novel overall... The visuals are not over the top, the characters are mostly believable, and a focus was placed on the story aspect over just a bunch of back to back erotic scenes... It's not the greatest, and it's above average... So a rating of Good seemed befitting, even with the flaws I mentioned...
Keep at it, learn and grow... When your new at something, sometimes experimentation, and trying various methods helps you become a better artist/author/etc... Practice makes perfect...
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I made a mistake in my review, where I stated this VN/Game was a pure Kinetic Visual Novel... That is not entirely true... There are a few cases where a choice is presented... They do not really effect the main story... But more of less add a tiny amount of flavor for the moment they are presented... Allowing for a tiny alteration in how those particular events play out... I went ahead and updated my review to reflect that, as I do not want people to think this VN/Game allowed no choices at all...
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- Mar 24, 2019
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Wrote a quick blog addressing some concerns about being forced to hook up with Selina.
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- Oct 7, 2017
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With that banner, I was expecting an "Incest" tag. Fuck. I wanted it to be there. *sobs*
- Mar 24, 2019
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I feel you. Not sure if this is up your alley, but if you want a 5-minute incest quickie, I also wrote:
Helping My Aunt Make Her Amateur Porn Debut
You'll get an idea of what my work is like and maybe try Full Stride another time.
- Oct 7, 2017
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Funny that you mentionned that, I tried it 2 weeks ago, it was (sadly) short but really enjoyable.
- Oct 7, 2017
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Only seen a picture of that Maddie but she looks guuud. I do love that "sending semi-nudes/nudes" aspect, i don't know if many people do but I sure do. (that's a lot of do)