- Jul 29, 2017
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I would also like to join that discord; but i'll also dump my ideas here since i just finished the game.
First; Its really impressive to see this game and how intricate it is, especially if you've only been working on it since the recent futaNTR games came out.
Second; I do agree with this here
For instance: with Kana she's only mentioned as a childhood friend but its not really decided that she wants to be in a relationship with the MC until she is already being NTR'd by Sayako. Something Like Kana was charmed by the MC's ambition to be a hero and fell in love with him but now that Sayako is there she either stills respects/loves him but her desires/lusts now go to Sayako.
Juliette is also a good one for this, did she think that the MC was handsome, so she strictly drew boundaries between them, boundaries that Sayako breaks down and then Juliette then becomes more apathetic towards the MC because Sayako is becoming her ideal lover.
so on and so on.
I honestly think that without adding another scene this could be better than some of the other games that you mentioned, if the writing and dialogue impoves.
Third; I also want to say that I usually only like NTR when the MC is oblivious to being cucked but your story of the MC and Sayako knows but the rest of the harem is oblivious that the MC knows is really interesting. I hope that you can play off that more
First; Its really impressive to see this game and how intricate it is, especially if you've only been working on it since the recent futaNTR games came out.
Second; I do agree with this here
You should probably work on adding more connections and ties with the MC before the cucking begins. Not even counting the blacksmith, magic knight and archer; I think you could add easily a hour or two's worth of dialogue which would improve the game massively. I would say focus on how each of the girls have connections to the MC and how Sayako alters that;Pros: It goes straight to fucking
Cons: It goes straight to fucking
Couldn't get attached to any character before the screwfest starts. That can really knock you out of the imersion.
For instance: with Kana she's only mentioned as a childhood friend but its not really decided that she wants to be in a relationship with the MC until she is already being NTR'd by Sayako. Something Like Kana was charmed by the MC's ambition to be a hero and fell in love with him but now that Sayako is there she either stills respects/loves him but her desires/lusts now go to Sayako.
Juliette is also a good one for this, did she think that the MC was handsome, so she strictly drew boundaries between them, boundaries that Sayako breaks down and then Juliette then becomes more apathetic towards the MC because Sayako is becoming her ideal lover.
so on and so on.
I honestly think that without adding another scene this could be better than some of the other games that you mentioned, if the writing and dialogue impoves.
Third; I also want to say that I usually only like NTR when the MC is oblivious to being cucked but your story of the MC and Sayako knows but the rest of the harem is oblivious that the MC knows is really interesting. I hope that you can play off that more