Brine_Basilisk
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I agree its a bit ESL but there's WAYYY worse that I've seen on this site. Idk, maybe my standards are a lot softer with futa content since we get so little of it, but I think its perfectly acceptable as-is. I'd say it just needs a light editing pass and it should be good to go. I'm just happy we finally get solid futa-on-male that isn't a complete rush job.The writing in the summary is just generic esl. The right amount of goof and lack of proper grammar.
...finally, some good fucking food