farkin eggsellant sir, I'd call ya DS, but your story line wasnt complete comedy, I am looking forward to your expansions with great intrest.....as to your request for input, I wrote a short story from dreams of desire meets BB, her family basically gets offed by the order and the former mother moves and takes a yoga class with ann as the instructor and they become fast friends......my long term hopes for the story wer to intice some one like chancer and funfiction to garner intrest in it, so ive been continuously refining it, but you beat me to the punch and im not sorry! Excellent work sir