VN Ren'Py Completed Game of Hearts [Ch.5 R2] [SparkHG]

[Filipis]

He never said that.

He said he won't explore the point of view of the cheated one (the husband) anymore. During Meredith's last scene you were watching the scene from his point of view and you could hear his thoughts of it. He said in literally all the dev logs since that one that there will be other characters with a cheating/netori relation with the protagonist.

Then it barely qualifies as Netori - other than seducing the woman away. What's the point of stealing a woman from her husband/boyfriend if you don't get to see his reactions?

 

[Uriel ☁]

Then it barely qualifies as Netori - other than seducing the woman away. What's the point of stealing a woman from her husband/boyfriend if you don't get to see his reactions?

You do get to see his reactions, just not his thoughts. Unless you think mind-reading is a requirement for netori.

 

[adanu]

I'm not seeing any dev logs that state this is a netori centric game, so I have no idea why people are expressing dissatisfaction over something that was never promised in the first place anyway.

 

[Uriel ☁]

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So, after a lengthy introspection, I've decided to change my approach to this project. I cannot make drastic changes at this moment; time is still strict, unfortunately.

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First, I've opened up a Discord channel. While there isn't much to see in there, you'll get a glimpse of my plans for what content to show in it. It has everything this page has to offer: exclusive wallpapers categorized by tiers, promotional materials, old works, and more stuff that you won't see anywhere else. Check it out if you have the time!

But, do be aware, I'm learning as I go.

Thanks again for your words and support!

 

[Ntrsugar]

Hope we can get to corrupt some actual milfs , like with children and stuff in the next game.

 

[Rehwyn]

Hope we can get to corrupt some actual milfs , like with children and stuff in the next game.

I wouldn't count on it. The dev has mentioned that he isn't as likely to lean as heavily into the darker elements of netori in the future after doing the last update of GoH.

 

[Ntrsugar]

I wouldn't count on it. The dev has mentioned that he isn't as likely to lean as heavily into the darker elements of netori in the future after doing the last update of GoH.

Nooooo, why not ☹

 

[Rehwyn]

Nooooo, why not ☹

He explained it a bit in the preview quoted below.

The relevant text is:

"While yes, this story is fictitious, and absolutely unrealistic, after forcing myself to really dive into the relationship between Meredith and the pain her husband felt... it dawned on me that I wouldn't wish this event to happen to my worst enemy. The thought of your significant other doing this to you is just... horrendous beyond belief.

I can dilute Tommy's response by... simply avoiding confronting him. But I won't. He will hurt. Meredith will hurt. It is unavoidable.

In the future... I do not wish to continue with such a dark tone anymore. I understand that at the end of the day, it is just porn, and I may be overthinking it, but I have to be in the right state of mind to properly execute the scenes, and I do not wish to dwell in this pit for too long. I never truly understood how dark things appear until I reached a point where this topic must be confronted... and now I know."

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TLDR:
I plan to release Beta part two in February, Ideally on Valentine's Day. No promises yet, but I will not delay it until March unless I really can't finish it.

From House of Hearts previews, it sounds like some of the LIs may have partners and stuff so I do expect netori elements, but I'd be very surprised if you end up stealing one away from a loving husband and children.

 

[Dark Silence]

From House of Hearts previews, it sounds like some of the LIs may have partners and stuff so I do expect netori elements, but I'd be very surprised if you end up stealing one away from a loving husband and children.

Well, that blows. Netori is a big part of why I play games like this. It's like the guys who enjoy being cucked, I enjoy being the bull and cucking others. We all have our kinks/fetishes, so, it will suck if he removes anything from his games.

 

[blkcrow20]

Yeah, this is actually one of the few games with netori that I liked but I understand that if it's too hard for him write it, I respect his decision.

 

[OsirisHeir._]

I still think there will be some netori elements, though maybe not as dark as he originally mentioned on his Patreon—like from the husband’s POV. He just doesn’t want to stay in that headspace all the time when creating these darker scenes, which I get.

 

[Rehwyn]

Well, that blows. Netori is a big part of why I play games like this. It's like the guys who enjoy being cucked, I enjoy being the bull and cucking others. We all have our kinks/fetishes, so, it will suck if he removes anything from his games.

Yeah, this is actually one of the few games with netori that I liked but I understand that if it's too hard for him write it, I respect his decision.

I think the intent was to still include some netori, but to lean a bit less into the potential darker elements of it.

 

[oliveerbluee]

I keep having an issue with chap2_mer_scenes.rpy, get an error saying:
“Parsing the script failed. File "game/scripts/chap2/chap2_mer_scenes.rpy", line 1253: scene statement expects a non-empty block. scene chap2_mers_8b with dissolve :+”
Would anyone be able to explain/help me? I’d love some hints to help me with multiple playthroughs. Thank you!

 

[Dark Silence]

I think the intent was to still include some netori, but to lean a bit less into the potential darker elements of it.

Someone always gets hurt when you take someone else's girl. The only way for it not hurt, is just for it not to happen. Or if you're sharing the girl. But I am not into sharing. So, if I want the girl, I take her for myself.

 

[Rehwyn]

Someone always gets hurt when you take someone else's girl. The only way for it not hurt, is just for it not to happen. Or if you're sharing the girl. But I am not into sharing. So, if I want the girl, I take her for myself.

Yes, but there's shades of darkness still within that from a narrative perspective. For example, using demon influence to magically corrupt a woman away from a loving, committed relationship with a husband and children is a significantly darker story than seducing a woman away from an abusive relationship in which she's unhappy and that's already on shaky ground. Even more so when the narrative really digs into the partner's perspective, like the end for GoH did.

Based on the devs comments, if there are netori elements in HoH I'd expect it to lean more towards the later type I described above and to limit narrative perspective for the woman's partner.

 

[Maviarab]

Someone always gets hurt when you take someone else's girl. The only way for it not hurt, is just for it not to happen. Or if you're sharing the girl. But I am not into sharing. So, if I want the girl, I take her for myself.

Yes, but there's shades of darkness still within that from a narrative perspective. For example, using demon influence to magically corrupt a woman away from a loving, committed relationship with a husband and children is a significantly darker story than seducing a woman away from an abusive relationship in which she's unhappy and that's already on shaky ground. Even more so when the narrative really digs into the partner's perspective, like the end for GoH did.

Based on the devs comments, if there are netori elements in HoH I'd expect it to lean more towards the later type I described above and to limit narrative perspective for the woman's partner.

The thing is, he tried something different, very niche, very kink specific. He didn't like writing it and that's fine. We stole Maxine...plain as fact and it was fine, no one complained, was very well done.

We don't need to see the mental anbguish of the stolen women's partner, nor do we need to see their perspective of what's happening (if for no other reason, it adds literally fucking nothing to the story and just wastes dev time). That was never what this story was originally about, nor had as included content for half of the story.

Just not required and the vast majority don't really want to see it anyway. Again,. seeing that, is very niche. It's enough to know we have stolen them, corrupted them and they are choosing us over their partner.

 

[Rehwyn]

The thing is, he tried something different, very niche, very kink specific. He didn't like writing it and that's fine. We stole Maxine...plain as fact and it was fine, no one complained, was very well done.

We don't need to see the mental anbguish of the stolen women's partner, nor do we need to see their perspective of what's happening (if for no other reason, it adds literally fucking nothing to the story and just wastes dev time). That was never what this story was originally about, nor had as included content for half of the story.

Just not required and the vast majority don't really want to see it anyway. Again,. seeing that, is very niche. It's enough to know we have stolen them, corrupted them and they are choosing us over their partner.

Just to be clear in case it's not from my earlier comments, I'm in complete agreement.

 

[Dark Silence]

Yes, but there's shades of darkness still within that from a narrative perspective. For example, using demon influence to magically corrupt a woman away from a loving, committed relationship with a husband and children is a significantly darker story than seducing a woman away from an abusive relationship in which she's unhappy and that's already on shaky ground. Even more so when the narrative really digs into the partner's perspective, like the end for GoH did.

Based on the devs comments, if there are netori elements in HoH I'd expect it to lean more towards the later type I described above and to limit narrative perspective for the woman's partner.

The thing is, he tried something different, very niche, very kink specific. He didn't like writing it and that's fine. We stole Maxine...plain as fact and it was fine, no one complained, was very well done.

We don't need to see the mental anbguish of the stolen women's partner, nor do we need to see their perspective of what's happening (if for no other reason, it adds literally fucking nothing to the story and just wastes dev time). That was never what this story was originally about, nor had as included content for half of the story.

Just not required and the vast majority don't really want to see it anyway. Again,. seeing that, is very niche. It's enough to know we have stolen them, corrupted them and they are choosing us over their partner.

Maybe I'm just cold-hearted, but I'm with Mav on this one. I really don't care about the feelings of the person I stole her from. If I did, I wouldn't have stolen her. I've said it before and I'll say it again. If my best friend, who is a good person, has a girl I want, I'm taking her. I'm not thinking about, nor do I care about my best friend's feelings. I'm thinking about my own.

So, the only way to avoid it, is to not add it or add in sharing/swinging. Which I am not into at all as I have said. Anyway, just my 2cents.

 

[Maviarab]

Maybe I'm just cold-hearted, but I'm with Mav on this one. I really don't care about the feelings of the person I stole her from. If I did, I wouldn't have stolen her. I've said it before and I'll say it again. If my best friend, who is a good person, has a girl I want, I'm taking her. I'm not thinking about, nor do I care about my best friend's feelings. I'm thinking about my own.

So, the only way to avoid it, is to not add it or add in sharing/swinging. Which I am not into at all as I have said. Anyway, just my 2cents.

Ahh sorry Wolf. I thought you were implying you were enjoying the aspect of seeing Merediths pathetic hubby fall apart etc.

I got the wrong impression, my bad.

 

[Dark Silence]

Ahh sorry Wolf. I thought you were implying you were enjoying the aspect of seeing Merediths pathetic hubby fall apart etc.

I got the wrong impression, my bad.

No worries. I was just pointing out facts as I see them from the devs pov. You should know me by now, I don't give a shit if I hurt someone's feelings. In game or irl.