VN Others Abandoned Gap Year [Ch. 1] [Captive Martian]

[Zippity]

The dad kind of looks like Eric Bischoff.

He kinda looks like a few characters I've seen in other erotic/adult visual novels, but at least he's mostly out of the picture in this one (being overseas)...

 

[K9]

The dad has the most rapey face I've ever seen.

 

[redwind21]

It's a very likeable game, and it's quite unique in the way it's put together. It's more like playing a comic book than a novel. I like it, and I like the redhead, even if she is Romanian, and might be related to Dracula or Nadia Comaneci. Romania does have great gymnasts. I just hope they don't come with fangs.XD Great job Captive Martian!

 

[TDCerb]

The dad has the most rapey face I've ever seen.

Agreed. I found this infuriating the go through. The constant fades get a bit much but then again I was hoping to find some content.

I like the art style though, and the comic style popups were a nice touch but the white bar text should only be narration? Comic book style would dictate thoughts would be bubbles out of MC's head? Anyway keep it up

 

[HunterSeeker]

This isn't too bad. Text moves a little slowly though.