VN Ren'Py Girlfriend Unfettered [v0.04] [Ashen Bunny]

[SvenVlad]

Just gonna ignore DAT ASS and focus on the NTR!

 

[m4pII]

It's not entirely clear what type of relationship to expect from a "childhood friend" and your employee's daughter.
Will it be a "normal" relationship or ntr?

 

[yikess]

I think, best way is to do both path, netorare and netorase. It would take more time, but we will have more good content

 

[Trasher2018]

So there are no choices currently (beside the add "sister"/friend or not) or did I miss anything?

Quite generic stuff for the rest - constructed setting that only makes sense in a porn game and is not really believable.

 

[Ashen Bunny]

It's not entirely clear what type of relationship to expect from a "childhood friend" and your employee's daughter.
Will it be a "normal" relationship or ntr?

Normal to begin with then it will be choice dependent as it progresses.

So there are no choices currently (beside the add "sister"/friend or not) or did I miss anything?

Quite generic stuff for the rest - constructed setting that only makes sense in a porn game and is not really believable.

I don't remember promising a game full of choices and different paths, description covers the one you mention.

 

[m4pII]

Normal to begin with then it will be choice dependent as it progresses.

I hope we will have a choice.
Personally, I'm not a big fan of stories where you have to share "childhood friends")

 

[Ashen Bunny]

I hope we will have a choice.
Personally, I'm not a big fan of stories where you have to share "childhood friends")

I actually didn't have the idea of sharing them at first, but a few requests has been made by my supporters. I wouldn't really change the main storyline for a request but I might consider it for the side characters. I can do a community poll when the time comes to see if a choice dependent Netorase with the childhood friend is wanted. But until then, we need to establish a strong bond between her and MC

And don't worry, if I didn't promise NTR with that character in the description, I won't force it down your throat unexpectedly. I respect people. ❤

 

[Ashen Bunny]

I like the wife's personality and body. The dialogue is witty and sharp. (if we say nice things, do we get credit?)...... I really mean what I said.

Paying to post a Faceplam would keep the A-holes members from throwing them around like confetti.

Here comes the confetti. Thanks, A-holes.

Keep it coming. AshenBunny

You don't need to say nice things, you will always have unlimited credit under this thread

 

[Flamersx]

Here I am again, I saw it, Ashley's design and personality are great, the downside of all this are only two things, firstly that there are almost no options (at least for me, since I like to save when the options and I keep track of my progress),
I do not ask that you be mined of them but if you add at least 1 option every 1 or 2 updates, the second thing, if you are working alone then you can omit this since it is understandable in people who work alone on their projects, but otherwise not be so then I say it, v0.02 is very short, it was shorter than the first,
According to me, you should focus more on the project, not so much on us or respond to our comments, it doesn't matter that it is not monthly, but when the project is updated, it can be enjoyed and it is not 3 minutes to 6 minutes of reading, that it be at least a minimum of 15 to 20, since this project can be enjoyed,
but as I said above, skip this if you're working alone, anyway, thank you very much for your efforts.

 

[Ashen Bunny]

Here I am again, I saw it, Ashley's design and personality are great, the downside of all this are only two things, firstly that there are almost no options (at least for me, since I like to save when the options and I keep track of my progress),
I do not ask that you be mined of them but if you add at least 1 option every 1 or 2 updates, the second thing, if you are working alone then you can omit this since it is understandable in people who work alone on their projects, but otherwise not be so then I say it, v0.02 is very short, it was shorter than the first,
According to me, you should focus more on the project, not so much on us or respond to our comments, it doesn't matter that it is not monthly, but when the project is updated, it can be enjoyed and it is not 3 minutes to 6 minutes of reading, that it be at least a minimum of 15 to 20, since this project can be enjoyed,
but as I said above, skip this if you're working alone, anyway, thank you very much for your efforts.

I wouldn't add a choice just for the sake of it, so far there were not many points for me where a choice would make sense for a pure netorase story. I will add them if the opportunity arises.

Unfortunately I am working alone, I really understand your dissatisfaction with the amount of content and I apologize.

Your observation about my chronically online behavior is correct, I'm just finding few minutes while waiting for renders to respond to you guys, it might be excessive but I have been bound to my computer and clerk desk for the last few months and I am yearning for some human contact to be honest

Thank you so much for expressing your points in a nice way ❤

 

[Nemesiz691]

Mc wife get fuck in this update yet? Asking for a friend

 

[bluerubber]

I know right, even if it's structurally correct, sometimes it feels unnatural and robotic almost. Every single sentence I need to go back and check if I sound like a normal human being... But I have the same problem with my native language too, so I don't know if the problem stems from my lack of knowledge or my autistic brain

This practically describes me in every way haha

 

[mc loving VI]

I hope the corruption doesn't go too fast, once the ntr sex starts everybody skip unseen text and lose the narrative

Second, I hope there will be a "no cheat path" with only teasing other employees

 

[cloudshoutarou]

really enjoyed t he game so far, cant wait to see she cheating

 

[Artio20]

Hey,
The overall story progression, uniqueness of Ashley and renders look really nice. I was waiting for update since I played the demo and update was great with only downside of being shorter than my expectation.
Also, I have a friendly suggestion for the project. Would you consider releasing the extra version of the previous version when you release a new update? This way you can attract more players and eventually patrons. Also, people like me who cannot support the project via patreon due to the financial issues can see the extra content and this way you can form a bigger community for the game. Also, it does not harm the advantages of being a patron because a non-patreon player have to wait for next release to gain access to the content.
Nevertheless, the game looks great and I am waiting for the next update. If you consider my suggestion I would be really happy.

 

[Griev]

I loved, hated this update. Loved that she's "playing dumb" to tease the co-workers. Loved that MC is excited BUT still has some part of himself that's uncomfortable, but the horniness is winning for now.
The hate comes from how short the update felt. This isn't a real negative, it just means I'm hungry for more content, which also means I'll be coming back to check on this game. If it continues at being this exciting I'm definitely going to support.

 

[thetrueredking]

Some nice mass NTR is welcome.

 

[Serenity@Blended Imagery]

Look forward to update and how this VN plays out!

 

[Joshy92]

I don't think the mc fully understands his fantasy of sharing his girl yet
I like that
It makes the story more interesting imo

 

[Joshy92]

Forgot to say before
The mc is one lucky dude.
His wife will eventually fulfill his fantasy.
And if he plays his cards right other ladies in his life might as well

Is he the luckiest guy in the world or what.