VN Ren'Py Girlfriend Unfettered [v0.04] [Ashen Bunny]

[Godofwar1983]

We're 4 updates and not even a week(chronologically) into the game. NTS games that jump straight into the fucking are boring. Story and character development is what makes NTS enjoyable, let it develop a while longer before leveling this criticism.

Agreed 100% starthrow

 

[Godofwar1983]

Agreed 100% starthrow

There was another game that was my #1 Favorite and the dev took his time writing it up. Storyline was good too. He was almost to the point of actual sex cheating. The FMC had just gave a blowjob to a stranger in the dark thinking it was her husband and then a tit fuck/jerk off to her coworker in the story. And then all of sudden the dev just disappeared and fell off. Game was project hot wife. Great game. Could have been even better had he finished it. Hope he comes back one day to finish

 

[GetOutOfMyLab]

There was another game that was my #1 Favorite and the dev took his time writing it up. Storyline was good too. He was almost to the point of actual sex cheating. The FMC had just gave a blowjob to a stranger in the dark thinking it was her husband and then a tit fuck/jerk off to her coworker in the story. And then all of sudden the dev just disappeared and fell off. Game was project hot wife. Great game. Could have been even better had he finished it. Hope he comes back one day to finish

IMO, Project Hot Wife had terrible progression and was a blue ball fest. Kinda glad it was put out of its misery.

lol why you keep deleting posts and re-posting?

 

[Griev]

Right! Last time I checked, that doesn't mean "loving and monogamous relationship"... So far, the girlfriend has pretty much done nothing more than 98% of women on Instagram lol.

It's only the 4th update. Things like story, overall direction of the game and characters needed to be established in order to achieve a level of understanding and familiarity with the couple before things get too freaky.
There's a few mindless fuckfests titles that launched the last few days if you want some games with NTR from the start though and don't GaF about establishing characters and all that.

 

[fh321]

It's only the 4th update. Things like story, overall direction of the game and characters needed to be established in order to achieve a level of understanding and familiarity with the couple before things get too freaky.
There's a few mindless fuckfests titles that launched the last few days if you want some games with NTR from the start though and don't GaF about establishing characters and all that.

This is, what, the 4th update? If you're playing for first time from start (i.e., reading everything), there is prob 90 min/2 hours of content. That's a LONG time for nothing but texting and lovey-dovey marital relations.
Obv i am interested in the game, so it's not as though i hate the plot. I just get bored AF by ultra-vanilla AVNs, and after 4 updates, that's exactly what this is. At some point, got to shit or get off the pot. Guess i'll wait for 0.08 or 0.1 to find out if the girlfriend ever does something besides send texts.

 

[Ashen Bunny]

Why is the game trying to connect to the inet and the game starts but i get this.

Faled to initialize steam: FileNotFoundError("Could not find module 'E:\\novel_games\\Girlfriend-Unfettered-0.04-pc\\lib\\py3-windows-x86_64\\steam_api64.dll' (or one of its dependencies). Try using the full path with constructor syntax.")

Game does send a single GET request for a .txt file that contains announcement links, for this area:



I have no idea why you are getting that error though, make sure to download the version I share

 

[Freki.g]

At some point, got to shit or get off the pot.

Sure, but, you can't shit on the floor and smear the walls, in the rush to get up.

Everything in its time ...

 

[Griev]

-This is, what, the 4th update?

-If you're playing for first time from start (i.e., reading everything), there is prob 90 min/2 hours of content. That's a LONG time for nothing but texting and lovey-dovey marital relations.

-Obv i am interested in the game, so it's not as though i hate the plot. I just get bored AF by ultra-vanilla AVNs, and after 4 updates, that's exactly what this is.

-At some point, got to shit or get off the pot. Guess i'll wait for 0.08 or 0.1 to find out if the girlfriend ever does something besides send texts.

- Yes, I actually stated that in my first sentence, and it's in the version number when you click on the thread.

- 30 mins max, if you're reading at a moderate pace.

- Ultra-Vanilla plots, don't have the female LIs flashing her boobs to co-workers, walking naked at the job, taking pics of co-worker's dicks, sharing pics with another co-worker on her lap top(including being fine with getting a dick pic), masturbates while watching her co-worker jerk off in the bathroom, or allows a co-worker to taking her clothes shopping and leaves the curtain open for him to get pics. Nothing about the game in Ultra-Vanilla so idk why it was mentioned.

- Name 1 GOOD Netorase game that had the girlfriend being railed by another guy within the first 3-4 updates. Netorase game, not Netorare game btw.

 

[fh321]

- Yes, I actually stated that in my first sentence, and it's in the version number when you click on the thread.

- 30 mins max, if you're reading at a moderate pace.

- Ultra-Vanilla plots, don't have the female LIs flashing her boobs to co-workers, walking naked at the job, taking pics of co-worker's dicks, sharing pics with another co-worker on her lap top(including being fine with getting a dick pic), masturbates while watching her co-worker jerk off in the bathroom, or allows a co-worker to taking her clothes shopping and leaves the curtain open for him to get pics. Nothing about the game in Ultra-Vanilla so idk why it was mentioned.

- Name 1 GOOD Netorase game that had the girlfriend being railed by another guy within the first 3-4 updates. Netorase game, not Netorare game btw.

Netorase Phone did it (though it's a stretch to call it good). A Wife's Phone did it. The Control App did it. Project Myriam did it. Should I keep going? Plenty of good games manage to explore the wife-sharing kink without copious amounts of husband-fucking to 'set up the plot'.

In this game (GF Unfettered), where there are no significant choices (only 'do you want sister content? Do you want teenager content?'), I don't understand why the dev thinks this much build-up is necessary, especially with the depth of the characters present. The girlfriend is super slutty and a complete tease from the 1st minute of the game, and the boyfriend takes all of 90 seconds to 'discover' he enjoys her exhibitionism. So.... what's the wait for? That's not me bashing this game, btw - not every game needs to have deep explorations and backgrounds for the characters. But since there is zero introspection on the girlfriend's part, and the boyfriend is all onboard with her slinging it around town, it's very repetitive to have scene after scene of "Oh no, my pants are too tight! My cameltoe is showing!" and "Oops, everyone can see my nips! tee-hee!"

Yea. We get it already...

 

[idkmanerally]

Netorase Phone did it (though it's a stretch to call it good). A Wife's Phone did it. The Control App did it. Project Myriam did it. Should I keep going? Plenty of good games manage to explore the wife-sharing kink without copious amounts of husband-fucking to 'set up the plot'.

In this game (GF Unfettered), where there are no significant choices (only 'do you want sister content? Do you want teenager content?'), I don't understand why the dev thinks this much build-up is necessary, especially with the depth of the characters present. The girlfriend is super slutty and a complete tease from the 1st minute of the game, and the boyfriend takes all of 90 seconds to 'discover' he enjoys her exhibitionism. So.... what's the wait for? That's not me bashing this game, btw - not every game needs to have deep explorations and backgrounds for the characters. But since there is zero introspection on the girlfriend's part, and the boyfriend is all onboard with her slinging it around town, it's very repetitive to have scene after scene of "Oh no, my pants are too tight! My cameltoe is showing!" and "Oops, everyone can see my nips! tee-hee!"

Yea. We get it already...

thats funny, i just made this exact same point in the My New Girlfriend thread: https://f95zone.to/threads/my-new-girlfriend-ch-2-circlegames.207440/post-14228734

there are games that do the slow burn, relationship focus thing (blurring the walls), but not ALL NTS games need to do that. i prefer some variety in my games! no offense to this game, but the character writing isn't exactly shakespeare, so the vanilla bf/gf scenes bore me to tears. i play this game to see the gf teasing and fucking the coworkers. "porn logic" is totally appropriate here and forgivable

 

[fh321]

thats funny, i just made this exact same point in the My New Girlfriend thread: https://f95zone.to/threads/my-new-girlfriend-ch-2-circlegames.207440/post-14228734

there are games that do the slow burn, relationship focus thing (blurring the walls), but not ALL NTS games need to do that. i prefer some variety in my games! no offense to this game, but the character writing isn't exactly shakespeare, so the vanilla bf/gf scenes bore me to tears. i play this game to see the gf teasing and fucking the coworkers. "porn logic" is totally appropriate here and forgivable

Glad someone agrees with me. Was starting to feel a bit like the single voice not praising this game (which, again, it's not like I hate it!!) lol. Also, thanks for the tip about MNG - I haven't played it but was tempted, and now i know to stay away for a few more updates, at least.

 

[Griev]

-Netorase Phone did it (though it's a stretch to call it good).
-A Wife's Phone did it.
-The Control App did it.
-Project Myriam did it. Should I keep going?
-Plenty of good games manage to explore the wife-sharing kink without copious amounts of husband-fucking to 'set up the plot'.

-In this game (GF Unfettered), where there are no significant choices (only 'do you want sister content? Do you want teenager content?'), I don't understand why the dev thinks this much build-up is necessary, especially with the depth of the characters present. The girlfriend is super slutty and a complete tease from the 1st minute of the game, and the boyfriend takes all of 90 seconds to 'discover' he enjoys her exhibitionism. So.... what's the wait for? That's not me bashing this game, btw - not every game needs to have deep explorations and backgrounds for the characters. But since there is zero introspection on the girlfriend's part, and the boyfriend is all onboard with her slinging it around town, it's very repetitive to have scene after scene of "Oh no, my pants are too tight! My cameltoe is showing!" and "Oops, everyone can see my nips! tee-hee!"

Yea. We get it already...

- Netorase phone is not good. I agree it would be a stretch to call it average.
- A Wife's phone is an NTR game with a NTS route.
- The Control App actually don't even know what this is. I won't argue against it since I'm unfamiliar. Maybe it IS good idk.
- Project Myriam is not an NTS game. It's a fuck-fest game with hella optional paths where you watch this woman fuck anything that moves.

- Ashen is trying to add what realism he can so that the characters don't feel like cardboard cutouts just waiting for their screen time (sex). You described Ashley simply as a super slutty type. That's the main reason these set-ups are necessary. He's trying to make her more than JUST a slutty character. She's actually intelligent and is helping MC work through some trauma from their past. She plays up her ditsy antics for her BF, and pretends to be less intelligent than she is in order to do the teasing. They then discuss things afterwards. IMO, if you want long term investment from your audience, you take the time to build characters and the world they are in. Netorase stories live and die on the relationship between the MC and FMC. Its almost as if the relationship itself is the main character in a way. If you don't take the time to establish the relationship, the game/story will ultimately have no legs. That works in NTR games but much less for an NTS game. If Ashley just started fucking co-workers from update 1, it'd have zero impact. The game would became a mindless fuckfest and burn out in less than a year once she'd made her rounds through everyone in the building.

 

[Ser Lordypants]

There was another game that was my #1 Favorite and the dev took his time writing it up. Storyline was good too. He was almost to the point of actual sex cheating. The FMC had just gave a blowjob to a stranger in the dark thinking it was her husband and then a tit fuck/jerk off to her coworker in the story. And then all of sudden the dev just disappeared and fell off. Game was project hot wife. Great game. Could have been even better had he finished it. Hope he comes back one day to finish

Project Hot Wife represents everything wrong with "slow burn" games. It was the worst case scenario that people have come to expect and fear. It took 4 years to start delivering sexual content and was promptly abandoned. It went nowhere and eventually burned out.

For this game to be compared to Project Hot Wife it would have to stall here for the next 20 updates. Ashley would just keep posting clothed ass pics and maybe go to work without a bra. That would be all the content for the next 3 years. Hopefully that doesn't happen.

This pace isn't too fast or too slow. I think it's just right. And I'm glad the dev is okay and the project is... Unfettered.

 

[Deyn21]

There is a big potential here.

Good luck, dev.

 

[Claudio83]

- Yes, I actually stated that in my first sentence, and it's in the version number when you click on the thread.

- 30 mins max, if you're reading at a moderate pace.

- Ultra-Vanilla plots, don't have the female LIs flashing her boobs to co-workers, walking naked at the job, taking pics of co-worker's dicks, sharing pics with another co-worker on her lap top(including being fine with getting a dick pic), masturbates while watching her co-worker jerk off in the bathroom, or allows a co-worker to taking her clothes shopping and leaves the curtain open for him to get pics. Nothing about the game in Ultra-Vanilla so idk why it was mentioned.

- Name 1 GOOD Netorase game that had the girlfriend being railed by another guy within the first 3-4 updates. Netorase game, not Netorare game btw.

TACOS has Anne being railed by another guy on the 3rd update if i remember correctly... a slow burn is very exciting for me, also if before or after the wife/girlfriend have to be fucked in front of her husband/boyfriend, there is no excuses!
No excessive blue balls like Project Hot Wife for example...
A "build-up" in these games is a must, in the next update of Blurring the Walls there will be at least a lewd scene for me, from the premise of the update's end

 

[Silwith]

TACOS has Anne being railed by another guy on the 3rd update if i remember correctly...

Wouldn't exactly call TACOS "good" either *shrug*

- Netorase phone is not good. I agree it would be a stretch to call it average.
- A Wife's phone is an NTR game with a NTS route.
- The Control App actually don't even know what this is. I won't argue against it since I'm unfamiliar. Maybe it IS good idk.

I like Netorase Phone, certainly muchmore then A Wifes Phone, which is a fucking chaotic mess without direction...
Control App is actually pretty qood, well focused and well written scenes.

 

[Madafackerhola]

Any update? I just love this game

 

[Junkertown]

Can someone give very detailed directions on where to put the script.rpy file for the black screen? also what black screen are we talking about exactly, I'm using a mac btw.

 

[yohanshmurge]

- Netorase phone is not good. I agree it would be a stretch to call it average.
- A Wife's phone is an NTR game with a NTS route.
- The Control App actually don't even know what this is. I won't argue against it since I'm unfamiliar. Maybe it IS good idk.
- Project Myriam is not an NTS game. It's a fuck-fest game with hella optional paths where you watch this woman fuck anything that moves.

- Ashen is trying to add what realism he can so that the characters don't feel like cardboard cutouts just waiting for their screen time (sex). You described Ashley simply as a super slutty type. That's the main reason these set-ups are necessary. He's trying to make her more than JUST a slutty character. She's actually intelligent and is helping MC work through some trauma from their past. She plays up her ditsy antics for her BF, and pretends to be less intelligent than she is in order to do the teasing. They then discuss things afterwards. IMO, if you want long term investment from your audience, you take the time to build characters and the world they are in. Netorase stories live and die on the relationship between the MC and FMC. Its almost as if the relationship itself is the main character in a way. If you don't take the time to establish the relationship, the game/story will ultimately have no legs. That works in NTR games but much less for an NTS game. If Ashley just started fucking co-workers from update 1, it'd have zero impact. The game would became a mindless fuckfest and burn out in less than a year once she'd made her rounds through everyone in the building.

"Fap away" NTR games or comics ain't interesting too. In fact this is the first game that i read properly. The games above IMHO is just meh.

 

[neroman76]

Any update? I just love this game

Not really, seems like Ashen not only left F95 but also went pretty quiet on Discord and Patreon in the last couple weeks.