VN Ren'Py Girlfriend [v0.78] [By Paola]

[Prowl13]

I agree that the boss having some history with FMC didn't sit right with me either. Also her age is disturbing on many levels. as that means not only did MC and FMC get engaged when she was 15, but that her past with the Ex boyfriend Lucas and MC's boss happened when she was 15 or younger which is creepy as heck. She really needs to be at least 21 in the current timeline.
Having said that another poster did have a point about how the age of consent is different in different parts of the world.

 

[luxury1970]

I agree that the boss having some history with FMC didn't sit right with me either. Also her age is disturbing on many levels. as that means not only did MC and FMC get engaged when she was 15, but that her past with the Ex boyfriend Lucas and MC's boss happened when she was 15 or younger which is creepy as heck. She really needs to be at least 21 in the current timeline.
Having said that another poster did have a point about how the age of consent is different in different parts of the world.

It was a mistake.
We have already changed the script.

 

[Swooosh]

I have opened a survey open to everyone if you are interested I am waiting for you with open arms.

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Cuckold ofc! Fantastic game btw!

 

[Marioc17]

Android version please and thank you

 

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

I have opened a survey open to everyone if you are interested I am waiting for you with open arms.

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On your survey, does "mc woman" just mean his girlfriend, aka Lucretia?

Also side note, at some points in game it still uses gf's stock name instead of what the player entered, I would recommending changing these like this:

 

[Badboll]

It was a mistake.
We have already changed the script.

You should probably make a different colored text in the OP that states this so people stop talking about it so often.

Yes, you are right. The problem is that starting a game from scratch, i.e. where the wife or girlfriend has no past is very difficult in my opinion.

I don't mean she shouldn't have a past, she does have one with the EX, it's just that specific part of it I don't like.
I'm not saying you have to change it either. I am just expressing what I think about it.
Like they still know each other given that he was the uncle but they never had sex and knowing that he's her boyfriends boss and that he's having relations with her mother will already get him a way in to her life for three different reasons already.
In fact in my eyes because they already had sex and that she knows he is a scumbag, which he clearly is. Given how he acts at work and that he fucked his nephews ex instead of what he was supposed to do, that should make his efforts to seduce her harder instead. Maybe you have already thought of how to write this out so it works. That's just how I see it with limited knowledge of what is to come.
I don't particularly like blackmail storylines and that's the only path I can see that go.

 

[Lucrezia&Augusto]

On your survey, does "mc woman" just mean his girlfriend, aka Lucretia?

Also side note, at some points in game it still uses gf's stock name instead of what the player entered, I would recommending changing these like this:

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Thanks for the report I have already edited them.
I managed to remove those annoying tabs as well.

 

[Ntrloverfan]

I think if you increase the scenes that make the MC incites workers or men around him to touch his girlfriend, and there is hesitation and surrender to his desire to do so
and also bought his girlfriend sexy (transparent,short, without underwear) clothes exclusively for these scenes

 

[xxxhdk]

Android?

 

[The Pointman]

Judging by the dev notes, it's the same developer from A Wife In Venice. And seeing how that one is not well received; I have a feeling this is going to be more of the same. The dev is also known for abandoning games left and right and never completing anything. So, I don't have high hopes for this one either.

EDIT: So, after trying it, just in the intro alone, I already hate the MC. He is 24, and his fiancée just turned 18. He got engaged to her three years ago. So, he was a 21-year-old that got engaged to a 15-year-old. They had to be dating way before that for him to propose to her at 15, thus making the MC a pedophile.

Naming doesn't work too well, as it keeps calling the girlfriend Lucretia, even if you rename her.

And before you ask, NTR is not avoidable. Game makes you a cuck automatically (MC fantasizes about being a cuck).

So that overview is just a fucking lie then thanks for letting me know.

 

[Joshy92]

It's going to be so hot when watching Lucretia having sex with another man in our bed. I hope she let's herself enjoy the moment.
A beautiful and sweet girl like her deserves nothing but the best.

 

[PainKnight]

banger sharing game

 

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

So that overview is just a fucking lie then thanks for letting me know.

For a guy that hates these kinds of games, I sure end up seeing you in a lot of these threads....starting to suspect this is like those conservatives (liberals if you're in Europe) who preach against certain behaviors and keep showing up at highway rest areas

 

[The Pointman]

For a guy that hates these kinds of games, I sure end up seeing you in a lot of these threads....starting to suspect this is like those conservatives (liberals if you're in europe) who preach against certain behaviors and keep turning up at highway rest areas

Cause i find watching car wrecks funny.

 

[luxury1970]

Cause i find watching car wrecks funny.

There are many paraphilias in this world. Why not also add your desire for shipwrecks.

 

[giorgyo777]

Hello friends, here I am.
I keep seeing a lot of posts from sniper shooters.
My wife and I along with many other friends continue our adventure.

The fact that I keep hearing that I have abandoned several games I want to refute that and reiterate that I have had personal attacks.
Also I am still here... So as you can see I haven't quit anything.
Maybe I could use some help.

I will close with this little speech: Do you know how much revenue the 3d games industry produces?
It only takes a few frank shooters to sink an amateur dev.

So attack me all you want but I will be back.
Happy to be a Pirate like so many of you.

This is a really great, hot, wonderful game!!! I'm really looking forward to the next updates to the game and hope to see as much content as possible and if I have to, skip a few to see a lot more!!! developer, you are a great fellow, don’t listen to any stalkers, your work is excellent and there really are people who really like your game, keep it up, continue, I’m really looking forward to it!)))

 

[donivlove]

I really like the approach but the developer should take this path little slower but more pre games on cuckold path than to dive straight into it at the same include some erotic time between MC and wife. I also like the path that MC can also fuck other womens in this than to be a cuckold alone. Hope this doesn't get abandoned. Hope to see swinging path as well.

 

[WuzzyFuzzy]

This is a bit scary. I don't think I would date a girl that could do this.

(Some of this dialog is way bad. Reminds me of Borat)

 

[luxury1970]

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This is a bit scary. I don't think I would date a girl that could do this.

(Some of this dialog is way bad. Reminds me of Borat)

Unfortunately you are right, there are phrases that cannot be understood in some parts of the world.
For example, in America, if I remember correctly, they say lick isalata. I as an Italian don't even know what it means and it doesn't excite me at all.
So unfortunately not having professional advice my dialogues can be misunderstood.
As for Borat there have been studies to interpret the sentences he says in different parts of the world, we humble Del can't afford it.
But you could help me, for example, by writing what you would have written.
Thank you.

 

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

Unfortunately you are right, there are phrases that cannot be understood in some parts of the world.
For example, in America, if I remember correctly, they say lick isalata. I as an Italian don't even know what it means and it doesn't excite me at all.
So unfortunately not having professional advice my dialogues can be misunderstood.
As for Borat there have been studies to interpret the sentences he says in different parts of the world, we humble Del can't afford it.
But you could help me, for example, by writing what you would have written.
Thank you.

To clear up Wuzzy's post (and please correct me wuzzy but I feel well qualified in engrish) -

As you hinted at with your phrase "lick isalata", indeed, "salad tossing" or "eating ass" would be similar phrases in english. This is certainly a divisive behavior as some like it and some like myself have no interest.

However - the bigger thing that jumps out in the prior linked dialogue is how he says "this bitch is shoving MY ass in MY face", as in his own butt in his own face... when I think of people who like "eating ass" above - it's another person's ass not their own...

So if this is the intended speech, the line should be something like:

My God! This little bitch is shoving her ass in my face! Does she want me to eat her ass?

Il dialogo nel tuo gioco diceva che gli sarebbe piaciuto leccargli il culo, non quello della sua ragazza.