Hey Dude! I really like, what your cooking here!
The art looks great and the characters feel really distinct.
What I would like you to add though, is some kind of glossary with short bios of the characters named in the story.
I don't know, if I'm alone with this, but it's sometimes difficult for me, to connect the names, to the character, they reference.
Also the pacing feels a bit off, but I guess that will be solved, once all the introductions and flashbacks are done and we continue the main plot.
Still... I really liked my playthrough and can't wait to play the coming update!