Ok, I know the scene with those pussies ganging up on him and the outcome of the "conversation". Let me ask u, those were some hard blows to the head (!!) and his mentor doesn't even call an ambulance from a payphone or at least ask someone for help ?? That shit is not to be played with bruh, I don't care if the MC's mentor wants to make him Naruto 2.0, u don't take serious shit like that as a joke, especially in the long run.
His history is a little confusing about Catherine and her friend Zoe, again ok. But what about Monica's 180 turn like Jim Carey's in The Mask ?? That wasn't told from MC's perspective, she said it herself ... she was introduced as an APPARENTLY decent girl and went to being a slut interested just in dicks and money ?? What about the cunt that the MC saved from certain death ?? I know it's too early to judge the quality of the plot and I trust you to make a masterpiece outta this game, or at least a top 5 candidate, but ppl want likable characters, and sex scenes that "never happened" or sex dreams ain't a plus to the story IMHO, there's no dev and no progress, something like blackmail, an excuse to make a sex scene.
I don't mean to offend you or the game, I respect u for sticking to your vision of the game, but don't forget that u need money and supporters to finance the project and these supporters need to be convinced to support u. At the end of the day, everybody needs to make a living and pay the bills, a low income is mostly equal to a big abandoned tag. In short, try to make as many ppl as possible being interested in your game by avoiding another Monica fiasco. If u want to make a girl a "party girl" make her from the start and give players the option to avoid her content for those who don't dig her character.
DA22 hell yeah, it's a damn good game, it has it's flaws but still a promising project !! And with a talented dev in the pilot seat u expect only the best. Oh yeah, here's another page just for you bro' !!