Hello.
The summary and samples made me come. And the result is good.
The worldbuilding is correct.
The characters are few and different.
The plot is interesting, particularly staying a good hero and not the usual self-centered jerk.
The artistic side is well done, outside maybe the hair on some of the girls (Amy, Aurora and Celeste).
First of all, thank you very much for the french version. It's so rare for an adult game to include it that I'm ready to be understanding for the spelling errors left (though it's making me mad). And it's easier to assess the game that way.
The introduction was well made. I would have loved to meet the father to know what kind of man he was. The flow of events of the main story was well thought and logical.
The MC has the right personality, though he is too easily pushed by others and not enough proactive outside when he is playing the hero. The other characters are great, though I have some doubt about some since we didn't see them often (just one scene or conversation).
There are plenty of choices, though I may have been wrong since my relationships aren't maxed outside Sarah. As for the MC, I don't know what's the more useful in the long run but I'm glad there's a possibility of being another kind of hero than the rush into action type.
The sex scenes were well made. Having different POV was great. The dick and sperm as well as the pussies were realistic enough (they usually tend to look like plastic and glue, so thanks).
The hero's scenes were well built, nearly cinematographic, and varied.
There are many questions left and I'm also worried about some of them (not only the ending). So I'm curious about what will happen next and obviouly about the rest of the game's story.
By the way, one of the godesses is called "Destinée" in french and it made me laugh everytime I saw that name (well, it reminded me a song with the same name and the film it was in
).
Good continuation.