- Aug 28, 2017
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There is only 1 sexual scene, which is a blowjob (not with the goblin). There is potential and I like where this is going, but the visuals could really be improved.
The lighting is bad and fluctuates between pictures, fix this and it'll feel a lot smoother (look at the intro i.e. How the hell is the inside of his mouth brighter?!). The MC's dick is ridiculous, but I guess I can let that slide for now.
I hope it improves, it may very well be on the right track!
The lighting is bad and fluctuates between pictures, fix this and it'll feel a lot smoother (look at the intro i.e. How the hell is the inside of his mouth brighter?!). The MC's dick is ridiculous, but I guess I can let that slide for now.
I hope it improves, it may very well be on the right track!