VN Ren'Py Going Back [Prologue] [Space Gaming]

Ogz

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Jun 27, 2017
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You must warn to save the game before end. You have to make proofreading because grammar is bad.
 

Danliness

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Dec 24, 2021
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What da fuck did I play lol ?? So, let me get this straight... the MC's shitty dad kicks him out of the house leaving him with no money, no place to stay, no possibility to finish college and get himself a damn job to earn his living, cuts off all contact with him and makes sure his family can't reach him either only to leave his whore house business to him and basically force him into becoming a glorified modern pimp without giving a shit about his opinion on the matter and the potential consequences for his future during those 5y he needs to play RL 50 cent.:rolleyes:

Bruuuhh, am I the only one who hoped to see this motherfucker get killed in the most passionate way possible by the inbred, sick psychos from the Wrong Turn franchise ?? And some peeps here still say dads being dead or killed off for the "plot" is a bad thing. In some cases it is, not in this one tho.

So, we're forced to run a whore house, MC's mom is a whore, he will probably never fuck her, cuz she's too busy getting fucked by others on camera(n), his sisters already are or are on their way to becoming whores too, and so far, most of, if not ALL, the women he interacts with, except for Emily and the makeup artist, are literal whores who get fucked, humiliated, pissed on and whatever for the money, but when the MC tries to fuck one of them, they're too busy (literally) working their asses off or will leave him with his damn pants down to go take care of the 'clients'.:WaitWhat:Don't mean to sound too harsh with the criticism, but the game fails at almost every aspect you can name, even the sex scenes are short and boring, in a brothel/fuckfest simulator (!!)... the only good things so far are the MC's interactions with Emily and his decent character, but there's too many minuses and barely a few pluses to make it worth the headache.

Another important thing worth mentioning is that the dev has another game in development with almost similar slutty female characters and a different story, and as bad as some users think that one is, at least it still has potential and the story could be salvaged, but this one surpasses it, and not in a good way, IMHO.

Even tho the game is clearly not for me and I don't recommend it to anyone who doesn't like prostitution, whores, whores as fictional female relatives, multiple penetration and NTR scenes down the line (both are in the planned tags), I still wish the dev the best of luck with the development and think he should consider making it a full-on NTR game, cuz most non NTR fans will avoid it like the plague and maybe NTR fans will support it.
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Danliness

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Dec 24, 2021
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However, if this game didn't start off with the mom and sisters being literal prostitutes, then this could have been a good Harem game where he helps them out of it while finding out the corruption that his father was a part of and maybe saving the rest of the girls. Heck, maybe they even make the brothel into a respectable diner. Oh well.
Did you play a different game or do you just like running around spreading misinformation? As for the mother, a porn star is different than a prostitute, but based on your initial message, I could understand the confusion. As for the sisters, nothing in the prologue suggested they were "literal prostitutes". I expect a better mentality from a "game developer".
I'd also like to point out, what you said doesn't even make any sense. "If his mom and sisters weren't all prostitutes (again, they aren't), then this could have been a good harem game where he helps them out of it and even saving the rest of the girls". (it being what? being prostitutes?) To reiterate, a good game would be everyone being prostitutes and him trying to get them out of it, but you're also critiquing the game for doing the first part of that (again, not even true), based solely on the PROLOGUE, so we don't know what's gonna happen a few episodes from now. Got it.
 
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