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I'm glad everyone seems to be enjoying the update, you never know what people will think so I always get nervous around releases lol.
Any feedback on what you would like to see in the future or what I could be doing better is greatly appreciated.
I'm also required by dev law to shill my Patreon, so you know... go do the thing maybe.
Any feedback on what you would like to see in the future or what I could be doing better is greatly appreciated.
I'm also required by dev law to shill my Patreon, so you know... go do the thing maybe.
Why you are even nervous you are much better then tons of the others creators which get 30 k $ and do barely anything in updates or in status report
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Here's my honest feedback... questionable stuff first, then my compliments...
What's with Riley having braces? She's supposed to be such an accomplished, championship winning kick boxer (something most folks don't achieve until their late twenties or later) but she still looks like a middle schooler with those braces!
The only other stuff that bugged me a bit was that you gave us the option to chase down each of the three potential yacht sex partners but DID NOT give us the opportunity to bail and just say no! "Call it a night" was even in the dialogue below the choices but not an active choice. That was given as an option multiple times in the dialogue but not in the choices where it counts! Now, being that my curiosity makes cats jealous... I had to play all three and saved after reloading and playing the scenes with Ellen. But, there's no way that Otso didn't leave MC gaped way larger than he did. MC had a really tiny gape when Otso would've opened her up like a holiday turkey, fully stuffed! Hahaha
I'm not complaining here. I LOVE this AVN!!! You asked for feedback so I give you my mace blunt honesty full on. I don't expect everything to be exactly how I like it. That is selfish to think like that. The things I pointed out do not detract from my overall love of the story. If I were giving this a review (too soon at present) it would get five stars for what I've seen thus far. So, please keep it up! I love how MC took a shitty situation in her life and is now turning it around with great success in a new kind of martial contest, one with a rather fun and sexy twist. The characters are flawlessly rendered and incredibly sexy. The play by play combined with the action in the ring is exciting, awesome and intense. I am already chomping at the bit like a wild stallion in his first corral to get at more of this exceptional story. Bravo DelinquentProductions!!! Bravo! Extremely well done, my friend!
Adventure ever on, Phat
There's a few reasons for this, the main one is that she's meant to be pretty insecure despite those accomplishments and looks, it's something that will come up later for sure! The other more selfish reason is that I just like them and wanted to put them in somewhere lol, but I know not every choice will be everyone's cup of tea.
If the choice to call it a night doesn't skip all of the yacht sex scenes then that's a mistake that I missed!
You're not wrong lol, I originally had some more to that scene and a much larger gape but I just couldn't get it to look right, maybe something I should have spent more time on but I decided to move on.MC had a really tiny gape when Otso would've opened her up like a holiday turkey, fully stuffed! Hahaha
Thanks for the feedback!
i also loved this update, as well as the previous ones
the only thing i don't 100% understand is why we always get the choice between being active or submissive in random sex scenes outside of the ring, but we never get choices during the matches
i guess FMC winning is a requisite for the story, but it's not clear yet
the only thing i don't 100% understand is why we always get the choice between being active or submissive in random sex scenes outside of the ring, but we never get choices during the matches
i guess FMC winning is a requisite for the story, but it's not clear yet
I am also a big fan of braces, and I feel like they fit Riley's character perfectly. I just assumed that maybe she grew up on the poorer side, and only got them after she started making money from fighting. Getting braces as an adult is pretty common in many countries, and is often considered a status symbol for showing off wealth.
I was also surprised that the yacht scenes didn't have an opt-out, not that I'd have used it. Those scenes were all amazing! I was a bit (pleasantly) shocked that, considering how large this update was, you didn't decide to split the yacht scenes across multiple updates as a recurring event. Most developers would have milked all that juicy content for months or years, and for that reason, you clearly stand above the rest. Yours has become one of my most highly anticipated games, and I can't wait to see more!
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personally loving the game, MC is super pretty (hence why i asked to do fanart) and personally I would like to see her power bottom more, and have more futa's on the roster sub sequentially, maybe even have her download a dating app too and nobody believes a celebrity is on that dating app
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I had braces in middle school and into high school. Dated a couple of girls that also had braces... Never got locked face to face by the wires but did experience some oral cuts, scrapes and even a couple of gashes! After that... A BJ from a girl with braces became known as a "Black and Decker Pecker Wrecker!" No thanks, sweetie. Phat will pass on the kissing and the hummer too... Never allow sharp metal objects in bed for sexy time. That shit HURTS! No kink shaming here. But, I just don't get the attraction of a bunch of twisted metal in her teeth! Ever heard of "Invisalign?" That method bypasses all of the metal shredders with a plastic, snap on orthodontic appliance that is invisible. Wish they would have had that back when I need orthodonture!
Here's the image from that screen. Three active options to go to the NPC's for sex but the opt out is just text only. TBH, I played all three and still would have had the fourth option been active but after all of the dialogue build up... it just struck me as a weird oversight...
No harm, no foul, my friend. As I said earlier, none of these items stole any of my love for this AVN or the kinky, brilliant story you are telling us. You asked for feedback so I gave it honestly. The most honest thing I can say is that in spite of the few, minor shortcomings...
I LOVE THIS AVN!!!
Keep up the awesome work, my friend. Adventure ever on, Phat
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Thank you! That is completely a mistake that I missed, I'll get that fixed.
I can understand people getting upset about unavoidable scenes in these games, but in this case you had a little something for almost every taste. I mean, you have a choice of male on futa, futa on male, and futa on female. If none of those appealed to you, why are you playing a futa protag game?
Fanart would be great, I'm completely fine with people doing whatever they like.
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Don't spout off without due diligence to read the context. I played all three of the available paths. My point was not to avoid those scenes. My point was that it was mentioned that MC could just take her leave and split if she wasn't feeling it. That option was mentioned NUMEROUS times in the dialogue then missing from the actual choices. Dev admitted that it was an unintentional oversight, as in it was intended to be a functional option, not just words at the bottom of the page. What you are doing is kink shaming anyone who would've actually wanted to pass on the three options. In all honesty, I would've enjoyed one other option that wasn't included... to say, "these rich assholes are boring... let's go find and fuck Harper!" Even then I would've advised that saying she could bail all those times and not putting an actionable choice in game was an oversight.I can understand people getting upset about unavoidable scenes in these games, but in this case you had a little something for almost every taste. I mean, you have a choice of male on futa, futa on male, and futa on female. If none of those appealed to you, why are you playing a futa protag game?
I LOVE futa protagonist games! Going Over is easily top three on my all time favorites list. My ONLY point in mentioning that missing choice link is that it was offered in the dialogue no less than half a dozen times.
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Relax, friend. I was just making a little joke, while applauding the dev for the fantastic scene despite the missing option to skip.
I'm loving your game but since you asked, I'd love for our protag to get dominated, like for reals in one of these fights, not just playing possum. But that's just me and whatever you do I'll like it cause this game is fire.
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Definitely the best update so far, and I hope it continues, I know it would add more time between updates, but letting us pick between fucking a female, getting fucked by a guy, or fucking a guy was a great idea, very smart let people pick and have options for all the futa/TS kinks.
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All sex scenes were very hot and i quite enjoyed the movie night with Cadi, Riley and Mai. Jade and Candi's face when they hear about the horror movie plus the follow up kiss between them.
So Carmen knows about Isabella's plans. Wonder how she found out.
Slater also seems to be in trouble...
And the Jane vs Riley match was gret. Riley is a lot more skilled fighter than she let on and Jane clearly misjudged her. If this were a more conventional street fight Riley would have won from the start.
Jane needs to up her game and stop underestimating her adversaries.
All in all a amazing update.
So Carmen knows about Isabella's plans. Wonder how she found out.
Slater also seems to be in trouble...
And the Jane vs Riley match was gret. Riley is a lot more skilled fighter than she let on and Jane clearly misjudged her. If this were a more conventional street fight Riley would have won from the start.
Jane needs to up her game and stop underestimating her adversaries.
All in all a amazing update.
Hi Alucard,
You may want to check out Confusion and Futagenesis Unveiled. Their MC Futa have real depth of character.
With good futa content (but nor MC), you have Lunars Chosen if you are in a mood for fun and hapiness (be ready for a trip !).
The excellent Tales From the Unending Void have some very good futa/trans content, albeit not the main focus of the game.