GuardianZ

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Yea I'll do what I can for the text, but I mean I know half of you are barely even reading it ;). As for compression, all files are already in webm format, there might be a stray gif or two that hasn't been converted yet but theyre smaller in size and i dont see the game getting as big as some of the entirely gif based ones. For comparison the equivalent of a 2mb webm file would be a 50mb gif, yea i checked, my NAS would hate me.
Thanks fam!
 

amBest

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Jul 18, 2017
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I'll rate the game after I finish it, but even without finishing it, I have enough to say here:

*** Never go halfway between insanity and reality ***

You want a game where fucking starts absolutely instantly and you're fucking your best m8, your bully and your mom on day 1? No problem, just invent a world where that shit happens on the reg, or give the MC a magic ring. Blamo, done.

Want a game with a story and characters and a narative and events that tie in togeathere? Well then spend some time on character development.

A woman's child has changed his entire body (not just appearance, everything) magically in an instant. She will not go "oh, you look different", she'd scream and be confused.

*** If you can't make a story, skip it ***

Either invest in the world, take time with what is happening, have your characters react to the world around them, don't just go
* Door is gone, time to play
* It says you should impregnate your mom
* Mom: meh, why not.

If you find you can't do this, then go down the insanity route, or the "everyone except the MC can't see the magic". Aka either make a world where it's 100% normal for a son to barge into the lavatory, see that it's ocupied by his mom, and have him piss on her, while she doesn't even react, alomst as if this is the normales thing to have ever normaled.

That or have the MC do all sorts of magic, but everyone else doesn't even understand that something is different, they just go with the flow.

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Hope this helps, GL
 

bobmiginnis

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Aug 18, 2017
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Great so far, can't wait to see how the game looks when you finish.
Thats a long ways off, lots of content planned currently its less than 10% done, closer to 5% if i decide to go with the one set of things im planning.
 
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Slywa

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Sep 30, 2017
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I'll rate the game after I finish it, but even without finishing it, I have enough to say here:

*** Never go halfway between insanity and reality ***

You want a game where fucking starts absolutely instantly and you're fucking your best m8, your bully and your mom on day 1? No problem, just invent a world where that shit happens on the reg, or give the MC a magic ring. Blamo, done.

Want a game with a story and characters and a narative and events that tie in togeathere? Well then spend some time on character development.

A woman's child has changed his entire body (not just appearance, everything) magically in an instant. She will not go "oh, you look different", she'd scream and be confused.

*** If you can't make a story, skip it ***

Either invest in the world, take time with what is happening, have your characters react to the world around them, don't just go
* Door is gone, time to play
* It says you should impregnate your mom
* Mom: meh, why not.

If you find you can't do this, then go down the insanity route, or the "everyone except the MC can't see the magic". Aka either make a world where it's 100% normal for a son to barge into the lavatory, see that it's ocupied by his mom, and have him piss on her, while she doesn't even react, alomst as if this is the normales thing to have ever normaled.

That or have the MC do all sorts of magic, but everyone else doesn't even understand that something is different, they just go with the flow.

***********

Hope this helps, GL
It's a magic game that explicitly makes mental changes to the different characters.

Now sure, the game could go more explicitly along the route of the players being a bit reluctant to go along with the requests and/or have the "game" give more of a demo of its powers at the beginning for more of a "reason" for the players to go along with it. It could also start off with some softcore/milder challenges and rewards. But it's far from being a game like "If you can't make a story, skip it". The players have a game that's demonstrably magic, with magic penalties for failure, and magic mental changes (in both rewards and punishments) that make them more open to sex. That's plenty of reason (more than most of the games on here).

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It's a really good start. Story-wise the only 'logic' complaint I'd have would be in fully keeping track of past changes as the player susceptible to commands seems to disappear, for example. Mechanically, it's pretty good so far, but maybe have a non-RNG option as you go along. I think the only thing currently is who starts, but if there are more it could make it harder for someone to explore all the options/endings. Looking forward to seeing where it goes.
 

ILCjr

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OK, I read the description, and read the thread while down loading. This sounds like it may be a fun game so, I will now play.
 

lorddarkam

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here is a few suggestions
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I don't want to be abnoxious so I will stop here

know that I have only the best of intent twards you and am not here to usurp you or whatever
DAMM NATIVE SPEAKERS MAKE SOMEONE WHO LEANED ENGLISH BY MYSELF BEING FROM A SHIT COUNTRY FEEL SO INFERIOR
 

bobmiginnis

Newbie
Game Developer
Aug 18, 2017
99
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It's a magic game that explicitly makes mental changes to the different characters.

Now sure, the game could go more explicitly along the route of the players being a bit reluctant to go along with the requests and/or have the "game" give more of a demo of its powers at the beginning for more of a "reason" for the players to go along with it. It could also start off with some softcore/milder challenges and rewards. But it's far from being a game like "If you can't make a story, skip it". The players have a game that's demonstrably magic, with magic penalties for failure, and magic mental changes (in both rewards and punishments) that make them more open to sex. That's plenty of reason (more than most of the games on here).

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It's a really good start. Story-wise the only 'logic' complaint I'd have would be in fully keeping track of past changes as the player susceptible to commands seems to disappear, for example. Mechanically, it's pretty good so far, but maybe have a non-RNG option as you go along. I think the only thing currently is who starts, but if there are more it could make it harder for someone to explore all the options/endings. Looking forward to seeing where it goes.
currently yes that is the only RNG built in, and by built in I mean visible, the RNG buildout is planned for later and will be mostly which rewards/demotions get handed out and branching from that outcome
 

StratoSquir

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Jan 19, 2018
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i like this game, it's stupid but it's aware of it, it got some good comedy
and it's short and simple too, it dosn't have such big ambitions it would hinder the making of the game

short and fun-game with a great concept
not the best game i played, but it's a nice-one
clearly better than most Alpha 0.0001179 HTLM games that will never be finished
 
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go on with it bobmiginnis! Your game is fine. Wait for your progress. :cool::cool:
 

Highland_Hunter

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2. Evan calls your mom ms. It should be mrs. even if she is divoced or widowed
Actually, some women/moms, do go back to using Ms., so this could be one of those cases, it's not totally wrong.

I like that all the females, so far, aren't "Big Tits & Big Asses", we have SO many of those type games already. Nice to see some varieties . :)
 
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Rock Wisdom

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I am very much digging the cultural references. As an aside "Zombie Strippers" is actually a real movie (and not actually a porno... though it does star Jenna Jameson). It's a pretty terrible horror/comedy that's perfect for a group of people that love bad movies and drinking heavily throughout.
 
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