Others - Goodbye Eternity [v0.9.1] [RNGeusEX]

Review Version: 0.1

The Good
Characters and World Designs: Nice.
Content Level: Demo level
Story: Largely pending, but solid direction. Largely utilizes standard tropes for characters, but that's fine, they're tropes for a reason and we like them.
English: Flawless
Sandbox: House + City
Quest System: Decent (rather nice actually)

The Bad
Clicking randomly a thousand times trying to find the cash on various screens is a finger burning carpal catastrophe.

Overall
While very interesting and shows promise, the 'game' part of this game is still pending.

Notably the content that is present is completely solid without glitches or errors. It presents as the mature framework of a game with a bit of early content.

Likely it will not take more than an update or two to see where the game is going, but based on the current state I suspect it will be a good place.

honnestly, quite promissing. I was surptised to see that there is french text, i do talk french so it's quite appreciable. The story is interesting and all be honest, I want to see the END!
oh end the art is good, really good, I dont know if your alone in the project but if you need help in the charadesign and anything in that regard feel free to ask my help i'm not an exelent artist but well it's quite good if i can say so myself.
it's the quite rare for me to do that but i see some potential in that game.
in any case good luck my friend.

Another game like summertime saga or taffy tales.Very good art and good story too.This game have alot potential i can say for sure and even if you try you will accept it.Just try it you don`t have anything to lose.

LOOOVE the Art so far and the story is awesome too, the atmosphere is top notch, i´m invested and cant wait for more. I´m interested in what direction this will go and what kinks are going to be included.

Keep it up, best of luck and wishes

A great introduction; and a quite lenghty one. The character designs and art are very appealing, and the writing is very fun. For a first release demo, this is really impressive -- the groundwork your team has laid is solid and promises great things for the future. Got me hooked and looking forward to coming back.