Finished this version. Excellent 2D animations especially the Yasuka's scenes they seem to be improved alot over those scenes of the tomboy girl when they do it in the sleeping room (the scenes in the public toilet are pretty good tho) or when Noriko masturbate, are these made in live 2D ?
Yasuka's H-scenes stood out from the rest due to the more different of position, location, facial expression and camera angle making more, let's say ''interesting'' than most other scenes of other characters.
Also i prefer to see both male and female instead of from the male's perspective which again mostly applied to Yasuka's scenes so i hope this tradition will be kept for other characters in the future aswell.
Here are some of my most favorite scenes:
These reminds me so much of side-scrolling H-games where you take controll of a certain character (which i really wish it was a thing in this game instead of just visual novel).
If the devs ever planned to do it in the future but in Unity engine or something similar instead of Renpy when this game is completed, i think your game will blown given how good the animations and art style are.
Talking of the art style, i must admit that for a western developed game the art style are definitely S-tier. Western games usually failed to copy the looks of anime style but this is definitely not one of them, it is actually better than some Japanese games i have come across so great job from the artist, all characters are actually beautiful and cute and it makes me want to see more of them as you progressing through the story.
The only two i'm not a fan of is that white haired little girl and the daughter of ramen shop (forgot their names) i think they look different than Noriko or Yasuka, they look lesser detail (?), look like older anime style with large eyes or something idk, but i don't really like it that much.
Regarding the story is kind of whatever for me, honestly VN is not my thing but if it has animated scenes then count me in. So i never paid attention on the story but more on the art style, how good the animation is and how much animated scene it has to offer.
For me, plot only exists to build the characters and nothing else so as long as it has good art, smooth animation etc the game is good for me.