VN Ren'Py Goth Gasp [v1.0.1] [Frost Mist]

[FrostMistGG]

Advice from me:
If you want to know what the I meant. - Read what I say. And not just assume what I meant because you think so.
Best regards.

 

[FrostMistGG]

Oh and btw a quick reply for two reviews from me

1-Well yeah if you're no interested in two MAIN CHARACTERS and their BACKSTORY that happens 3 YEARS BEFORE THE GAME then yea, you have a problem.
Not like I directly stated that it's all for the plot set-up and to build characters because god forbid two women know each other from before.
No one said they join the harem together anyways.

2- To clarify, the quoted line is not from the game and is very insulting to my whole writing style.
You might not like the jokes I wrote and that's okay. To each their own. But that's a low level blow.

Chose menu options are lacking in 1.0 because It's just a prologue that I wanted to play out the same for everyone.
From 1.1 the choices will be more engaging and expanded.

But besides that most of them that are in the game right now have different small outcomes that change the tone of the next spoken line or change 2-3 dialogue lines after. - Only one is explicitly stated that it changes nothing because THE WHOLE CONTEXT OF THE SCENE which really isn't hard to understand. That's the whole joke there.
But like mentioned before, my humor vibe is just not for you and that's okay.

 

[King Ultima]

Well now that I'm getting notifications for whenever people comment on this game, allow me to throw some hats into this ring.

If what I'm feeling out about this game is how the dev intended it, this prologue is meant to be pretty real feeling. There are some fanciful elements, sure, like the chance meeting between the MC and Mia, but without something like that, we wouldn't have a story. The story itself isn't what's realistic. The character writing is. A harem of goth women brought together because a corporate bitch smeared the female lead's hard work? That's not realistic. People falling in love despite bad circumstances and making it work because they are willing to make the effort for that connection they felt? That's real.

If two of the women in this harem, who probably will be separated until the harem stuff happens and brings them back together, have had a relationship in the past, I think it only makes sense that these characters would be interested in lesbian or bisexual relationship dynamics. If you get upset at the fact that two of the characters have a lesbian sex scene completely divorced from any of the goings-on of the MC and Mia, I encourage you to check that little phone in the bottom right and see that they are main characters who will likely have a decent impact on the story as a whole. There's clearly some setup taking place for the purposes of the story. If you're still upset despite knowing that, it might be in your best interest to reflect and figure out what love means to you. Bisexual women can focus on the other woman in a threesome without completely shafting the man involved. I doubt any "sharing" will happen. I'm betting it's a group love situation. I doubt that the harem won't be a harem anymore because some of the women involved love other women in the harem. I'm betting those characters will love both the MC and the other women just as much as one another.

FrostMist has a vision and a story to tell. I would like to see that vision put to page as intended.
Fuck sakes.

 

[jadepaladin]

Ouch, the typical low review from Mix hits a lot harder when you don't have many to counter it with.

 

[BTLD]

Well now that I'm getting notifications for whenever people comment on this game, allow me to throw some hats into this ring.

If what I'm feeling out about this game is how the dev intended it, this prologue is meant to be pretty real feeling. There are some fanciful elements, sure, like the chance meeting between the MC and Mia, but without something like that, we wouldn't have a story. The story itself isn't what's realistic. The character writing is. A harem of goth women brought together because a corporate bitch smeared the female lead's hard work? That's not realistic. People falling in love despite bad circumstances and making it work because they are willing to make the effort for that connection they felt? That's real.

If two of the women in this harem, who probably will be separated until the harem stuff happens and brings them back together, have had a relationship in the past, I think it only makes sense that these characters would be interested in lesbian or bisexual relationship dynamics. If you get upset at the fact that two of the characters have a lesbian sex scene completely divorced from any of the goings-on of the MC and Mia, I encourage you to check that little phone in the bottom right and see that they are main characters who will likely have a decent impact on the story as a whole. There's clearly some setup taking place for the purposes of the story. If you're still upset despite knowing that, it might be in your best interest to reflect and figure out what love means to you. Bisexual women can focus on the other woman in a threesome without completely shafting the man involved. I doubt any "sharing" will happen. I'm betting it's a group love situation. I doubt that the harem won't be a harem anymore because some of the women involved love other women in the harem. I'm betting those characters will love both the MC and the other women just as much as one another.

FrostMist has a vision and a story to tell. I would like to see that vision put to page as intended.
Fuck sakes.

that was a bit of a funny read

 

[Bobjock]

Yeah, his review is pointless (Mix). I feel like it's rude to review something that has just been released, in a negative way.I don't even like to give reviews on games I like, and have been around for a long time. In my opinion people should always make up their own minds, and not be so influenced. That's just the way the world is now I guess. Also that dude has a small army of weirdos that follow him and ask him to bash things. People are so weird on this goddamn site.

 

[Chris2041]

Its really funny how the guys that are saying to the dev not change his vision are being more annoying that the people that give feedback and wanted to make a scene optional (Not deleted or changed optional for the people that not liked )
Good job Dev is good to take some feedback for your player base and i really apreciate Devs that cone here to talk to us and if something dosent work they arent afraid to change i see it a more genuine than other Devs than dont listen to feedback and after a couple of months the game is abandoned .
Im gonna wait for the new updates more happy now.
Good luck whit your game

 

[JohnnyFromDeep]

Even saw one time a dev finally agreed just to get the NTR guys to stop, he lost all his original supporters, and then the NTR guy didn't even send the money, he canceled/challenged the payment/transfer or something, so the guy ended up getting nothing and losing everything.

Which game

 

[JoeTheMC84]

Which game

It's been abandoned for years. We're not supposed to really directly talking about other games in a game's thread, and I never really played it, just remember seeing the fall out in the thread back then and then it getting abandoned. I'll have to see if I can find the name of the game and maybe DM you if you really want to know.

 

[Chris2041]

It's been abandoned for years. We're not supposed to really directly talking about other games in a game's thread, and I never really played it, just remember seeing the fall out in the thread back then and then it getting abandoned. I'll have to see if I can find the name of the game and maybe DM you if you really want to know.

DM the name too if you find it pls its very interesting for me

 

[WeebboSan]

Masterpiece game. Searching for goon, stayed for story. Dialogues hooked me like the fish on a bait
If only i were rich I would literally pay the entire game project AAAAAA.

Don't know if you're planning more lesbian scenes (would be glad tho).
NO NTR? YOU'RE MY HERO.
Don't know planned tag, would be happy if there is something spicy (not heavy) like spanking.
If I'll ever resolve my finances you'll be the second creator I'll support on patreon.
I HOPE YOU CONTINUE TO DO GAMES, EVEN NON NSFW.

 

[FrostMistGG]

Masterpiece game. Searching for goon, stayed for story. Dialogues hooked me like the fish on a bait
If only i were rich I would literally pay the entire game project AAAAAA.

Don't know if you're planning more lesbian scenes (would be glad tho).
NO NTR? YOU'RE MY HERO.
Don't know planned tag, would be happy if there is something spicy (not heavy) like spanking.
If I'll ever resolve my finances you'll be the second creator I'll support on patreon.
I HOPE YOU CONTINUE TO DO GAMES, EVEN NON NSFW.

No need to support me on Patreon. That message was enough of a support itself.
Turned a shitty evening into a good one. Thank you really.
See you in 1.1 soon.

Additional huge Thank you to @jadepaladin for an amazingly well-written and extensive review of the game, touching on almost anything that someone wants to know when looking at reviews.
I will not make you disappointed in next updates. (At least story wise cause this free roam sections coding is giving me a challenge rn but i'll do my bestest best.) Thanks.

 

[Rockero_69]

Hi FrostMistGG , a good start and the renders are fine. Now I have a couple of questions:

So, are the choices actually useful or is it just to change the dialogue?
Also, why isn't making single-choice choices an unnecessary waste of time, a line of code, and more, which takes up space?
Also, does this only happen to me, or is the back option blocked? If the answer is yes, please fix this. Sometimes you accidentally skip ahead and lose dialogue, etc., and if you haven't saved, it's a hassle to replay from an auto-save that's been going on for a while.

Finally, the change between the present and the past of the MC, I like it and the dynamic of the MC with Mia, is incredible, (it really brings back personal memories, I once had someone like that), getting back to the topic, I agree with reliving the past and everything of the MC, but why see the past of the lesbian with airs of superiority friend of Mia (the one with green hair), I even forgot her name, because honestly and with all due respect but I don't give a shit what she did on her vacation and what she slept with everything or everyone she found and with that said, I have a bad feeling that if the MC wants something with her, he'll end up being forced to share Mia (personally that would be shit, I hope it doesn't happen),

Greetings and good luck with this FrostMistGG .

 

[FrostMistGG]

Hello, happy you liked the game
Here are answers to your points:

In version 1.0, choices only affect dialogue outcomes, except for the one at Mia’s new place (which was just meant as a joke). I’ll be removing that one in 1.1 since it caused confusion and frustration.
Starting with 1.1, I’ll focus on adding more meaningful choices. These won’t just change dialogue but also how certain scenes play out, before everything reconnects back to the main script.
Something like this: (sorry for cheap paint drawing)


Rollback will be added in 1.1. Its been asked for frequently.

Lastly:
Jade is a crucial character to the whole plot, so if you don't care about her and her past, then I can't do much about it sorry.

I don't know why almost everyone assumed that jade-noe love fling, that happens on a vacation trip 3 years in the past, means that jade and noe will join MCs harem as girlfriends.
Before i'll introduce them to the main timeline in the next updates you guys can only guess how they will be introduced - and the guess that is being guessed most often - is not the correct one.
Stick around and play 1.1 and you will find out how i planned it all.
No more spoilers from me. Have a good day.

 

[jadepaladin]

Hello, happy you liked the game
Here are answers to your points:

In version 1.0, choices only affect dialogue outcomes, except for the one at Mia’s new place (which was just meant as a joke). I’ll be removing that one in 1.1 since it caused confusion and frustration.
Starting with 1.1, I’ll focus on adding more meaningful choices. These won’t just change dialogue but also how certain scenes play out, before everything reconnects back to the main script.
Something like this: (sorry for cheap paint drawing)
View attachment 5242203

Rollback will be added in 1.1. Its been asked for frequently.

Lastly:
Jade is a crucial character to the whole plot, so if you don't care about her and her past, then I can't do much about it sorry.

I don't know why almost everyone assumed that jade-noe love fling, that happens on a vacation trip 3 years in the past, means that jade and noe will join MCs harem as girlfriends.
Before i'll introduce them to the main timeline in the next updates you guys can only guess how they will be introduced - and the guess that is being guessed most often - is not the correct one.
Stick around and play 1.1 and you will find out how i planned it all.
No more spoilers from me. Have a good day.

I don't know how people confuse Jade and Noemi hooking up on a trip as being in a serious relationship. It read like a vacation style fling to me.

 

[Chris2041]

Hello, happy you liked the game
Here are answers to your points:

In version 1.0, choices only affect dialogue outcomes, except for the one at Mia’s new place (which was just meant as a joke). I’ll be removing that one in 1.1 since it caused confusion and frustration.
Starting with 1.1, I’ll focus on adding more meaningful choices. These won’t just change dialogue but also how certain scenes play out, before everything reconnects back to the main script.
Something like this: (sorry for cheap paint drawing)
View attachment 5242203

Rollback will be added in 1.1. Its been asked for frequently.

Lastly:
Jade is a crucial character to the whole plot, so if you don't care about her and her past, then I can't do much about it sorry.

I don't know why almost everyone assumed that jade-noe love fling, that happens on a vacation trip 3 years in the past, means that jade and noe will join MCs harem as girlfriends.
Before i'll introduce them to the main timeline in the next updates you guys can only guess how they will be introduced - and the guess that is being guessed most often - is not the correct one.
Stick around and play 1.1 and you will find out how i planned it all.
No more spoilers from me. Have a good day.

The problem is we already experience a lot of bullshit in other games whit lesbian relationships and people are really scared im here from 2019 and i can tell you i liked lesbian content in harem games before but after all the times a lesbian girl steal the harem or fuck your best girl whitout MC knowing that i started to hate it in Male harem games i remember a game where the sister literally cucks you everytime .
I like lesbian on female protagonist games thou.
so a lot of people is not that hate your game or you is that they really have bad past times whit lesbians in harems .

 

[JoeTheMC84]

Hello, happy you liked the game
Here are answers to your points:

In version 1.0, choices only affect dialogue outcomes, except for the one at Mia’s new place (which was just meant as a joke). I’ll be removing that one in 1.1 since it caused confusion and frustration.
Starting with 1.1, I’ll focus on adding more meaningful choices. These won’t just change dialogue but also how certain scenes play out, before everything reconnects back to the main script.
Something like this: (sorry for cheap paint drawing)
View attachment 5242203

Rollback will be added in 1.1. Its been asked for frequently.

Lastly:
Jade is a crucial character to the whole plot, so if you don't care about her and her past, then I can't do much about it sorry.

I don't know why almost everyone assumed that jade-noe love fling, that happens on a vacation trip 3 years in the past, means that jade and noe will join MCs harem as girlfriends.
Before i'll introduce them to the main timeline in the next updates you guys can only guess how they will be introduced - and the guess that is being guessed most often - is not the correct one.
Stick around and play 1.1 and you will find out how i planned it all.
No more spoilers from me. Have a good day.

There is an implication in most people's mind that if you make an attractive character and then show them in a sexual manner that it is meant to lead to something more, otherwise it can feel like daggling bait out there to some people. Like a Chekhov's Gun. No one assumes you make someone in a story for no reason, and even less so someone attractive, and again even less so when showing them being sexual. People assume you are giving a tease of things to come. A, "you'll see more of her, *wink wink*" kind of moment. So people make assumptions because, "why else would you show it?" They might wonder. Since most people don't see other people's sex lives irl ever, and in most games you don't unless it means something. Anyway, I might be over explaining now I'm just trying to give a possible answer as to the why, not saying they are right or anything, but that might be part of the thought process.

I don't know how people confuse Jade and Noemi hooking up on a trip as being in a serious relationship. It read like a vacation style fling to me.

I didn't get the vibe that people were assuming a serious relationship from the scene, it was more of a not caring about it at all, as a fling or a serious thing from the character's perspective. A lot of people aren't into seeing sex between random people no matter if they are in relationships or it is just a quick fling or how important that person ends up being later. But maybe I missed some posts of something if that was an issue too.

 

[_doodle_]

So I'm just now getting around to this one. The one thing i noticed almost instantly is no rollback. Normally, you can use the mouse wheel to go back and reread or whatever. However, that's not the case here. Im one that clicks my mouse when im done reading rather than using the auto feature. So I'm a little disappointed in that. It wouldnt be that bad if the back button on the bottom was useable. It's been greyed out for me the entire time. However, i'm maybe 5 minutes in at most so i still got a good bit of content. I'll come back and add some stuff about what I thought potentially.

 

[jadepaladin]

So I'm just now getting around to this one. The one thing i noticed almost instantly is no rollback. Normally, you can use the mouse wheel to go back and reread or whatever. However, that's not the case here. Im one that clicks my mouse when im done reading rather than using the auto feature. So I'm a little disappointed in that. It wouldnt be that bad if the back button on the bottom was useable. It's been greyed out for me the entire time. However, i'm maybe 5 minutes in at most so i still got a good bit of content. I'll come back and add some stuff about what I thought potentially.

Rollback is getting added in the next update.

Rollback will be added in 1.1. Its been asked for frequently.

 

[_doodle_]

Rollback is getting added in the next update.

yup sorry. I missed that.