VN Ren'Py Grandma's House [Part 4 v0.58] [Moonbox]

[MoonBox]

The stuff so far was great with her no worries.

I wish we could choose what she calls us though. We are her "master" after all.
I'd just like to have an option to let her call MC by his first name. Especially if the BDSM and pet-play content is optional this would be a nice option to have.

The problem is the stuttering, so what she calls you has to start with M. Master is for sure, I'm open to adding Mister but otherwise I can't really think of anything I'd wanna add.

 

[Mommysbuttslut]

So you're fine with banging and impregnating a woman on her wedding night but not calling her afterwards is where you draw the line?

This but unironically.
"You're mine Veena, you will always be mine.

Spoiler: Just don't expect me to call you or anything."

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Lol I joke, I'm just glad she got an upgrade from one off to at least two off last update
Now we just need her for a sister threesome and I'll be happy.

 

[Uthuriel]

The problem is the stuttering, so what she calls you has to start with M. Master is for sure, I'm open to adding Mister but otherwise I can't really think of anything I'd wanna add.

I get what you're saying it's just that neither master nor mister imply closeness or love to me.
One last thing. MC helping her to get rid of her speech impediment could be an story arc for her.

Anyway... love your game.

 

[MoonBox]

This but unironically.
"You're mine Veena, you will always be mine.

Spoiler: Just don't expect me to call you or anything."

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Lol I joke, I'm just glad she got an upgrade from one off to at least two off last update
Now we just need her for a sister threesome and I'll be happy.

Oh that's happening. I'm a tease, not a sadist

I get what you're saying it's just that neither master nor mister imply closeness or love to me.
One last thing. MC helping her to get rid of her speech impediment could be an story arc for her.

Anyway... love your game.

Oh she's never getting rid of that stutter, it's part of what makes her who she is.

 

[OmegaLord]

Yeah sorry I ramble and will try to do TLDR but I honestly suck at explaining myself without misunderstanding as is

Like said by Mommysbuttslut, it's claiming Paveena as his then ignoring her. Again it just goes against what we are told about Thomas, if he didn't claim her it wouldn't be as much of an issue to me.

The Karen/Shizuka thing was poorly explained by me. Basically Thomas was forceful using pleasure in a disciplinary means with Karen, loved that btw. However considering Shizuka's life till now it would feel very wrong if Thomas would treat her in the same manner/intention.
Karen and Shizuka are kinda two sides of the same coin, they both want to be controlled. While Karen has had no restraint in life which she craves, Shizuka has only known being controlled with indifference, Thomas provides the same control which she has only known while being allowed to explore what she has not been allowed till now.

TLDR:
I ramble and suck at explaining
Pav claimed then forgotten
BDSM Shizuka bad BDSM Shizuka want/good
Sorry couldn't resist

EDA: Not expecting more writing, just was saying maybe whittle down how many stories there are, I love how just about every character has a place and story, but the downside is there are story lines that start to fall apart due to how much Thomas needs to do, Natalia for example has had Thomas do nothing since his promise to her to help her divorce her husband. (Lily fell into his lap)

 

[Furmilk]

Oh she's never getting rid of that stutter, it's part of what makes her who she is.

I'm kind of in agreement with Uthuriel, addressing her lack of confidence with speech therapy would be a very interesting arc for her to take; her growing more and more proud of who she is while tackling imperfections, ultimately becoming a proper maid with perfect speech, but you seem to know what you're doing so stay the course.

Though while we're on the off subject of selfish requests, MAOR BREEDING! Everyone carrying a child! Make a Major league team in every sport with your own offspring! Put that fortune the family seems to be sitting on to good use by giving Grandma a Roman Legion of great-grand children/grand children/children to spoil rotten!

 

[Bob69]

The problem is the stuttering, so what she calls you has to start with M. Master is for sure, I'm open to adding Mister but otherwise I can't really think of anything I'd wanna add.

Oh she's never getting rid of that stutter, it's part of what makes her who she is.

Well you could always go for the route of removing the stutter from MCs name/title. Or make a combination of removing it from the name, and putting the title (Master/Mister MC) in specific

 

[Uthuriel]

I'm kind of in agreement with Uthuriel, addressing her lack of confidence with speech therapy would be a very interesting arc for her to take; her growing more and more proud of who she is while tackling imperfections, ultimately becoming a proper maid with perfect speech, but you seem to know what you're doing so stay the course.

Though while we're on the off subject of selfish requests, MAOR BREEDING! Everyone carrying a child! Make a Major league team in every sport with your own offspring! Put that fortune the family seems to be sitting on to good use by giving Grandma a Roman Legion of great-grand children/grand children/children to spoil rotten!

For me it's also about her being a victim of trafficking.

That's why I'd like to be able to break her out of the master - servant mindset to see her growing into a confident young woman.
I can only guess but I think Moonbox seems to think her stuttering is cute, which to extent is true, but in the end it's a disability that should be tackled and not encouraged. That's also the reason why I asked if he would consider the option to let her call the MC something else than master or mister. MCs first name would be preferable.

 

[BeingADikDik]

Oh she's never getting rid of that stutter, it's part of what makes her who she is.

If her stutter incrementally improves from the first letter in a word to the first syllable, then it could get dangerous for MCs named Nigel.

 

[Maevos]

N-next update, w-when?

Oh hell no I can't do this lol. It's pure torture reading her lines.

I need some of that dominating amazon of a cop to balance the sugar overload that I get from Shizuka.

 

[BeingADikDik]

Get where you're driving with it, but it's a completely different sound. No danger of inferred racism.
The first syllable of "Nigel" is "Ni".
"Ni" is pronounced as "eye", not "dig".
So her first syllable stutter would be "Ni.. Ni.. Ni.. Ni...gel".

Oh next you'll tell me that the joke doesn't apply to my other MC named Fagan.

 

[Havik79]

If it is possible, I would really appreciate a QoL feature, I play another game, On Distant Shores, it too has a lot of girls like this game, and it is hard to keep track, there is an always-on red button you can push at almost any time and it pops up with a bio screen and brief info of each girl, this would be really handy for this game, I took ages to remember who Isabella is, well assume shelter as in she is an orphan.

Screens of what I mean.

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[JJDrakken]

Ya'll worry way to much. He doesn't force you into anything you don't want(when options are provided). If you pick it, that's on you, not MoonBox

I swear, you guys are having panic attacks(This comes from a guy who gets those cuz of SVT of the heart) over jack squat.

Beyond original no way out LIs, nothing else has been forced, if you found a scene you didn't like. You chose it, was not forced on yah.

So chill, like rest of us originals have been and enjoy the ride with the rest of us.

 

[JJDrakken]

If it is possible, I would really appreciate a QoL feature, I play another game, On Distant Shores, it too has a lot of girls like this game, and it is hard to keep track, there is an always-on red button you can push at almost any time and it pops up with a bio screen and brief info of each girl, this would be really handy for this game, I took ages to remember who Isabella is, well assume shelter as in she is an orphan.

Screens of what I mean.

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Front page is a PDF of all the girls/people.

 

[OmegaLord]

Oh next you'll tell me that the joke doesn't apply to my other MC named Fagan.

Nah, then it would just sound like she is warming up to sing
Do-Re-Mi-Fa... Fa-fa-fa-fa

 

[eltharion83]

Oh that's happening. I'm a tease, not a sadist

Weeelll...... MoonBox
You're both. *cough* Mila... *cough*
Mila was the evilest tease so far getting off by telling her what might happen and then.... Nothing. For ages. Which makes this tease pretty damn cruel and you kind of a sadist. ;-)
I won't stop mentioning this every now and then... :-D

 

[ramvivat]

God. it was the most beautiful scene in all VN that I have seen. the sex scene of pregnant Tanya and MC... not that I haven't seen it in porn but I've never seen it in VN.
it would be worth adding to the chamber of weights and measures as a standard of pregnant sex for VN =)

 

[Dipper Pines]

author, how much did the association of veterinarians pay you for bad advice? don't you have a dog yourself? then yes, such bad advice as giving bird meat on bones can be easily given to others.

=) Of course, I'm joking, but in every joke, as you know, there is only a fraction of a joke.

(if anything, I'm talking about treating Molly in the form of a piece of turkey on the bone. thermally processed bird tubular bones are a dangerous substance for the canine digestive system.)

It's not real life.....It's just a game. *No animals were harmed in the making of this VN*

 

[Uthuriel]

*No animals were harmed in the making of this VN*

How disappointing...

 

[matschbirne]

It's not real life.....It's just a game. *No animals were harmed in the making of this VN*

I'm very relieved, peta is very critical when it comes to well-being from fleas and other vermin