If you're actually looking for some feedback (not everybody is hence my keeping it to myself previously) then I would say to tone down the blush on Shizuka in the future. I get it, you wanted to show the further degrees she is feeling it and it worked in that regard but by the last shot she looked closer to having sunburnt cheeks rather than heavily blushing. She already has the stutter so it's an easily recognizable trait that she is getting more nervous when you accentuate it as you did and even called out. She is still super adorable though.
Yeah I haven't figured out how to make people blush yet so I've been using makeup. I applied it twice for that render to make her look extra shy but it does look off. I'll have to figure out how to actually make people blush.
A couple of the facial expressions of Fiona don't quite match up with the dialogue, her "Oooh kinky! That's so hot!" and "*Laughs* Not yet I'm not." (screwing with you) when discussing your date are both more of a serious/somber look given her playful tone.
Riona's face I would try to get closer to Fiona's in terms of skin tone, her body looks similar in terms of tone but in the scene together she looked quite a bit paler underneath the freckles/blush.
Sounds like I misslabeled a render then used it for a few flirty lines. I'll look into it.
I was going for a paler look with Riona. I like the look but there's also the fact that Fiona is wearing makeup (Foundation, Coverup? Not sure what it's called.) and Riona just has some lipstick and eyeshadow.
The other two's skin tone will be somewhere between Fiona and Riona.
Kat I would either reduce her booty size a little or give her thicker thighs and waist. Not by too much as she comes from such a beautifully healthy bodied family so it's fitting but it was so disproportionalty larger than the rest of her body that it was slightly jarring. Same with Aaliyah I would give a wider waist so she is closer to pear shaped rather than going for hourglass to give her a more natural taper to her hips rather than all of sudden getting inches wider on either side. Don't get me wrong, I have no issue with them being larger, in fact I love that you have more natural body sizes rather than everyone being supermodel skinny, those two are just a bit of an outlier in terms of their proportions.
Yeah I realize the proportions are off, especially on Aaliyah. But I love big butts and I cannot lie.
I'll probably thicken Cat's thighs a bit but I like her hip to waist ratio.
Aaliyah, I'm satisfied with. I know her hips look a little ridiculous but I like the look and she adds some variety considering most other women are thick and curvy or slim and petite.
Realisim really isn't a focus here, the fact that a lot of the women have natural bodies is a coincidence, it just happens to be what I'm into.
Lastly I would personally ease up on Isabella's makeup slightly, she comes in as this cute younger girl in pigtails with the shy disposition but then has really dark lipstick, eye liner and quite pronounced eye shadow use so was a slight juxtaposition to me.
I was going with a bit of a chola look with Isabella. I like the lipstick and liner but I'm on the fence about the eye shadow. I'm thinking of changing it to something a little more subtle.
None of them are dealbreakers and are obviously more of a personal preference type of deal, plus these are your characters so make them how you appreciate them most, just some honest feedback on a small number of things I'd noticed in my playthroughs.
Love the content though, love all the ladies and can't wait to keep up with the releases in the future.
Constructive feedback is always welcome. Appreciate that you took the time to write this.
