whichone
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Umm, but you quite literally did...In fact, I didn't attribute any negative value at all to her pregnant self.
"while she was still hot." Past tense, contextually prior to her becoming pregnant.
This states that you feel she's not hot anymore, now that she's pregnant.
Which is fine, if that's your opinion, but it most certainly does amount to a negative value being attributed.
If you wanted to say that she's still hot, just not as hot as she was before getting one in the oven then, rather than "while she was still hot", you probably should've written "when she was hotter".
I'm afraid that you cannot hide behind someone else's interpretation, when your own words leave no room for any other interpretation.