Very unsurprising based on the massive amount of Engrish in a 3 word title, but the game is also filled with Engrish.
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It happens a lot, they seem to forget that the writing is just as important if not more important than the renders in a visual NOVEL, if the writing sucks then it ruins the whole thing.. just my opinion at least.
It's not bad enough that it makes it unplayable, unlike some other games, but it's still definitely noticeable.
Edit: Nvm, the more I play the worse it gets lol
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Hopefully they take the time to hire a proofreader if English isn't their first language. Having to reread dialog in your head so it's formatted properly gets annoying after awhile. Step 1 should always be the script if you're wanting your game to be a popular VN that gets support on patreon or whatever sub platform you choose to use.
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Hello! The sex scene with Brenda is intended to be forced, all the others the player will be able to choose.
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Sure, we have already made corrections to the dialogue with the help of the community and will soon update the game file.
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As I mentioned in some answers, I would love to work exclusively for the game. For this reason, I will not abandon a project that I take so much pleasure in making.
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Best comment ever. At least 3 directional lights per scene. haha
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The player will indeed be able to avoid certain situations, but some events that will occur in front of, and not with him will be part of the plot and cannot be avoided.
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I don't remember if I already replied to your message, but I will definitely make those changes. Thank you for the suggestions.
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The beginning has been enough for me to lose interest in the game.
If we add this answer to my question:
If we add this answer to my question:
I guess the only thing left is to wish you luck.
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Don't worry, we won't have NTR, but we may see a strap-on.I see that harem is planned, I like that very much
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I see that lesbian and multiple penetration is planned and I don't like that
Your game looks very good and good luck
thank you for the comment!
Will that be avoidable?
I like for the mc to be the only one doing the penetrating, especially when it comes to harems.
Not into lesbian either, so will that be avoidable?
If everything is just going to be forced by the plot, then it loses my interest.
Will feel like I am playing a kinetic novel at that point where my choices don't matter at all.
ngl not sounding too appealing to me if you are not able to avoid things in a way they don't happen at all,
with, or without mc.
Appreciate you answering questions tho.
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I know that some themes will not please everyone, so these situations will be optional. It will be up to you.Planned tags: Multiple Penetration + no futanari tag = MC isn't the only dick though correct or is there lesbian play with strap-ons? Confused seeing group sex/multiple pen and harem. Not trying to be someone stirring shit up, just trying to clarify what the plan is so others will know as well. Some don't like the strap-on stuff too I assume.
Thank you for your comment.
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To give a better example, I'll tell you about a scene that's already written. There's a chance that the MC will arrive at a certain location, where he will hide and have the option to observe or not the scene that's happening in front of him. Because the player doesn't know what to expect, seeing a scene that might not please them can be avoided, but since it doesn't happen to him and is part of the plot, the scene will still exist.
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Very interesting game, gotta say. Gorgeous renders, characters with their own personality, simple yet valid story. The texts do need some polishing, but hey, its a first version. Not a lot of content for me to rate the game, but so far it does deserve praise. Good luck to you dev, congrats! Obs. the redhead.... what a milf!
It depends. Does that scene involve a LI? If so, then that's' not really avoidable, that is more like skippable in a sense it still happens, the player just doesn't see it which most people don't like TBH.
You say no NTR, so the scene sounds kinda... ya know.... SUS the whole “you can't do anything but observe and watch aka voyeur, or leave.” And I personally have no interest in seeing any other person touching or fucking the Lis, male or female. And if not, sorry for my paranoia.
If it just involves some randoms, ok, but a LI? Yea nah....
Like everything you said so far seems to be "for the plot" and honestly don't sound appealing tbh.
It means there are no alternative scenes depending on your choice? Sounds linear, since no matter,
what, it still happens in the background, and you just skip over it, or don't see it.
I get you are telling a story here, and not everything going to have a choice, but I will just like to
know if it's any leeway for the player at all?
So would appreciate more clarification if that scene involves a LI, or any LI in the banner?
and if you didn't know, LI means (LOVE INTEREST) btw.
Overall, this is my last question.
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