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Another great project arrived in this site
We hope that we will see this game from the beginning to the end and that it will not be one of those games that ends halfway
I wish you all the best [King]
 
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Saint Blackmoor

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You are a young man in a new city full of expectations and insecurities.

That is not a good city to live in. It sounds a lot like my girlfriend's personality.

Looks interesting. Thanks, and good luck, Kinkbr
 
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Boehser Onkel

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very good start for this vn

the renders/animations are great

the writing is flawless (minor things could be corrected)

i haven´t found any counting variable at the script ...
(this "she will remember this" are not connected to anything (for now?) )

menu:
"Tell the truth":
scene day1night_30 with fast_dissolve
mc "Oh.. Actually, everything happened so quickly that I could barely think."
$ renpy.notify("Deborah will remember this.")
play sound notifysfx volume 0.25
"Lie":
scene day1night_59 with fast_dissolve
mc "Ah, this? I think some insect bit me, and I scratched too much."
scene debsure with fast_dissolve
d "Sure."
$ renpy.notify("Deborah will remember this.")

:unsure: :unsure: :unsure:

gl with your project King
 

Jonathan0009

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very good start for this vn

the renders/animations are great

the writing is flawless (minor things could be corrected)

i haven´t found any counting variable at the script ...
(this "she will remember this" are not connected to anything (for now?) )

menu:
"Tell the truth":
scene day1night_30 with fast_dissolve
mc "Oh.. Actually, everything happened so quickly that I could barely think."
$ renpy.notify("Deborah will remember this.")
play sound notifysfx volume 0.25
"Lie":
scene day1night_59 with fast_dissolve
mc "Ah, this? I think some insect bit me, and I scratched too much."
scene debsure with fast_dissolve
d "Sure."
$ renpy.notify("Deborah will remember this.")

:unsure: :unsure: :unsure:

gl with your project King
you know there is a place you can leave a review right? no need to do it in the thread
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SpyderArachnid

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Honestly wasn't all that bad. The renders and models are great, and the animations as well. Quality is top notch. Translation needs some work though, as well as grammar.

Leaving that aside, I don't know why but the overview and images make me think that the mc is going to be the typical loser mc, who does what he is told, and lacks personality or at least a backbone, I hope I'm wrong :HideThePain: :LUL:.
It feels like that as well in game already. MC is pretty weak (I mean, a girl knocks him out cold with one punch and later he gets knocked out cold again from walking into a pillar). He seems like a pushover and lets people walk all over him. The first sex scene is forced because MC doesn't have the willpower (or strength) to stop it from happening.

Though the intro scene says otherwise (kind of), as this game seems like it will have a heavy focus on hardcore Male Domination. The intro looks like a vision of the future, where MC is a bit more "manly" now. So guess it will build up over time with him gaining more confidence and not being so weak.

But otherwise, it's not that bad. With a new game with this quality though, curious how long updates are going to take. Not a lot of content, but it is definitely more than most first releases. Still, give it a whirl if you're into the whole male domination stuff. Probably not for me, but still wish you the best of luck with your project and thanks! ;)
 
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