- Oct 26, 2017
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A very good start. Beautiful women, cool graphics.
One thing I wanted to point out, and this goes for all games here. There is a group of words that are overused and used in the wrong context.
One is "Really"
Example: "Yes. This really pleases me." the scene is a man dominating a woman in an S&M context.
Using "Really" is a less somber word. "Yes, This pleases me." denotes someone in charge, as is the dominant male in the scene. That word is way overused.
Just something I wanted to point out.
One thing I wanted to point out, and this goes for all games here. There is a group of words that are overused and used in the wrong context.
One is "Really"
Example: "Yes. This really pleases me." the scene is a man dominating a woman in an S&M context.
Using "Really" is a less somber word. "Yes, This pleases me." denotes someone in charge, as is the dominant male in the scene. That word is way overused.
Just something I wanted to point out.
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