- Mar 27, 2022
- 1,493
- 1,668
- Thread starter kinkbr
- Start date
- Oct 4, 2022
- 138
- 1,685
- Oct 4, 2022
- 138
- 1,685
I didn't worry about establishing that now because the reflection of those decisions wouldn't be in this release, but I will definitely come back to adjust it later.very good start for this vn
the renders/animations are great
the writing is flawless (minor things could be corrected)
i haven´t found any counting variable at the script ...
(this "she will remember this" are not connected to anything (for now?) )
menu:
"Tell the truth":
scene day1night_30 with fast_dissolve
mc "Oh.. Actually, everything happened so quickly that I could barely think."
$ renpy.notify("Deborah will remember this.")
play sound notifysfx volume 0.25
"Lie":
scene day1night_59 with fast_dissolve
mc "Ah, this? I think some insect bit me, and I scratched too much."
scene debsure with fast_dissolve
d "Sure."
$ renpy.notify("Deborah will remember this.")
gl with your project King
Thank you so much for your feedback!
- Oct 4, 2022
- 138
- 1,685
Hi lordfridge9 I really want to be able to dedicate myself exclusively to creating adult games. I hope that with this project, I can achieve that freedom, which is why stopping halfway is not an option.Great renders?
50/50 chance for this to be dropped
Thank you for your comment!
- Oct 4, 2022
- 138
- 1,685
Indeed, the MC is quite slow and it is necessary for the story because his growth will be something that I want to make very visible in the plot. Domination will be present, but it will only be one of the many interaction cores that we will have throughout the story.Honestly wasn't all that bad. The renders and models are great, and the animations as well. Quality is top notch. Translation needs some work though, as well as grammar.
It feels like that as well in game already. MC is pretty weak (I mean, a girl knocks him out cold with one punch and later he gets knocked out cold again from walking into a pillar). He seems like a pushover and lets people walk all over him. The first sex scene is forced because MC doesn't have the willpower (or strength) to stop it from happening.
Though the intro scene says otherwise (kind of), as this game seems like it will have a heavy focus on hardcore Male Domination. The intro looks like a vision of the future, where MC is a bit more "manly" now. So guess it will build up over time with him gaining more confidence and not being so weak.
But otherwise, it's not that bad. With a new game with this quality though, curious how long updates are going to take. Not a lot of content, but it is definitely more than most first releases. Still, give it a whirl if you're into the whole male domination stuff. Probably not for me, but still wish you the best of luck with your project and thanks!
- Oct 4, 2022
- 138
- 1,685
You are on the right track, but there is still an important detail missing.
- Oct 4, 2022
- 138
- 1,685
Thank you for the compliments. Regarding the writing, I am taking note of everything to correct it soon
- Oct 4, 2022
- 138
- 1,685
I was not wrong lol.
Yeah, I finished testing it and edited the comment, the mc is pretty pathetic, you can even say that the Blonde Milf abuses him and the mc is like "hihihi, but we reached an agreement right?"
You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
In general, the renders and characters aren't bad (except for the mc
There's no denying that the MC we encountered is pretty slow, but that's part of the story and his journey. An important aspect of the plot will be the construction and development of the characters. Even the sex scene with Brenda felt forced, and that will have an impact on the rest of the story.
Thank you for your feedback!
- Oct 4, 2022
- 138
- 1,685
Unfortunately, there is no model of it, I tried to customize the environments as much as possible so as not to give the impression that I have seen that in another game. The exterior of the house, for example, was created from scratch.
- Oct 4, 2022
- 138
- 1,685
It was my inspiration to start creating Growing Thing's Up. Before playing Fresh Woman, I didn't know about visual novels. I made a point of keeping this similarity as a dedication, because I really liked the game
- Oct 4, 2022
- 138
- 1,685
Why DEV ? Just why ?
You created beautiful renders, environment , the girls looks real good and the animations are real smooth ,
But the you wasted everything with a pathetic looser, spineless and brainless MC.
If the MC was written well then it would have been something else.
I wholeheartedly hope this will change in the future update.
You created beautiful renders, environment , the girls looks real good and the animations are real smooth ,
But the you wasted everything with a pathetic looser, spineless and brainless MC.
If the MC was written well then it would have been something else.
I wholeheartedly hope this will change in the future update.
I feel you bud.
This is how you create a submissive porn game.
Not a visual novel with adult elements in it.
- Aug 3, 2021
- 126
- 124
The same scenario applies to another game. the overall graphics are better in that game and here I'd say that the sex animations are way better.