Hi hachigames,
First of all: thank you for this great game!
It has all the good stuff in it:
- Nice graphics
- Beautiful girls, each with their own personality
- BDSM and male domination
- Medium to small tits
- Very userfriendly; you can always find your girl due to their pictures in the navigation menu and whenever you want to do a quest the questlog tells you wheren and when you can find the specific event
- Good sence of humor and some hilarious moments to leighten up the mood
- No excessive grinding for stats
-You're really fast working, there are often new updates and a corresponding amount of new content
But there are also a few things you could improve:
- The textbox is a bit big. You put so much work into the pictures and 1/3 of the screen is blocked by the textbox. Perhaps a scaling option in the settings would be great
- You should review the time advancement during the check ups of Maintenance/Cleanliness and Service as they pretty much take up a whole day, e. g. : Checking Service with Yuki at 7:00 -> Bad job -> Punish her -> Sexual Punishment -> Blowjob -> and ist 18:00; if she did a good job and go to the beach you end up at 15:00
- Now to the main point: The sex scenes are fairly "wooden". Lets take a look at the scene where Alice wants to gets punished in the MCs room (Quest: Punish me, Part 1): The MC arrives, there is some dialogue to explain the situation - so far so good. But then the sex scene immediately starts, no foreplay, the MC puts his dick directly in her ass, although it is her first time, you get to click around 20 times to get though the dialogue lines which mostly consist of a few words. The MC cums and the scene is done. There is a sufficient amount of pictures to get you through the scenes but the dialogue lines make it a dry treatiese. The player doesn't really get involved and the scene is over way to quickly to get him into the mood and for some (possible) action. I'm no writer, so I don't know how you can improve it, but there are a few games where you can get going with just a few pictures. I recommend taking a look at the sex scenes of some other adult games (e. g. Slutcraft - Heart of the Sperm, Milky Touch, Coming of Age, Edens Ritter Paladins of Ecstasy, Princesses Never Loose) where you mostly get 2-5 pictures per scene, but very good dialogues to involve the player and get him (or her) going.
Last, but not least a more personal matter: I would love to see some customization in your game although I have no idea how feasible it is with this engine and how much it would increase your workload, but I suspect it would be a lot. It gives a personal touch to every player and the illusion to decide things themselves in the game (take a look at The Twist, Love and Sex - Second Base). I would like to get the opportunity to add some piercings, decent single-color tattoos, change the hairstyle, their pubic hair or change the girls clothings. Alternatively you could change their clothes depending on the weekday or if its weekend or not.
So thank you very much for the game, keep up the great work and I hope I can soon get the chance to have some nice pet play with Sarah and get more involved with Scarlet and Hazel.