VN Ren'Py Completed Haley's Story [v1.1 Pre-Patched] [Viitgames]

[ImperialD]

It seems more like a generic wariness than actual knowledge. I mean, if he'd know, that would break his character big time, and we'd need some seriously smart explanation for that contradiction.

hmm ,, yeah i see your point all i'm saying is with my rerun thru ... it just seems mom would not hold back from telling what she knows about Haley to dad ... and maybe dad didn't believe it i don't know ... but you may be right ...

 

[automatica]

I DEFINITELY want a threesome relationship with Haley and Lisa.

This, but I also wouldn't mind seeing an MC-Haley-Adriana threesome.

 

[magus448]

This, but I also wouldn't mind seeing an MC-Haley-Adriana threesome.

I could see it as a bigger "fuck you" to her husband, than just doing the MC behind his back, while also being able to have Haley too to fool around with since he does not.

 

[automatica]

I could see it as a bigger "fuck you" to her husband, than just doing the MC behind his back, while also being able to have Haley too to fool around with since he does not.

Exactly. Haley could tease Richard and string him along, and then fuck Adriana instead.

 

[Antonie van Leeuwenhoek]

Story is good, if a bit depressing at certain points.

Completely agree with you
Just wanted to beat that fuckface even though it's just a game
I don't know if I'm the only one but I felt like when you watch some kind of emotional/suspense scene in movies and you just want to skip it until you get to make sure that everything will be fine in the end
Pretty childish isn't it

 

[Smarmint]

This was a pretty good update. I am glad to see Viit and Ptolemy put some of the fun back into the story. I know the thing with Klaus is still hanging over everything, but I like the story better when its just Haley and the MC joking around together, with a few others as side characters. I still don't see what the Klaus angle adds to the story, really. We don't get deep enough into Haley's recovery or her dealing with it to really be a major part of the story. It seems to be poorly handled in my opinion. Nor can we completely forget about it because the MC keeps bringing it up. I'd say go all in with turning this VN into a sexual abuse recovery story, and lose a lot of fans probably, but if that's where the dev wants to go he should stick to his guns, or just leave it out and leave it as a light-hearted fun story about Haley and the MC's sexual awakening with each other.
It's been beat to death, so I will try not to bring it up again. We'll see where the last several chapters leave us.

 

[The ArcKnight]

Fuck, this really puts me at a cross roads because I absolutely want to fuck Lisa, take care of Adrianna, and find out how things go with Diane and Allana but...

Muffin can't leave his sugar mama. <3

"Baby, its not a choice between you and a whore, its a choice between you and all the whores in the world"

 

[Frank Rosario]

Update 23/12/2020

Here is the Italian translation of "Haley's story" version "0.98 Incest Patch".
Note: Contain the incest patch.

The translation is provided in two formats: .exe (self-extracting) and .zip. It is not necessary to use both.

This translation is "unofficial" and "made by a fan".

The link is:

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Ecco la traduzione italiana di "Haley's story" versione "0.98 Incest Patch".
Nota: Contiene l'incest patch.

La traduzione viene fornita in due formati: .exe (autoestraente) e .zip. Non e' necessario utilizzarle entrambe.

Questa traduzione "non è ufficiale" e "fatta da un fan".


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Update 23/11/2020

Here is the Italian translation of "Haley's story" version "0.97 Incest Patch".
Note: Contain the incest patch.
This translation is "unofficial" and "made by a fan".

The link is:

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Ecco la traduzione italiana di "Haley's story" versione "0.97 Incest Patch".
Nota: Contiene l'incest patch.
Questa traduzione "non è ufficiale" e "fatta da un fan".


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Update 21/10/2020

Here is the Italian translation of "Haley's story" version "0.96".
This translation is "unofficial" and "made by a fan".

The link is:

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Ecco la traduzione italiana di "Haley's story" versione "0.96".
Questa traduzione "non è ufficiale" e "fatta da un fan".


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Update 25/09/2020

Here is the Italian translation of "Haley's story" version "0.95".
This translation is "unofficial" and "made by a fan".

The link is:

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Ecco la traduzione italiana di "Haley's story" versione "0.95".
Questa traduzione "non è ufficiale" e "fatta da un fan".


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Update 16/09/2020

Here is the Italian translation of "Haley's story" version "0.94".
This translation is "unofficial" and "made by a fan".

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Ecco la traduzione italiana di "Haley's story" versione "0.94".
Questa traduzione "non è ufficiale" e "fatta da un fan".


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Update 22/07/2020

Here is the Italian translation of "Haley's story" version "0.93".
This translation is "unofficial" and "made by a fan".

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Questa traduzione "non è ufficiale" e "fatta da un fan".


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Update 21/06/2020

Here is the Italian translation of "Haley's story" version "0.92".
This translation is "unofficial" and "made by a fan".

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[ZagorTeNay]

Haven't played this in a while. So this is following something like Dreaming with Dana: find another girlfriend to act as your "beard" ( funnily enough the one with her gigolo husband was actually the best)...Lisa, Adrianna or Sandra?

 

[EZ8lt]

Haven't played this in a while. So this is following something like Dreaming with Dana: find another girlfriend to act as your "beard" ( funnily enough the one with her gigolo husband was actually the best)...Lisa, Adrianna or Sandra?

There were references to it, but I honestly hope it's not. Repeating yourself is never a good idea, so I hope Ptolemy only put that in as a homage. Btw, secretary with daddy issues for life.

 

[Renpy75]

Here's my unofficial android port of Haley's Story [v0.91] [Viitgames] Compressed + Gallery Mod + Unlocker

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[Sancho1969]

Fuck, this really puts me at a cross roads because I absolutely want to fuck Lisa, take care of Adrianna, and find out how things go with Diane and Allana but...

Muffin can't leave his sugar mama. <3

"Baby, its not a choice between you and a whore, its a choice between you and all the whores in the world"

This exactly. And completely agree there's no chance in hell I allow "Muffin" to fuck things up with Suga. Hell I'd sew the damn category letters in her cloths for her, her flaws are way too minor given strengths. Sandra FTW with a side of only those that understand "D is for discretion". Sadly that leaves (at least) Lisa out but personally not seeing it as a huge loss all other things considered. Final v1.0 could have a sewing machine mini-game at this point for all I care

 

[ImperialD]

ahh b.s. Lisa is a fucking hottie

 

[QuixoteTheDon]

This is probably the best incest romance VN game there is. Period. The only minor, slight issues I had with the story were: Jack as the boyfriend. He was nonexistent throughout the novel, and then when Haley officially breaks up with him he becomes Sherlock Holmes that needs to investigate something? The dude could not take a hint that he was in an imaginary relationship where he doesn't see or talk with his girlfriend for a month? I think the more realistic version would be for him to accept the reality, or his role should have been more substantial. But how it played out I see that devs have a destructive role intended for him in a future update. Secondly, the parents bother me. First Haley thinks there is something wrong with their marriage, but apparently they seem to be fine. Dad also seems inconsistent with his views. One moment he says that the kids should cling to their jobs, the next they are walking through the woods and he offers to MC the hometown safety blanket. I also don't like him becoming more aggressive and suspicious, but I understand that they telegraphed what would be happening when they had him find Haley's panties in the MC's room. Mom ended the twisted relationship Haley had with Klaus, but didn't try to help her, protect her, kept a cold attitude towards her own daughter that was practically a child when the teacher raped her. I also don't truly enjoy submissive Haley and her using the word daddy. For some reason it bothers me a lot. All in all, this story is truly masterfully told and I can't wait to see how it ends. I wonder what will be the cannon ending for these devs. But I see a lot of potential tragic, bad ones. I love how they handled MC banging other girls without seeming like a total dick, but it bothered me slightly, first when MC cheated on Sandra with Adriana and then when he got serious feelings for Haley yet just causually bangs Diane. I just couldn't take it and broke all other relationships, with Haley being the only one. I liked Sandra a lot! But I just can't truly envision a three sided polygamous romance between the protagonists. It is either her or Haley, and no cheating on them. I guess if there will be a harem ending, I'd find it nothing more than fan service and not truly a credible conclusion to this story. Naturally, I'm extending my own feelings into the MC and usually in porn games that is rarely what I do, but I can't truly see him with anyone else, or cheating while in a relationship. Love the picture of who I presume is child Haley in the MC's childood room. What else.... Oh I love that Haley can grow pubic hair, but I don't get why it isn't reddish brownish like her hair and skin tone... What else. Oh man, I did not fap while playing this game, I just could not bring myself to do it. It felt wrong for some reason. That is some weird shit, but that is how I felt. Phew, I think I got all that I wanted to say off my chest. Good night folks.

 

[GrammerCop]

This is probably the best incest romance VN game there is. Period. The only minor, slight issues I had with the story were: Jack as the boyfriend. He was nonexistent throughout the novel, and then when Haley officially breaks up with him he becomes Sherlock Holmes that needs to investigate something? The dude could not take a hint that he was in an imaginary relationship where he doesn't see or talk with his girlfriend for a month? I think the more realistic version would be for him to accept the reality, or his role should have been more substantial. But how it played out I see that devs have a destructive role intended for him in a future update. Secondly, the parents bother me. First Haley thinks there is something wrong with their marriage, but apparently they seem to be fine. Dad also seems inconsistent with his views. One moment he says that the kids should cling to their jobs, the next they are walking through the woods and he offers to MC the hometown safety blanket. I also don't like him becoming more aggressive and suspicious, but I understand that they telegraphed what would be happening when they had him find Haley's panties in the MC's room. Mom ended the twisted relationship Haley had with Klaus, but didn't try to help her, protect her, kept a cold attitude towards her own daughter that was practically a child when the teacher raped her. I also don't truly enjoy submissive Haley and her using the word daddy. For some reason it bothers me a lot. All in all, this story is truly masterfully told and I can't wait to see how it ends. I wonder what will be the cannon ending for these devs. But I see a lot of potential tragic, bad ones. I love how they handled MC banging other girls without seeming like a total dick, but it bothered me slightly, first when MC cheated on Sandra with Adriana and then when he got serious feelings for Haley yet just causually bangs Diane. I just couldn't take it and broke all other relationships, with Haley being the only one. I liked Sandra a lot! But I just can't truly envision a three sided polygamous romance between the protagonists. It is either her or Haley, and no cheating on them. I guess if there will be a harem ending, I'd find it nothing more than fan service and not truly a credible conclusion to this story. Naturally, I'm extending my own feelings into the MC and usually in porn games that is rarely what I do, but I can't truly see him with anyone else, or cheating while in a relationship. Love the picture of who I presume is child Haley in the MC's childood room. What else.... Oh I love that Haley can grow pubic hair, but I don't get why it isn't reddish brownish like her hair and skin tone... What else. Oh man, I did not fap while playing this game, I just could not bring myself to do it. It felt wrong for some reason. That is some weird shit, but that is how I felt. Phew, I think I got all that I wanted to say off my chest. Good night folks.

Something tells me the other 3 shoes are waiting to be dropped.

 

[EZ8lt]

This is probably the best incest romance VN game there is. Period. The only minor, slight issues I had with the story were: Jack as the boyfriend. He was nonexistent throughout the novel, and then when Haley officially breaks up with him he becomes Sherlock Holmes that needs to investigate something? The dude could not take a hint that he was in an imaginary relationship where he doesn't see or talk with his girlfriend for a month? I think the more realistic version would be for him to accept the reality, or his role should have been more substantial. But how it played out I see that devs have a destructive role intended for him in a future update. Secondly, the parents bother me. First Haley thinks there is something wrong with their marriage, but apparently they seem to be fine. Dad also seems inconsistent with his views. One moment he says that the kids should cling to their jobs, the next they are walking through the woods and he offers to MC the hometown safety blanket. I also don't like him becoming more aggressive and suspicious, but I understand that they telegraphed what would be happening when they had him find Haley's panties in the MC's room. Mom ended the twisted relationship Haley had with Klaus, but didn't try to help her, protect her, kept a cold attitude towards her own daughter that was practically a child when the teacher raped her. I also don't truly enjoy submissive Haley and her using the word daddy. For some reason it bothers me a lot. All in all, this story is truly masterfully told and I can't wait to see how it ends. I wonder what will be the cannon ending for these devs. But I see a lot of potential tragic, bad ones. I love how they handled MC banging other girls without seeming like a total dick, but it bothered me slightly, first when MC cheated on Sandra with Adriana and then when he got serious feelings for Haley yet just causually bangs Diane. I just couldn't take it and broke all other relationships, with Haley being the only one. I liked Sandra a lot! But I just can't truly envision a three sided polygamous romance between the protagonists. It is either her or Haley, and no cheating on them. I guess if there will be a harem ending, I'd find it nothing more than fan service and not truly a credible conclusion to this story. Naturally, I'm extending my own feelings into the MC and usually in porn games that is rarely what I do, but I can't truly see him with anyone else, or cheating while in a relationship. Love the picture of who I presume is child Haley in the MC's childood room. What else.... Oh I love that Haley can grow pubic hair, but I don't get why it isn't reddish brownish like her hair and skin tone... What else. Oh man, I did not fap while playing this game, I just could not bring myself to do it. It felt wrong for some reason. That is some weird shit, but that is how I felt. Phew, I think I got all that I wanted to say off my chest. Good night folks.

That Jack thing was a fucking joke. The hypster looking apathetic guy without any prospect to the future gets dumped, and then he starts bouncing and making statements like that. Like the fuck he can do. Unless he turns into creepy stalker that goes after them with a binocular, his short lived role is over. I also went with the mostly sole Haley route initially and avoided Adriana, thinking that it could backfire in the future, but once I got into that, I grow to like how it turns from a fuckboi relationship, to a supportive (sex) friendly one. My preference is still Haley alone without any interference, which is rare to me because I'm usually all for a harem, but the updates would be kinda short if it weren't for them honestly

 

[magus448]

Heck Jack was around less than Sandra was, while a reason for breaking up with her too was she was hardly around.

 

[ImperialD]

let's not forget Jack has been and is in touch with Haley's mom .... and dad did notice how close they are getting ... remember it was cute when you 2 where little .. not co cute anymore .. has to mean dad is starting to notice things even offer you money move out on your own away from Haley .. and mom's wondering way Haley broke it off with Jack .. then mom offers you money also to move away from Haley ....

 

[Shatteredimage85]

What happened to the mods for this game?

 

[Walter Victor]

This is probably the best incest romance VN game there is. Period. The only minor, slight issues I had with the story were: Jack as the boyfriend. He was nonexistent throughout the novel, and then when Haley officially breaks up with him he becomes Sherlock Holmes that needs to investigate something? The dude could not take a hint that he was in an imaginary relationship where he doesn't see or talk with his girlfriend for a month? I think the more realistic version would be for him to accept the reality, or his role should have been more substantial. But how it played out I see that devs have a destructive role intended for him in a future update. Secondly, the parents bother me. First Haley thinks there is something wrong with their marriage, but apparently they seem to be fine. Dad also seems inconsistent with his views. One moment he says that the kids should cling to their jobs, the next they are walking through the woods and he offers to MC the hometown safety blanket. I also don't like him becoming more aggressive and suspicious, but I understand that they telegraphed what would be happening when they had him find Haley's panties in the MC's room. Mom ended the twisted relationship Haley had with Klaus, but didn't try to help her, protect her, kept a cold attitude towards her own daughter that was practically a child when the teacher raped her. I also don't truly enjoy submissive Haley and her using the word daddy. For some reason it bothers me a lot. All in all, this story is truly masterfully told and I can't wait to see how it ends. I wonder what will be the cannon ending for these devs. But I see a lot of potential tragic, bad ones. I love how they handled MC banging other girls without seeming like a total dick, but it bothered me slightly, first when MC cheated on Sandra with Adriana and then when he got serious feelings for Haley yet just causually bangs Diane. I just couldn't take it and broke all other relationships, with Haley being the only one. I liked Sandra a lot! But I just can't truly envision a three sided polygamous romance between the protagonists. It is either her or Haley, and no cheating on them. I guess if there will be a harem ending, I'd find it nothing more than fan service and not truly a credible conclusion to this story. Naturally, I'm extending my own feelings into the MC and usually in porn games that is rarely what I do, but I can't truly see him with anyone else, or cheating while in a relationship. Love the picture of who I presume is child Haley in the MC's childood room. What else.... Oh I love that Haley can grow pubic hair, but I don't get why it isn't reddish brownish like her hair and skin tone... What else. Oh man, I did not fap while playing this game, I just could not bring myself to do it. It felt wrong for some reason. That is some weird shit, but that is how I felt. Phew, I think I got all that I wanted to say off my chest. Good night folks.

How do you see a good ending (i.e. the MC and Haley living happily together in an incest-relationship) happening, if it is only the MC and Haley and no other girls. Do they just run away, as Haley has suggested, or do they just bite the bullet and accept the public scorn, or do you envisage another scenario. Personally, I am at a loss as to how the developers might handle that (if they actually plan to), and would like to see if you have any ideas.