VN Ren'Py Completed Haley's Story [v1.1 Pre-Patched] [Viitgames]

[Hadley]

The problem with this Game is that you have pretty much 0 choices. I tried to not date that black girl but I could not stop it.

 

[Trasher2018]

I think there will be a Sandra let down coming, not that I'm against any colored pussy throwing themselves at me in any way shape or form irl or virtually (honestly I'd fuck a green alien if she was good 2 go!) but from what I've seen in the storyline they are going through the paces before sis can't hide her feelings anymore...

Have to agree. I don't have a problem with Sandra being black, she just isn't Haley ^^

 

[Deleted member 167032]

Im more worried about the floating chips...btw i eat with my fork in right hand.. so that is just lovely to see.

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I get the knife thing, you know

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But for gods sake, why is the fork on the right and knife on the left side?!
Makes the game totally unplayable. :FeelsBadMan:

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[mysterious stranger]

Love this game. Which Daz3d set includes Victor's blue vest with green hand print on it?

 

[fortuna95]

The problem with this Game is that you have pretty much 0 choices. I tried to not date that black girl but I could not stop it.

you're right, i would prefer Alana. Hope this is possible later (because her little sister seems to be in the story too).

Saw that also.. sure the Dev will appreciate the bug report.

here's another one, it is MC's car not sister's:

 

[Amahl Farouk]

The pace of this game is excellent, characters are starting to be filled out nicely, I hope the dev keeps at this, very good so far

 

[Darting run]

The problem with this Game is that you have pretty much 0 choices. I tried to not date that black girl but I could not stop it.

This is not the worst I've seen. There's a pretty popular game with a Black MC. I was like: no my dick is not black.

 

[Ekoki]

i like this! keep up the good work dev! : )

 

[blahblah25]

First time playing this VN gotta say not bad but would like more choices I would have liked to dated Sandra’s friend with the great ass instead and for V0.05 there is not a lot of “action” yet but I get they are telling a story but nevertheless good luck to the Dev with his future endeavors

 

[Justanx]

Really like the slow build up. We know Haley wants him, but there are complications. The story is taking us there. THe MC has love interests and dates to make Haley jealous and desire build. Mr 3incher is going to be a pivotal role. You can see how it feels by wanting and needing is shown. Haley hides behind a facade. Really liking this fresh approach to the forbidden fruit. Hope the Dev keeps up the story going to throw some support behind it.

 

[ontach]

I'm all for the slow build up, but there is plenty that could be shown without moving the story along. More bathroom peeks, accidentally bumping into each other... that sort of thing.

Also, someone please tell the dev that an accidental upskirt panty peek is more erotic than parading around in underwear.

Haley is gorgeous and lovable, and the chemistry between the siblings is delightful, so big kudos to the dev for that.

 

[Loatgoan]

potential story, love it go on like that :happyblush

 

[Eerie Entity]

Great update, even better than I dared to expect after the prologue
I just love Haley, such a gorgeous redhead. But I must say, I really really like Sandra too, she's one of the most gorgeous ebony girls I've seen in any game, very sexy body too, not the usual stereotypical body you see in other games and VNs, Sandra is very proportionate, very sexy. And I love her personality, she's very caring, wants to take things slow but is very affectionate, yep, right now she's my second favorite girl in the story easy!
I really do hope that the playful sibling bickering will tone down a notch, it's starting to feel exactly like the bickering between MC and Katie in "Where the Heart Is?" VN, it's fun at first but starts to get on the nerves after a while, or is this also Haley's defense mechanism, does she already fancy her own brother as a romantic interest but can't say it or something, and uses this bickering as a defensive tool to cope for the time being? Haha.
Hope she and MC will find love in each other romantically, but not too soon, at a reasonable and good pace <3

 

[Eerie Entity]

I'm all for the slow build up, but there is plenty that could be shown without moving the story along. More bathroom peeks, accidentally bumping into each other... that sort of thing.

Also, someone please tell the dev that an accidental upskirt panty peek is more erotic than parading around in underwear.

Haley is gorgeous and lovable, and the chemistry between the siblings is delightful, so big kudos to the dev for that.

Well she already saw him in the shower naked and they established that MC's dick is bigger than her boyfriend's 3.5 inch dick. She also caught him watching porn and beating the meat in the living room in the dark, hit the lights on came to watch the porn with him for a moment, haha.
Honestly, This VN has so much great potential even for an incest story, the MC + Haley relationship really doesn't need to venture even to voyeur or none of that between them any time soon, they are both in relationships right now, first let something happen that would trigger these certain feelings for one another, feelings they wouldn't understand right away, and then gradually move forward from there, but it shouldn't come too soon. Let things with MC and Sandra play out, and Haley's relationship with her boyfriend first.

 

[GhostPhil]

Great update, even better than I dared to expect after the prologue
I just love Haley, such a gorgeous redhead. But I must say, I really really like Sandra too, she's one of the most gorgeous ebony girls I've seen in any game, very sexy body too, not the usual stereotypical body you see in other games and VNs, Sandra is very proportionate, very sexy. And I love her personality, she's very caring, wants to take things slow but is very affectionate, yep, right now she's my second favorite girl in the story easy!
I really do hope that the playful sibling bickering will tone down a notch, it's starting to feel exactly like the bickering between MC and Katie in "Where the Heart Is?" VN, it's fun at first but starts to get on the nerves after a while, or is this also Haley's defense mechanism, does she already fancy her own brother as a romantic interest but can't say it or something, and uses this bickering as a defensive tool to cope for the time being? Haha.
Hope she and MC will find love in each other romantically, but not too soon, at a reasonable and good pace <3

Well she already saw him in the shower naked and they established that MC's dick is bigger than her boyfriend's 3.5 inch dick. She also caught him watching porn and beating the meat in the living room in the dark, hit the lights on came to watch the porn with him for a moment, haha.
Honestly, This VN has so much great potential even for an incest story, the MC + Haley relationship really doesn't need to venture even to voyeur or none of that between them any time soon, they are both in relationships right now, first let something happen that would trigger these certain feelings for one another, feelings they wouldn't understand right away, and then gradually move forward from there, but it shouldn't come too soon. Let this with MC and Sandra play out, and Haley's relationship with her boyfriend first.

I agree with a lot of your opinions to games these thys :coldsweat:
The only thing I don't want to see again is Haley's boyfriend... I kind of don't like him x'D

 

[Eerie Entity]

I agree with a lot of your opinions to games these thys :coldsweat:
The only thing I don't want to see again is Haley's boyfriend... I kind of don't like him x'D

I don't like him either, seems like a total loser to me, a complete cuck (let the cucking commense! MC, take your sister immediately!), haha, but jokes aside, she doesn't really seem to fancy him either all that much, otherwise she wouldn't doubt so much and she'd be more excited about him coming over, and he would have not slept on the couch instead rather than in her room, or try to make up a lie that they are both sick, haha.
Pretty sure that relationship is coming to an end fairly soon, maybe she's just thinking how to break it off in a nice way, or maybe she already feels for her brother, but maybe wants to be certain of some things before dumping her loser boyfriend and go after her brother

 

[ontach]

Well she already saw him in the shower naked and they established that MC's dick is bigger than her boyfriend's 3.5 inch dick. She also caught him watching porn and beating the meat in the living room in the dark, hit the lights on came to watch the porn with him for a moment, haha.
Honestly, This VN has so much great potential even for an incest story, the MC + Haley relationship really doesn't need to venture even to voyeur or none of that between them any time soon, they are both in relationships right now, first let something happen that would trigger these certain feelings for one another, feelings they wouldn't understand right away, and then gradually move forward from there, but it shouldn't come too soon. Let this with MC and Sandra play out, and Haley's relationship with her boyfriend first.

They are living together - accidental peeks, slips and bumps can still happen. Like when he tickles her and her boob pops out - that was terrific; we need more stuff like that. Not necessarily for the story, mind you, but for us viewers.

 

[Irgendwie Irgendwo]

she's very caring

Caring, yes, but also a little out there. I mean, throwing out bedsheets and the whole mattress just because of a cold goes a little overboard IMO. I think she just swallowed because she fears it might drip onto the bedsheets. penedeyewink:

 

[User_365148]

Caring, yes, but also a little out there. I mean, throwing out bedsheets and the whole mattress just because of a cold goes a little overboard IMO. I think she just swallowed because she fears it might drip onto the bedsheets. penedeyewink:

I actually think that's true
MC remarks on how clean her house is.
Might be a clean freak in my opinion

 

[Eerie Entity]

They are living together - accidental peeks, slips and bumps can still happen. Like when he tickles her and her boob pops out - that was terrific; we need more stuff like that. Not necessarily for the story, mind you, but for us viewers.

That's a good point, yeah, that I'd like too