VN Ren'Py Completed Haley's Story [v1.1 Pre-Patched] [Viitgames]

[Penfold Mole]

Dining machete XD

As @MrKnobb mentioned that he eats with the fork in his right hand, I doubt that he holds his "machete" in his left at the time. :winkytongue:
I'm also usually holding the fork in my right hand when I eat at home or otherwise informal situation, depending on the type of food. When there's nothing to cut or scoop and adjust on the fork, for example. But I would still hold the fork in my left and knife in my right hand when there is something to cut, even at home. A steak definitely qualifies. So I either put the fork on the left and knife on the right or just both on the right side. Definitely not the knife on the left. Would I be left-handed, I may prefer the knife in my left hand, but I'm not and I haven't asked any left-handed guys about what they prefer.
But really, who cares. Especially when the steak is served with some superconductive potato slices floating above the magnetic plate. :biggrin:

 

[Justanx]

Sibling chicanery is worse than this in some families. Almost ruthless, I can see where some will not like it, but for me I grew up in these same back and forth. I still call my brother in the middle of the night to be a dick. My wife is from a large (12 siblings) family and they get into some burners. No one is safe from the back and forth. Let someone else say one bad thing to them and the whole brood will jump down that clueless person's throat. So I kinda enjoy this VN. It actually makes you feel like its believable (for porn). The subtle nip slip to the shower scene (natural accidents)
In that note I like that MC getting buff and changing. The brother is turning into what Haley really desires. Always what she wanted as they grew up but knew is taboo. Maybe she is living vicariously through the GF.
These kind of VN really are worth supporting. "Big Brother" could have gone this route until greed made the story change. So happy this will not be a grind fest. Well hopefully this can become one of the masterpieces.

 

[215303j]

The only thing i didn't like is the forced relationship with Sandra. I mean she is cool and all but very risky because of her uncle and i don't like the idea of cheating on her since she is such a sweety.

Although I agree with this sentiment, you are not forced into a relationship with Sandra. If you hold back, you won't get the blowjob at least. Hence it stays platonic, for now. Let's see how it progresses!

 

[pgXIII]

So will there be incest in this game?

 

[stgkjsrbgrsb]

Definitely a great game in the making, but I really wish we were allowed to choose who to pursue between Alana and Sandra instead of just being forced towards Sandra. Alana is so hot, and it'd be a huge waste if we can't get with her eventually, and same with Diane for that matter!

 

[friedburger]

So does this game have any lewd content yet or what?

 

[bob32543]

wow lovely

 

[WaltS]

So does this game have any lewd content yet or what?

Read above - BJ from Sandra.

 

[Smexy]

nice game oOps boy oooh boy

 

[Eerie Entity]

How about some oranje juice guyz? Would anyone like some oranJEHHH juice?

Just checking.

Great game so far btw, I'm enjoying it and find the twin sister to be adorable. The MC is a bit on the... spectrum... however. He seems to have no real communication skills or personality and isn't the most likable. Kind of reminds me of the MC from Life With Mary if I'm being honest.

If anyone reminds the MC from "Life With Mary", it's the MC from Alexandra, the MC model after all is the same, and they both talk very little, keeping responses rather short
But yeah, maybe this story's MC is a little awkward or unsure of himself, but can you really blame him when his twin sister is always berating him, even if that is jokingly xD

 

[supermanz95]

If anyone reminds the MC from "Life With Mary", it's the MC from Alexandra, the MC model after all is the same, and they both talk very little, keeping responses rather short
But yeah, maybe this story's MC is a little awkward or unsure of himself, but can you really blame him when his twin sister is always berating him, even if that is jokingly XD

Bruh its just banter

 

[Eerie Entity]

Bruh its just banter

Of course it is, but there's TOO much of it, every conversation they have, there's banter, it's too much, kind of loses the novelty. But, maybe there is a reason why Haley is like that, like in the case of Katie in "Where the Heart Is"

 

[Skylaroo]

Although I agree with this sentiment, you are not forced into a relationship with Sandra. If you hold back, you won't get the blowjob at least. Hence it stays platonic, for now. Let's see how it progresses!

You still are forced into relationship with Sandra. Avoiding blowjob only means your relationship with her is not exactly sexual (yet?). The dating relationship is still forced onto you. It isn't purely platonic either because the summary-scenes mentioned how it was Sandra who kept on delaying/stopping MC's advancement (all these happened without our control). Platonic relationship would indicate more that both sides didn't have sexual interest with each other. But here, the MC does have sexual interest, it just hasn't happened yet if you held back to avoid the blowjob, and that she stopped the MC previously.

There are two issues with the forced relationship to me. The first one is that I really like Sandra as a friend, she can definitely become a best-friend candidate kind of character. Knowing that Haley is my goal (unless the game bamboozled us and not go for MC-Haley relationship), I feel like a dick to date someone I have no interest in. Even the MC in the game didn't show any particular interest in her to begin with, just Sandra liking him, Haley pushing him to ask Sandra out, and then bam they're together. It didn't feel like the MC wanted to be in relationship with Sandra.

The second one is that if MC-Haley relationship is the end-goal, then MC-Sandra relationship would need to be broken up. It sucks to have to break up with a character you like, it's even worse when that character is best-friend candidate. Just look at how nice Sandra has been to MC throughout the game. I feel bad for breaking up with her, especially knowing that she was not even my interest to begin with.

 

[UncleVT]

Let's be a bit realistic here. One thing is what we want to happen and another is what the story tells us. To a boy, virgin, his sister guides him to score first time with a girl and he will consider rejecting her? It doesn't make any sense.
The story so far is carried out very well, with great interaction between the two siblings. Over time we'll see how the relationship developes (Remember the title of the game).
I look forward to the next updates.

 

[215303j]

I feel like a dick to date someone I have no interest in.

I feel bad for breaking up with her, especially knowing that she was not even my interest to begin with.

Agreed 100% on both points.

Maybe my post is a bit wishful thinking...

To a boy, virgin, his sister guides him to score first time with a girl and he will consider rejecting her?

Why not? Even virgin boys can have standards and goals... :test:

 

[Tom10]

Looking better and better after every update ! Solid

 

[ontach]

Why not? Even virgin boys can have standards and goals... :test:

Goals, perhaps, but to suggest that Sandra falls below anyone's standards is pushing it. That chick is hot. And cute. And a nice person. Early days, but a harem route later on has not been ruled out.

One also needs to keep in mind that a serious relationship with Haley is doomed in the long term since she is the MC's sister.

 

[phreadom]

Goals, perhaps, but to suggest that Sandra falls below anyone's standards is pushing it. That chick is hot. And cute. And a nice person. Early days, but a harem route later on has not been ruled out.

One also needs to keep in mind that a serious relationship with Haley is doomed in the long term since she is the MC's sister.

She might be YOUR preference. That doesn't mean she's everyone's. Further, it doesn't matter if she seems nice. It doesn't mean we, as the player, are interested in a relationship with her as we might strongly prefer one of the other characters. Further, while an open/public relationship with Haley may be ruled out, that doesn't mean the player might not want to pursue a private relationship, especially in the context of the game for their own enjoyment.

There have already been a number of people who said that while Sandra seemed nice enough, that she wasn't their primary interest, and being forced into a relationship with her in the game was an irritation. Clearly a number of people here have preferences that mean that Sandra doesn't come first on their list for a variety of reasons.

 

[bagodoughnuts]

Great VN to date. Not upset about cutlery placement, but why a nasty looking VW micro bus?

 

[gamersglory]

So will there be incest in this game?

I'm not saying anything