0.7 update uses "their/your" instead of "they're/you're" a lot. You might want to go back and fix that.
there - location
their - shows possession
they're - contraction of "they are"
your - possession again
you're - contraction of "you are"
'apologies' should be 'apologize'
forth - out/forward
fourth - 4th
I'm enjoying the game so far. You're doing a good job. Keep it up.
Not quite sure why you made the fairy transformation from the original character model instead of the tanned/makeup one, though. Would've looked better.